NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~ THREAD 45 Chapter50 - Page 104

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Hiding Behind a Stranger- Ch: 50

To know about the Baisa's reactions after reading chapter 50, they were asked to write their short comments , sign , and deposit in a box kept in the HBAS house for that purpose..Within a short period, the box was filled with their ideas/comments about the chapter.. But tragically, the house was flooded with their tears, particularly of those of Lana who shed litres and litres of tears.

Unfortunately the papers got drenched in the tears and the signatures were washed away. But we were able to retrieve the pieces of papers with the original comments and found them legible though faded.

Can you please find out who wrote each one?

1. But still there is two thing I'm so so happy about one is Khalil crawling and gurgling on the floor, for air and other one is Heera's response to Mahender. 🤪 😆 But ... you said it's more than 13000 words? Are you sure? 🤔 You didn't cheat us right? CHELLAM

2. Oh my god 😭

I have no words how much I cried for their pain

But it felt good to know that shehzada was afraid to let AMK loose even for 1 day

Yeh khauf mujhe acha laga 😆 SWETII@MUSKAN

3. Just finished reading the chapter ...I can't describe how I am feeling right now ...

Let me calm my nerves first ...then I might able to write something 😭

"..he would have to be no less than a God, if he could make the likes of Akbar Mahmoud Khan bow to his command." BINDUP

".. she would have to be no less than unique, if she could entice the heart of an unshakable man like Akbar Mahmoud Khan! "

I like both above sentences.

How both shehzaade and heera related each other to khan sahib. bindup

4.Victimized, Cornered, Betrayed, Entrapped, Framed!! 😭 LANA

5. if u do not mind I have some questions...

Was it demands of the story to let a noble woman like her on her knee ?

How would the couple cope later when they could come out of all this mess...?

Would they ever lead a normal life without getting the glimpse of this sheer humiliation.. AMITAPRASAD.

6. ...enemies were well learnt from him to fix him.

prince has all love, hurt, emotion towerds ks and we see brife view of his knowing , understanding and interpreting people👏

no where you make any one less. MITU

7. I want the three devils khalil, mahendar and buddha faroukh to suffer till eternity for their deeds. As far as shehzaade is concerned, only one thing comes to my mind and that is "vinaash kale vipareet buddhi"😕 DIVYADAYA13

(please don't make them cry anymore ,don't make us cry anymore If you'd add me to the story I'd teach them a life time lesson 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 )

8. Interesting spin of events, how things went from solitary confinement to dungeons to the royal court and finally getting a chance for proving himself n his begum sahiba.

Well portrayed human emotions n the scenes how you chalked them out one by one.

Heart wrenching to see Heera's plight in the royal court especially in front of her husband, nt an ordinary man but ustaad himself to see her in that state and the same for him too, brought in shackles. Nothing as humiliating as that would have been for both of them. APARNA

9. An hour and a half of holding my breath and only letting it go when I saw the red-lettered invitation to join you in 20 days' time

The extent of our anguish after reading C50 pales in comparison only to the magnificence of the update! 👏 👏 👏 ROSE

10. A humble request to author sahiba do wave your magic wand and restore our leads to the pristine glory they deserve. DO not victimize them thus! RUPINDER @ HAZOORKIDPAN

11.

Somehow the Shehzade dominated Chapter 50, overshadowing the irresistible presence of even THE man throughout.In all, a very happening chapter!👏 SANDY BEGUM

12. This Chapter was about revelations-Many manyrevelations,and for me, the Hero of the chapter is the Shehzaade-

For me there are two master strokes of this super super chapter LAVANYA

1. The Huzoor's confession that as opposed to all others..He genuinely cared for Khan sahib

2. Khan Sahib's lament that these treacherous men have destroyed the legacy of the Ustaad which was so vital for the huzoor, his safety and his aspirations..

What both of them don't realise is how they have lost individually

In my opinion, the Huzoor more than Khan Sahib..

13.

😭

😒😔

Can't say anything else,now!😭 BOND @ BINDU

14. isn't it not fair for AMK to be in this situation DUHASAAD

I feel so bad for him 😭😭

poor heera she's now wishing for his life every second

15....and that Khalil and the other one the mehender "I forget how to type it 😆😆😆" I really hate them VATHSY

AMk's plight is worrisome as Shehzade does not seem to be listenting to his explanations. What a plight to be in.😭

16. What a chapter the Author Sahiba has penned! PERIYAMMA

A mixture of emotions, tact, pathos, love and lot to commend..

17. What have you done to both my darlings re! 😭 It was very painful, really. First of all, I cannot imagine that all this actually happened, but you know what, it was as real as it could be. If it was all fairy-tale-ish, the real essence would be lost, so as much as it was painful, it was realistic and that is what i loved the most..NAMSIKA @ NAMS

18. Dear author, you continued to twist the knife ever so slowly in the wound in Part 2. Our beloved couple feeling the utter shame and humiliation of the other when they finally met in the hall. Domo arigatou gozaimasu ( Thank you very much in Japanese) ROSE

19. For not an instance I could help myself being thrilled and sitting at the edge of my seat, while each and every words gave a heavy jerk inside.

There is hardly a space to stop and take breath while reading this chapter... right from the starting scene of the confrontation between Akbar and the prince it continues to give enough goose-bumps. STUTI

20.Why did you do that to our Khan Sahib???😡😭Wasn't 20 day confinement enough,now dungeons,rags,chained can't even explain how that felBut I am so proud of Durga .She fought so bravely👏 .Just one request whenever you plan please make khalil's death the most painful and merciless one .😡 KUKI

21.I m speechless buddy RAHIRAMESH

I m so agonised by the torches these leads are going through which is truly or through your awesome writing

Hope something bright comes up in the next chapter ...

KK.

Originally posted by: lghosh

The torment within me is nothing compared to what I saw,

When you unveiled, knelt and begged, that image it gnaw-

In my mind all this while unable to do anything but repent,

For all that you had to go through for me, I highly resent!!

For you my dear I will bring heaven to Earth, only if I can,

And send these vultures to their doom, this group of Satan!

Wait with patience my love, do not give up hope, I never do,

With Lord's blessings, there will be a way to shine through!

Originally posted by: lghosh

The torment within me is nothing compared to what I saw,

When you unveiled, knelt and begged, that image it gnaw-

In my mind all this while unable to do anything but repent,

For all that you had to go through for me, I highly resent!!

For you my dear I will bring heaven to Earth, only if I can,

And send these vultures to their doom, this group of Satan!

Wait with patience my love, do not give up hope, I never do,

With Lord's blessings, there will be a way to shine through!

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Hiding Behind a Stranger- Ch: 50

To know about the Baisa's reactions after reading chapter 50, they were asked to write their short comments , sign , and deposit in a box kept in the HBAS house for that purpose..Within a short period, the box was filled with their ideas/comments about the chapter.. But tragically, the house was flooded with their tears, particularly of those of Lana who shed litres and litres of tears.

Unfortunately the papers got drenched in the tears and the signatures were washed away. But we were able to retrieve the pieces of papers with the original comments and found them legible though faded.

>>>>😆

Can you please find out who wrote each one?

1. But still there is two thing I'm so so happy about one is Khalil crawling and gurgling on the floor, for air and other one is Heera's response to Mahender. 🤪 😆 But ... you said it's more than 13000 words? Are you sure? 🤔 You didn't cheat us right?

Kalgi

2. Oh my god 😭

I have no words how much I cried for their pain

But it felt good to know that shehzada was afraid to let AMK loose even for 1 day

Yeh khauf mujhe acha laga 😆

Manu

3. Just finished reading the chapter ...I can't describe how I am feeling right now ...

Let me calm my nerves first ...then I might able to write something 😭

"..he would have to be no less than a God, if he could make the likes of Akbar Mahmoud Khan bow to his command."

".. she would have to be no less than unique, if she could entice the heart of an unshakable man like Akbar Mahmoud Khan! "

I like both above sentences.

How both shehzaade and heera related each other to khan sahib. bindup

Bindu

4.Victimized, Cornered, Betrayed, Entrapped, Framed!! 😭 Lana

5. if u do not mind I have some questions...

Was it demands of the story to let a noble woman like her on her knee ?

How would the couple cope later when they could come out of all this mess...?

Would they ever lead a normal life without getting the glimpse of this sheer humiliation...

6. ...enemies were well learnt from him to fix him.

prince has all love, hurt, emotion towerds ks and we see brife view of his knowing , understanding and interpreting people👏

no where you make any one less.

7. I want the three devils khalil, mahendar and buddha faroukh to suffer till eternity for their deeds. As far as shehzaade is concerned, only one thing comes to my mind and that is "vinaash kale vipareet buddhi"😕

Savi

(please don't make them cry anymore ,don't make us cry anymore If you'd add me to the story I'd teach them a life time lesson 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 )

8. Interesting spin of events, how things went from solitary confinement to dungeons to the royal court and finally getting a chance for proving himself n his begum sahiba.

Well portrayed human emotions n the scenes how you chalked them out one by one.

Heart wrenching to see Heera's plight in the royal court especially in front of her husband, nt an ordinary man but ustaad himself to see her in that state and the same for him too, brought in shackles. Nothing as humiliating as that would have been for both of them. Me

9. An hour and a half of holding my breath and only letting it go when I saw the red-lettered invitation to join you in 20 days' time

The extent of our anguish after reading C50 pales in comparison only to the magnificence of the update! 👏 👏 👏 Rose

10. A humble request to author sahiba do wave your magic wand and restore our leads to the pristine glory they deserve. DO not victimize them thus! Rupinder

11.

Somehow the Shehzade dominated Chapter 50, overshadowing the irresistible presence of even THE man throughout.In all, a very happening chapter!👏

12. This Chapter was about revelations-Many manyrevelations,and for me, the Hero of the chapter is the Shehzaade- Lavanya

For me there are two master strokes of this super super chapter

1. The Huzoor's confession that as opposed to all others..He genuinely cared for Khan sahib

2. Khan Sahib's lament that these treacherous men have destroyed the legacy of the Ustaad which was so vital for the huzoor, his safety and his aspirations..

What both of them don't realise is how they have lost individually

In my opinion, the Huzoor more than Khan Sahib..

13.

😭

😒😔

Can't say anything else,now!😭

Bond

14. isn't it not fair for AMK to be in this situation

I feel so bad for him 😭😭

poor heera she's now wishing for his life every second

15....and that Khalil and the other one the mehender "I forget how to type it 😆😆😆" I really hate them

AMk's plight is worrisome as Shehzade does not seem to be listenting to his explanations. What a plight to be in.😭

16. What a chapter the Author Sahiba has penned!

A mixture of emotions, tact, pathos, love and lot to commend..

17. What have you done to both my darlings re! 😭 It was very painful, really. First of all, I cannot imagine that all this actually happened, but you know what, it was as real as it could be. If it was all fairy-tale-ish, the real essence would be lost, so as much as it was painful, it was realistic and that is what i loved the most.. Nams

18. Dear author, you continued to twist the knife ever so slowly in the wound in Part 2. Our beloved couple feeling the utter shame and humiliation of the other when they finally met in the hall. Domo arigatou gozaimasu ( Thank you very much in Japanese) Rose

19. For not an instance I could help myself being thrilled and sitting at the edge of my seat, while each and every words gave a heavy jerk inside.

There is hardly a space to stop and take breath while reading this chapter... right from the starting scene of the confrontation between Akbar and the prince it continues to give enough goose-bumps.

20.Why did you do that to our Khan Sahib???😡😭Wasn't 20 day confinement enough,now dungeons,rags,chained can't even explain how that felBut I am so proud of Durga .She fought so bravely👏 .Just one request whenever you plan please make khalil's death the most painful and merciless one .😡 Kuki

21.I m speechless buddy

I m so agonised by the torches these leads are going through which is truly or through your awesome writing

Hope something bright comes up in the next chapter ...

KK.

Originally posted by: lghosh

The torment within me is nothing compared to what I saw,

When you unveiled, knelt and begged, that image it gnaw-

In my mind all this while unable to do anything but repent,

For all that you had to go through for me, I highly resent!!

For you my dear I will bring heaven to Earth, only if I can,

And send these vultures to their doom, this group of Satan!

Wait with patience my love, do not give up hope, I never do,

With Lord's blessings, there will be a way to shine through!

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Oh my Khan Sahib..😭 😭 😭 What can this mere Baisa do for you than crying..😭 😭 😭