NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 46-CHAPTER 51 Upd 19th July - Page 5

Originally posted by: lghosh

Do you dare to intimidate 'The Ustaad' in me?

The burning infernos within me, don't you see?

My eyes are the two burning embers of fury,

Now I will be the executioner, judge and jury!

I am determined, I have a promise to keep,

I will save my Begum from all danger deep!

She has suffered too much and I have too,

Hyenas that you all are, laughing at my rue?

I now pledge to myself to see you all in hell,

Even if I have to combat all of you in a duel!

All Your ends are in my hands, I promise so -

This way my word to Heera will remain aglow!

I will fight for Her, my loyal Men, and myself,

Huzoor, now meet the real 'Ustaad' yourself!

You gave me rebirth, you showed me the way,

I take another birth, free from bondage, today!

I looked up to you as my 'Huzoor' with loyalty,

But in return what did I get from such royalty?

Imprisonment in dungeon and death sentence?

You coldly ordered so without any repentance?

My loyal men of valor were of no value to you?

Valued worthy soldiers they are, even you knew!

But for revenge, your blind ego refused to see this,

You forgot everything I did for you in your malice!

Does not my loyalty of ten years mean anything?

You're satisfied to see me grovel in my downswing!

I knelt before you giving up my honor and pride,

I, who, never bow to anyone, but to You, I abide!

But you solemnly rejected both my Begum and I,

I can die but disgrace to her, I can't let that go by!

I will see to it all the vultures are shown their end,

The scheming liars will not get a chance to defend!

Huzoor, this is my confession and promise to you,

I will be victorious in my efforts to be freed anew!

I will overcome and outshine you all for 'Her' sake,

No matter what, my determination will not break!

With a fire burning in my soul and her love in my heart,

My loyal men and I will deftly break these shackles apart!

Lashy, I have to say, so far out of all the edits this is your personal BEST! 👏 Brilliant! That fire burning in his eyes, that fury reflecting, the determination showing, the revolt showcasing...simply splendid! 👍🏼 I looovvveee eeet! I LOVE HIM! Sigh!

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

Omg Lana di 👏👏👏

Heated lines...straight comes from your heart ⭐️

Your loves for Khan sahib shows here...how much his condition affected you...it affected us also.😭

It shows your admiration and believe for him also...Ofcourse he will going to win

Superb, di 👍🏼

Seriously you are gifted by nature...how beautifully you penned down this lines 😳

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

'Don't worry, my love... I am trying... and I will keep you safe!'

Haikus:

1.

The court hall is full

Charges on them were read out

The trial started..

2.

Shaky eye witness

Kunwar and the Courier

Will their words sustain?

3.

His satchel is brought

Akbar uses his option

Shehzaade's farmaan!

4.

Snakey Farooq says

"Sharat not applicable

She's not his Begum!"

5.

His men are tortured

Shehzaade's ego had won

His attitude changed..

6.

He asks for a wish

To avenge those who shamed his wife

In direct combat.

7.

His wish was granted

"You'll fight each other till death!"

Ordered the Prince..

8.

What will happen then?

Given extended life term

He plans strategy

9.

Given the answer

It's an algebraic equation

To prove the result..

Karkuzhali.

Originally posted by: melovesja

Lashy this time your nervous man was needed for readers dear what a nail biting , heart wrenching and blank emotionless feeling it was

Really? 😲Wow... how beautifully you've put it! 👏

and how amazingly you unchained ustaad from all the burden he got from chilhood, he got from hoozoor's care.

Arre wah... another beautiful analogy! Take a bow, dearie...

aplouds for you when all his burden and gratitude fall down to floor and like plain sheet he call former master👏

yes he did.. he has always been that way... very loyal to the hilt... but once someone double-crosses/antagonises him, he is unforgiving!

what a way he find to humiliate and cruse his enemy

Yup!

And Heera masallah⭐️ keep herself as ustad' wife to support him.

She was a true companion to him, each step of the way!

salute to Azeez shah, and all his mate👏 master stroke was the instraction given and under stand in five steps😳

Awww thanks a ton!

how you show a egoistick person go iron hearted man.

Who is this you're talking about dear? 🤔 Shehzaade?

The edit was muaah! tell so much so in one glance at him..👏

Thanks da... I am so so so glad! 🤗 thanks a ton for this Mitu!

Originally posted by: melovesja

chellam can you pls. maake a new edit suitable for dp

thanks in advance.🤗

Originally posted by: lghosh

Do you dare to intimidate 'The Ustaad' in me?

The burning infernos within me, don't you see?

My eyes are the two burning embers of fury,

Now I will be the executioner, judge and jury!

I am determined, I have a promise to keep,

I will save my Begum from all danger deep!

She has suffered too much and I have too,

Hyenas that you all are, laughing at my rue?

I now pledge to myself to see you all in hell,

Even if I have to combat all of you in a duel!

All Your ends are in my hands, I promise so -

This way my word to Heera will remain aglow!

I will fight for Her, my loyal Men, and myself,

Huzoor, now meet the real 'Ustaad' yourself!

You gave me rebirth, you showed me the way,

I take another birth, free from bondage, today!

I looked up to you as my 'Huzoor' with loyalty,

But in return what did I get from such royalty?

Imprisonment in dungeon and death sentence?

You coldly ordered so without any repentance?

My loyal men of valor were of no value to you?

Valued worthy soldiers they are, even you knew!

But for revenge, your blind ego refused to see this,

You forgot everything I did for you in your malice!

Does not my loyalty of ten years mean anything?

You're satisfied to see me grovel in my downswing!

I knelt before you giving up my honor and pride,

I, who, never bow to anyone, but to You, I abide!

But you solemnly rejected both my Begum and I,

I can die but disgrace to her, I can't let that go by!

I will see to it all the vultures are shown their end,

The scheming liars will not get a chance to defend!

Huzoor, this is my confession and promise to you,

I will be victorious in my efforts to be freed anew!

I will overcome and outshine you all for 'Her' sake,

No matter what, my determination will not break!

With a fire burning in my soul and her love in my heart,

My loyal men and I will deftly break these shackles apart!

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

I don't want to chopped off anything.. But still I did one for you.. 😆

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

After reading Chapter 51...

Periyamma wants to cast off all the evil eyes from the Author Sahiba..