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Posted: 7 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: lashy

Oh my Goddd!!!!!!! Manuuu...

diduuu...😃

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: roseraja1915
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Lashy Sahiba, Chapter 49 link is not on the first page.😃
Congrats Baisas and thank you darling author on getting us our new home!

My Kutty Suda Suda comments?

ETA: Oops I missed this somehow on page 8😃

Originally posted by: roseraja1915
An hour and a half of holding my breath and only letting it go when I saw the red-lettered invitation to join you in 2o days' time.😊
We need Manu's gif here!😒
What a heart- rending chapter, Lashy Sahiba.😭
😭 Awww
God! C50 couldn't have piled on enough humiliation on Khan Sahib and Heera than they were already subjected to.😭

All that we feared and more materialized - Khan Sahib failing to convince the Prince of his innocence, our beloved Ustaad being thrown in the dungeon, shackled like an ordinary criminal. How heartbreaking!😭
It is bad!😭
And Heera on her knees , pleading for her husband's life!😭
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That the day should come when we have to see our Akheera , so helpless in a hopeless situation.😭
It was what AMK always warned Heera about... and what she always feared too..
Darling author, please , please tell us that AMK and Heera have seen the worst of it and the chapters hereafter will see them hitting back at the villains, giving them an eye for an eye , a tooth for a tooth. * begging emoji*😊
Awww... 🤗
The extent of our anguish after reading C50 pales in comparison only to the magnificence of the update! 👏 👏 👏
Thank you so much da 🤗

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Sabdabhala

@Sabdabhala

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#83

YET ANOTHER MAGNIFICIENT CHAPTER, AUTHOR SAHIBA ⭐️⭐️

GRIPPING, AS USUAL, SUPERBLY WORDED...EACH AND EVERY SYLLABLE USED PERFECTLY...INVOKING THE RIGHT IMAGES IN OUR MINDS, REALISTIC AND EXCRUCIATINGLY LOGICAL 👏👏 AND THE MOST AMAZING ASPECT FOR ME IS THAT HOWEVER DRAMATIC A SCENE MIGHT BE, YOUR LANGUAGE STAYS SUBTLE AND CLASSY AND STILL DELIVERS ON THE EMOTIONS ⭐️ UFFF

AT THE RISK OF REPETITION, I MUST SAY THAT HOWEVER MANY SCENARIOS I TRY AND IMAGINE, THEY ALL FALL FLAT WITH THE FAMOUS THUD!!! 😆 NOT A SINGLE SHRED OF MY PREDICTION COMES TRUE ...EVER 😆

FOR ME THIS CHAPTER WAS ABOUT REVELATIONS - MANY MANY REVELATIONS, AND, FOR ME, THE HERO OF THIS CHAPTER IS THE SHEHZAADE - I KNOW EVERYONE WILL POUNCE ON ME AFTER READING THIS...BUT I STILL STAND BY MY POV...AND MY COMMENTS SHALL THROW LIGHT ON WHY I FEEL THAT WAY

1. HUZOOR USTAAD INTERACTION REVEALS THE HUZOOR'S SADNESS

- THE OVERPOWERING THEME HERE IS SADNESS THAT THE HUZOOR FEELS...

- YET HE PAINSTAKINGLY EXPLAINS THE LOGIC OF HIS ACTIONS TO THE USTAAD,METHINKS, IN A BID TO MAKE SURE THAT HE AND HIS ACTIONS ARE FULLY UNDERSTOOD BY HIS PROTEGE

- ANY OTHER PERSON WITH THIS CRIME WOULD HAVE FACED MUCH SEVERE CONSEQUENCES

- AND I WOULD EVEN GO A STEP FURTHER TO ASSUME THAT THE HUZOOR HANDED USTAAD'S INVESTIGATION TO FS, IN THE FIRST PLACE, BECAUSE HE TRUSTED HIM, AND ALSO COZ HE KNEW FS LIKED AND RESPECTED THE USTAAD

2. FS USTAAD HUZOOR INTERACTION - REVEALS FS'S DIRTY VENDETTA

- SLIMY FS FOLLOWING PROTOCOL AND GREETING USTAAD WARMLY REVEALS THAT HE WANTS HUZOOR TO CONTINUE THINKING THAT HE LIKES AND RESPECTS AKBAR

- HE EVEN ACTS THAT THESE ALLEGATIONS AGAINST AKBAR HAVE SHOCKED HIM, THE #$##$

- OF COURSE, USTAAD GETS THE PICTURE AND MANAGES TO CONVINCE HUZOOR THAT ALL THAT FS SAYS IS NOT TRUE

- EVEN AT THIS JUNCTURE, THE HUZOOR SEES THE LOGIC AND AGREES WITH USTAAD, AND ACCEPTS THAT THE EVIDENCE MAY NOT BE ALL CORRECT...

-FS IS CONSTANTLY TRYING TO PROVE THAT AKBAR HAS LOST HIS MIND AND THAT HE NEEDS TO BE IMPRISONED...BUT EVERY TIME HUZOOR AGREES WITH USTAAD AND DETERS FS...

3. KHALIL USTAAD FIASCO - REVEALS KHALIL'S FOOLISHNESS AND IMMATURITY. ALSO REVEALS THE FS KUNWAR KHALIL NEXUS

- KHALIL WAS. BROUGHT IN ONLY BECAUSE USTAAD MADE ALLEGATIONS THAT KUNWAR AND KHALIL WERE INVOLVED...AND NOT BECAUSE HUZOOR WANTED TO FURTHER TORMENT KHAN SAHIB IN ANY WAY

- AND ALL THAT RUCKUS HAPPENED COZ THE HUZOOR WAS TRYING TO WRAP HIS MIND AROUND WHAT USTAAD HAD SAID ABOUT KHALIL...WHILE KHALIL QUICKLY DID HIS JIG...I AM ASSUMING THE BIGGER WHAT WAS THE HUZOOR'S REACTION 😆

- GRANTED THAT IT GOT OUT OF HAND AND IT COST THE USTAAD DEARLY, BUT, IN MY OPINION, WHAT IT ALSO REVEALED WAS THE CHINKS IN HUZOOR'S OPINION OF FS, KUNWAR AND KHALIL...WE MIGHT SEE MORE OF THIS IN THE NEXT CHAPTER, I HOPE

4. HUZOOR HEERA INTERACTION - REVEALED HUZOOR'S RESPECT FOR HEERA, AND VICEVERSA

- IT WAS ONLY LOGICAL THAT HEERA BE BROUGHT TO THE CAPITAL AS A PRISONER FOR HER ACTS. I DONT THINK THERE WAS ANY OTHER OPTION HERE

- HEERA'S ACCEPTANCE OF HIS POWER, AUTHORITY AND 'GODLY' STATURE REVEALS HOW MUCH SHE REVERES HER SAHIB AND HIS OPINIONS

- HUZOOR SENT A HUGE ARMY TO MAKE SURE THAT SHE WOULD REMAIN SAFE AND UNHARMED

- HUZOOR WAS CLEARLY IMPRESSED WITH HEERA RIGHT FROM THE WORD GO

- THE KNEELING/ UNVEILING SCENE WAS POIGNANT AND HARSH...AND YET HEERA CAME OUT OF IT UNSCATHED... AND HER STATURE IN HUZOOR'S EYES HAVING MOVED UP QUITE A FEW NOTCHES

- THE FLEETING MENTION THAT THE HUZOOR COULD RESIST HER CHARMS...😆 REVEALS HOW HE WOULD NEVER EVEN THINK OF HER IN ANY UNTHINKABLE WAY

(THE AWE THAT HE HAS FOR HER COZ SHE CAPTURED THE USTAAD'S HEART...😆 SPEAKS VOLUMES - AND HINTS AT THE PRESENCE OF THE GREEN EYED MONSTER ...😆)

- HUZOOR'S EXPLICIT REVELATION THAT HE HAD NOTHING AGAINST HEERA SPOKE VOLUMES, EVEN THOUGH USTAAD WAS STANDING RIGHT THERE IN MANACLES AND CHAINS

- GRANTING KHAN SAHIB ONE NIGHT TO PROVE HIS INNOCENCE REVEALED, YET AGAIN, THAT HUZOOR WAS WILLING TO GO THE EXTRA MILE FOR HIS PROTEGE

- AND KEEPING HIM CHAINED REVEALED HUZOOR'S THOUGHTS ON KHAN SAHIB'S POWERS AND, MAY BE HIS INTENTION THAT THE AWE OF THE SAHIB IN OTHERS' EYES STAYS INTACT

I DIDNOT QUITE FULLY UNDERSTAND THE IMPORTANCE OF THE FARMAAN...YES HEERA WOULD BE SAFELY CARED FOR...BUT THAT IS ONLY AFTER KHAN SAHIB IS NO MORE...SO WHY IS THE SAHIB LOOKING FOR IT NOW??

ANYWAYS, FOR ME THERE ARE TWO MASTERSTROKES OF THIS SUPER SUPER CHAPTER

1. THE HUZOOR'S CONFESSION THAT AS OPPOSED TO ALL OTHERS...HE GENUINELY CARED FOR KHAN SAHIB

2. KHAN SAHIB'S LAMENT THAT THESE TRECHEROUS MEN HAVE DESTROYED THE LEGACY OF THE USTAAD WHICH WAS SO VITAL FOR THE HUZOOR, HIS SAFETY, AND HIS ASPIRATIONS

WHAT BOTH OF THEM DONT REALIZE IS HOW MUCH THEY HAVE LOST INDIVIDUALLY,

IN MY OPINION, THE HUZOOR MORE THAN KHAN SAHIB...

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: hazoorkidpan

author sahiba your kind attn please mercy,mercy plz restore our AMK and HEERA'glory and pride.

Originally posted by: hazoorkidpan
A humble request to author sahiba do wave your magic wand and restore our leads to the pristine glory they deserve. DO not victimize them thus!

Awww... Rupinder!

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greater the rise from fall, greater the glory will it be for the couple...

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IshqHaiWoEhsaas

@IshqHaiWoEhsaas

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: lashy
greater the rise from fall, greater the glory will it be for the couple...

I don't know what rise/fall is being talked about here, but I kinda fell for this sentence! Wow! ❤️

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#86

I loved the very refreshing take, Lavanya... 👏

Only thing, I wouldn't call Shehzaade the hero of this chapter because that'd undermine what AMK truly is... All of the characteristics that you've listed below, AMK has in abundance - and yet enough humility & insight not to allow ego dictate him and his actions when judging others/his own men etc - (which the Shehzaade sorely lacks)

Instead, I'd say Shehzaade had the most 'interesting' parts - simply because one could never guess what his next emotion or move would be! I.e. Unpredictable...

Btw, Shehzaade watching Heera kneel and beg and plead, was purely to get his fanatical thirst for his vendetta against a 'Hindu' girl quenched , which both Heera & AMK had guessed...

The rest of it, of course, he was trying to be fair to someone he truly cared for...

1) Appointing FS because he cares for AMK (it's been explicitly mentioned)

2) Even as he's getting annoyed with AMK's vagueness/aggression etc, he knows that it'd have been Khalil who would've said things to instigate AMK (Even at the end, his approach towards both is starkly different)

3) He doesn't blindly trust FS and makes his own decision.

Shehzaade's undoing is his special harshness in dealing with AMK - purely to satiate his own hurting ego!

Originally posted by: Sabdabhala

I DIDNOT QUITE FULLY UNDERSTAND THE IMPORTANCE OF THE FARMAAN...YES HEERA WOULD BE SAFELY CARED FOR...BUT THAT IS ONLY AFTER KHAN SAHIB IS NO MORE...SO WHY IS THE SAHIB LOOKING FOR IT NOW??

Isn't it obvious with every day that goes by, that AMK is closer to death? Shehzaade has made it clear, Khalil has hinted it - the punishment for treason in any country has always been death, Lavanya😊

Even if by any chance, the Shehzaade changed his mind and showed leniency, the minimum is AMK spending the rest of his life in the dungeons - So, when they have only one day of court hearing (unlike the courts today😆) he needs that 'promise' Farmaan - to ensure Heera is let go na. Her insurance.

AMK has been trying every trick inside and outside the book to get himself heard/free etc... but NOTHING is working and he has NO help whatsoever... he has to accept the fact that might be his last meeting with Heera tomorrow na... because who knows what'd happen after the court hearing?

ANYWAYS, FOR ME THERE ARE TWO MASTERSTROKES OF THIS SUPER SUPER CHAPTER

1. THE HUZOOR'S CONFESSION THAT AS OPPOSED TO ALL OTHERS...HE GENUINELY CARED FOR KHAN SAHIB

Of course... problem is when narcissists and megalomaniacs truly care for someone they expect absolute servitude.. and even the slightest hint of betrayal will be given back with harshest retaliation. Dangerous befriending such sort of people!

2. KHAN SAHIB'S LAMENT THAT THESE TRECHEROUS MEN HAVE DESTROYED THE LEGACY OF THE USTAAD WHICH WAS SO VITAL FOR THE HUZOOR, HIS SAFETY, AND HIS ASPIRATIONS

WHAT BOTH OF THEM DONT REALIZE IS HOW MUCH THEY HAVE LOST INDIVIDUALLY,

IN MY OPINION, THE HUZOOR MORE THAN KHAN SAHIB...

Of course, which is why the line -
The question was a loaded one indeed. And the angels above would admit - that lately, while alone, it was the one question Shehzaade seemed to be asking himself a lot. i.e. that - 'I have no agenda... no vendetta against you... never have, never will... can you say that for ANY other man here?'
He knows AMK is priceless...
I'll come back to the rest of your points Lavanya! Also need to respond to your Ajnabee!🤗

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: IshqHaiWoEhsaas

I don't know what rise/fall is being talked about here, but I kinda fell for this sentence! Wow! ❤️

☺️ Finally... something that I can call my own!

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

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Thank you so so much, Periyamma, for spearheading this campaign to demand the end of Akheera's agony.😃
Fervently hoping this petition, filed on our behalf ,to urge the author to do the needful so that the HBAS Baisas can be a happy lot again brings the desired result.👍🏼 🤗

😆 'Hayooo' like Rosejaan often goes!

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Author Sahiba's horse is just trotting...At this rate , it will take one month for the horseman to reach the capital..
But that is not me... that is the tuguduk tuguduk messenger 😆
There is every chance of Khalil attacking him and seizing the appeal..
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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#90

Lashy di

Brilliant chapter ...as always .

Finally everything is clear infront of khan sahib ...so quickly he figure out who is behind in all this.

After all he is Ustaad .

Shehzaade ...no matter what I feel he still care of khan sahib ...sadness in his eyes speak lot.

Every movement he is judging khan sahib every expression and body language.

Khan Sahib one mistake effected him because he used to care about him...not like others .

If any other one in his place shehzaade never take time to give them punishment.

Shehzaade is not blindly believe in every false accusations but khan sahib did mistake nodoubt in that ...one small mistake over shadow his good deeds too.

I might be wrong please correct me.

Farooq sahib ...what can I say about him.

Khan Sahib saw little hope inform of him but how brutally he crush that tiny hope.

How fondly khan sahib greeted him...it was so painful for him to saw farooq sahib betrayed him just because he is Mansabdar of Parnagarh .

Farooq sahib who supported and recommended him as a ustaad now the same man betrayed him.

Khan Sahib must felt cornered...nothing is going right for him.

Farooq sahib and Khalil managed to bring false evidences...nodoubt farooq sahib knows ustaad too well.

He knows when and how to framed ustaad completely .

Seriously he doesn't even let khan sahib speak in infront of Shehzaade .

Khan Sahib got that... that's why he had to reveal Mahendra and Khalil friendship .

Thank god shehzaade still trust his boy...

God this Khalil ...I don't know how much I hate this disgusting person.

His evil intentions are no boundaries...

He knows khan sahib weakest spot that's why he continued to hit that spot...poor Khan Sahib ...he tried his best to control himself but at last he lost his mind.

He knows his outburst cost him lot but he couldn't help it...khalil deserved that.

God knows how could farooq sahib support him in the name of religion ...

Can't he see how Khalil disrespecting someone else wife .

But yes just because of him only khan sahib got to know lot of things ...like farooq sahib joined hands with Khalil , Heera is also dragged into this mess.

Poor Khan Sahib ...I just couldn't imagine his state of mind...if anyone else in his place could have lost it.

Thankfully heera reached capital safely...but physically and mentally stressed .

It was painful to read how she wished to visit capital as a little girl ...but sadly destiny always planned different .

Gauri ...what a great friend she is...thank god she accompanied heera .

She is friend who didn't support you blindly but yes she is always with you in good or bad days .

I wish her prayer fulfill .

Hats off to heera ...how smartly she handle herself infront of twenty people .

Awesome Conversation between her and shehzaade .

I like the way both first studied each other properly.

And the heera reply to mehandra was too good.

Finally khan sahib and heera come face to face .

How much both wanted to comfort each other but alas they just couldn't.

Seriously humiliation khan sahib felt when he dragged like that infront of his enemies and his wife...we just can't imagine .

To make it more worst was that heera unveiled herself infront of everyone and begged for his husband life.

Heera is one self-respect girl who doesn't show her tears infront of her people in her bad situation .

But what an irony now she has to begged infront of her enemies .

Rightly said everyone has their weakest point ...both khan sahib and heera reached there.

It was more than worst for khan sahib to see heera like that and for heera to see khan sahib like that .

Despite all that both love birds silently supported each other .

There presence only gave them power to fight back.

How beautifully both can read each other unspoken words.

But I must say khan sahib each sentence was powerful.

I just love the way he replied every time.

That's why shehzaade just couldn't ignore his point .

Finally after lot of pleading shehzaade give him one chance but with lots of conditions .

Ofcourse shehzaade knows his Ustaad's capabilities.

But atleast he give him tiny hope...and I am very sure khan sahib utilities that chance after all his love ones life depends on that.

One thing i wanted to mention Ustaad's enemies show their all cards and now Ustaad's knows his all enemies well now his time to show his cards.

His enemies started this dirty game now Ustaad's teach them how to played it.

They all forgot he is Ustaad's of everyone .

But yes it take time and we all going to wait patiently for that time.

'There have been better days, of course' Akbar forced through half-a-smile.

I felt so bad when Khan Sahib told this sentence.

Touching one.

he would have to be no less than a God, if he could make the likes of Akbar Mahmoud Khan bow to his command.

, she would have to be no less than unique, if she could entice the heart of an unshakable man like Akbar Mahmoud Khan!

I like both above sentences.

How both shehzaade and heera related each other to khan sahib.

Lashy di

I might missed so many important point but yes chapter was just brilliant.

Very beautifully presented every character .

Dialogues are superb .

Each character shows their importance .

I like the both edits too.

Beautifully put in between the chapter .

First one khan sahib and shehzaade. ...it shows both involved in serious conversation .

Second one is heart wrenching .

I felt like crying .

At last thank you so much for the update .

Love you .

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