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Originally posted by: melovesja
congratulations lashy shahiba and baisas.🤗 for each step towards half century.
lashy this one is cold waves .very coldly hit emotions and touch the heart to feel those cold strome and we were burning like fire to bare them with leads. Goodness you wrote eachone's emotion with that balance that while reading one have to absorb it without being jugemental. 👏⭐️At starting with those tense senario beautifully show the Man of not only return but with no news and you deeply connect our emotion with them. definetly Khan shahib must not fail that misrably in his presenting power and thinking went high on what happened what i loved the most was shahiba felt that tramour when army arrives. each and every step we feel farsight of ks we can saw patiet but strong leader. salam to my baisa's decision not to leave her people and later on step to save his life . truly stand as ustad's wife. loved how she remeber circel for third time and how his men with her and truly accept as their shahiba and the power of his man with ' only thirty man will allowed.' Adab to mirza shahib for his silent stand and calm decision to manage everything but strongly protect her. ms and Heera part was touchy. really understand her like he understand Akber and respect her , droplets of emotion shows how he is connect with her as bhabhijaan andfeel proud at her as leader.👏 read her mind while mob activity.leaving scan of Heera was make my heart heavy and scraching of those bags was terring. those hurt and narajgi but still duty come first for gauri. then bindiya and maharaj kakasa. how she say about her shahib and kakasa feel about heera and then she went with his man.dont hit me but for a fleec of sec. i feel some part as she left after her marraige. execelenly show mob mentality👏 that with one reason people forget all goodness her torrment was heart crushing and mohan banna's entry.👏 his command and power to aweak them.bring calmness and happiness to her heart before leaving. cadder of her loyals were hurt but not left her.side by side two soulmats go through hardship of unknown featuer.what to say about cold treatment to khan shahib and draw a pic of his najarbandi👏 enough to broke anyone but his calmness ask salute .after all this his trust in hoozur and he thought of who se hand behind all.Both were lone again and their love only gave them strangth and that you deepict so lovely.loved shahzade and ks scan . His clossness towards prince and his step back to keep his emotion in control against ks tricks. eyeing the room to check ks agressivness.looking at him to check his calmnes s.he is their to question and he may take days time to gaze any dent done by ks to gain anything or against him.as he knows his power and when he feels convinece he called Heera to know her intence.👏shahzade somewhere feels himself second against Heera for ks.🤗 waiting next . i read discution over updating time as reader 20 days crush on curiocity but same time I love to read your ans. and discution which i don't want miss and want you healthy and enerjatic like joy😉 go as per your convinence.❤️
Mitu di 🤗
Beautiful and long review 👏
I enjoyed reading it.
Vasthy di 🤗
Welcome back 😳
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