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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: lghosh


Now from Rosejaan expect this reaction as far as her romance with IM goes!! 😉🤣 Double thumbs up! 👍🏼 😆

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Posted: 7 years ago

Finally... tumne 7th June bataayaa thaa... and here you are on the 7th!
How did they go?😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy


Why this expression, Chellam?😆

Oh you don't know?? 😒
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: lghosh



First of all, a fabulous edit!! 👏 So vivid and detailed and made to fit the scene perfectly right from the rug to the geometric patterns on the ceilings.

When I meant 'edit' - it means it's a digital image already done by some Digital gaming expert... or some website etc etc...
I use them and edit the parts out or blend/merge some parts in to suit HBAS basss...
so, I don't deserve any credit for those... but yes, as soon as I saw the picture, I got excited!

The focal point is, of course, the four poster bed right ahead of the room! Whether a palatial room or small cell, a prison is and will always remain a prison! No window anywhere, even during daytime it is all dark! I can see the frail embers of light peeping through the small openings high up on the wall! And the only source of light is a small lamp in one corner of the room! They have kept him in the dark figuratively and literally! Even the lattice window is dimmed with hazy glass next to the bed. Dark and dingy comes to the mind even if it is like the Sultan's harem! 😔

Yes.. it is a prison!

Ok, koschun, did you put the scattered rose petals on the floor and the empty frames next to the lamp? If so, why? His love seems to have been scattered all over by these vultures? He is trying to assemble them but they are not letting him? And empty frames symbolizing the emptiness of his frame of mind, his frame of life at present, the frame of his position in Shehzade's eyes right now? 😒 My CS!!

No... as I said those were part of the picture already... but it'd have taken me too long to sit and edit out those details too... so I didn't...
For some reason, I liked the empty picture frames... and left it as is..
I liked the explanation you've given!

Lovely edit Lashy!! 👏 Loved every corner of it! Also, the polar rug stands apart with its presence! I can see AMK pacing on it back and forth! Maybe doing some pushups as well! 😃

Loool looking back it could've been a lion/deer or tiger rug - chances of finding an imported polar bear rug in India would be extremely rare..
Nevertheless, it's only for an idea... so 😆
Thanks da 🤗


Originally posted by: lghosh



The poem is superb Lashy!! So apt and has such a melancholy mood! So this is Heera's mood while traversing the tragic journey to the capital!! 😔
As her love is keeping him alive and going so is his memories keeping her going with an ignite burning in her heart! 😒

>>>😒

The picture also captures the sullen mood perfectly! 👍🏼 Looks like an American Indian painting!

Yes... I saw a couple and I loved them!

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Oh you don't know?? 😒


No 😒
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Posted: 7 years ago


Originally posted by: karkuzhali


Red:
In fact the distributors should insist that the movie should be for Adults only and not a kid's affair!


😲

Originally posted by: Bindu.

Lashy di,loved the edit of AMK's royal prison!⭐️ Poor him,the punishment is indeed tailor-made for him!


Thanks da 🤗 and thanks Lavanya!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Good day to all! 😃
Beautiful edit work Madame Author! 👏

This splendid chamber reminds me of the Beauty and the Beast somehow...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Bindu.

No..no..no,forget 20 days,it seems impossible to wait even for two days,di.I wish,I could read all the chapters till the end right now!

>>> I wish I could write that fast too!!!😆

Chapter 49: I don't remember crying so much,reading a story in recent times.Last chapter too was emotional but this one is something else,altogether!😭 Was shedding tears in pain and then in relief with Mohan Banna's entry.

Really? 🤗Awww

I was wondering where the only person whom AMK trusted to confide the truth was,in a situation like this, and he didn't disappoint me.
Gosh,I didn't know he exuded so much power and authority amongst the Parnagarhis!⭐️ I can understand how blessed and relieved Heera must've felt with Mohan Banna's support.
Yes... he does... always did! With his leg problems, he hasn't been as 'involved' with everything... but now that he's healed.. he's back to 😎
You know... I always felt this way - he refers to her as a younger 'sister' and she says older 'brother'
But in his mind, I'd feel, Mohan banna respects her like he would a mother!😊 Especially now that she's healed him..

It's our Ustaad's sheer intelligence and foresight that made this possible.My respect for AMK gets multiplied with each chapter,di!!⭐️
Of course... no two ways about it!😎

Before the arrival of the troop from capital,even Parnagarhis,men and women,young and old, stood in support of their Baisa,uplifting Heera's morale and in a way,helping her decide the immediate future course of action.Their love for Heera was heart-warming.So was the staunch loyalty of Ustaad's men for their Sahib and Sahiba.I could clearly visualize the human shield formed.
Yes... they have been quite supportive of her in all ways from the start except when AMK came home as a Mansabdar - but even then, the resistance wasn't so bad... this time however, they felt betrayed!

My sahib too is leading them from the front despite his injured state!😳
😆 undoubtedly!

Heera was forced to experience a plethora of emotions,high and low in a span of few hours.Both the husband and wife are staying strong and sane for each other. Soulmates in true sense!⭐️👏
Yup... 👍🏼 Had AMK seen his young wife today, he would have been so so proud! His latest student is a star pupil!😉

I understand the hurt,disbelief and betrayal her people might've felt when the truth was out in such a harsh way.But,pelting stones and sticks at the Baisa who's always had their best interests at heart,is appalling!
>>>😭

I wish at least Gauri understood Heera who was more like a friend rather than a baisa.She knew more than what others did about the relation of AMK and Heera.How could anyone even think Heera would do anything that insults the sacrifice of her sister.When anger gets better of us,we fail to think or act rationally.That's what happened with all the people of Parnagarh including the maids and Gauri.
👏
Actually, even before I'd written out all that lamba lamba explanation you have said in 1 sentence what I tried to explain - anger and ego always get the better of us.. put it aside for a few seconds and you can see things much clearer!

Part 2: AMK was merely house-arrested and was not being questioned.So called friends of Khalil lied just to derive pleasure out of Heera's suffering. 😡😡
He is being held there for questioning only na😒

FS seems to have corrupted Shehzaade's mind. Else,why would Shehzaade not give a chance to his best and the most loyal man to explain himself.I wonder if he was really out on an urgent issue or that was just his punctured pride and ego that made AMK wait for 20 days.
Hmmm wait and watch da!

Huzoor is not showing himself as disappointed or angry.He is kind of cold and acting indifferent.This definitely smells trouble..
That is true!

Has he blissfully forgotten the loyalty of Akbar towards him for all these years?
Wait and watch is all I can say for now...

And why did he send thousand men to deliver a message to Heera?
This one I already answered!😳

Did Khalil get success in creating a fake evidence?AMK knows it's the plot of someone with guts and smarts.But he hasn't zeroed upon the actual culprit,yet.I'm dying to know what's gonna happen,di.So many questions and all I get as an answer is W&W or TWT!😒
Hayoo you already predicted most of my answers! 🤣

Why did AMK suddenly grew restless?Did the possibility of what actually happened strike him?
Yes... ❤️
till then his heart had told him nothing - it hadn't beaten erratically... but then it did.. he can sense something has happened/is happening to HER. It made him restless...

The star of the update,according to me is Mohan Banna!👏⭐️ The way you've described his persona,attitude and his support for AkHeera was extraordinary! Mirza bhaijaan too was a ⭐️!
Of course.. 😳😆
and we've heard plenty of 'darlings' and whatnots from Rosejaan for IM already!

The only thing that amused me in the chapter was Huzoor taking a peek at AMK's nails.😆Well,he is not an ordinary person you are dealing with,Mr.Huzoor.Who knows it better than you?He is one in a million!⭐️
😎

Thanks for this wonderful and emotional update,di.You keep outdoing yourself,with each chapter.⭐️

The main drama is about to unfold in the capital,the very place where our story began.Will be waiting with restless heart to read further!😆 But I know our leads would emerge out of this as winners,stronger and happier!
Just remember this last line and thanks a ton for everything sweetie... love you loadssess and loadsses 🤗

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Durgeshnandini.


Good day to all! 😃
Beautiful edit work Madame Author! 👏

This splendid chamber reminds me of the Beauty and the Beast somehow...


Actually you are right... it could very well be... 👏
She is a glorified prisoner... the rose petals where he must find love before the last rose falls... the empty frames because the 'Beast' or the 'prince' does not want to see his face that reminds him of who he once was (before the curse)
and then, it was in the cold part of France that this is meant to have taken place, right?
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Posted: 7 years ago
@ Bindup


Started with a bang, she did.. with a quotation and all...

I thought above quotation is perfect for describing heera and khan sahib present situation .
How fast we judge everyone na...we always forget in what situation other people's are going on and one small mistake we ready to question other...it took years to built trust but one small tough decision broke years built trust.
It always is the case, Bindup. Even amongst family. That is exactly what AMK had said too! And why he suddenly got so anxious...

But one thing i can tell I am very proud of our leads.
In that tough situation also they didn't lose their mind...they stand strong infront of everyone ...for their own people's they did everything...they always put their life to protect them but what an irony now their own people don't trust them.
Yes... he's keeping his mind there and she here!

Our heera is fighter...don't she ?
Of course she is!😎 He recognised that the instant he met her in the canal!

17 years old baisa protecting whole Parnagarh including khan sahib men's .
Whistle podu Bindup... please tell me you know how to whistle

How true ...she is truely begum sahiba of ustaad.
How brilliantly she handle everything in absence of her Sahib.
She is true leader who always think of her people before her happiness.
What a irony again she has to leave her home to protect her loves.
This is really the saddest part!😭 And I was thinking.. in reality... how many people go through this in war-torn areas and whatnot! Leaving their home everytime there is a raid... etc etc... I've read stories of children who used to sleep in shoes because they didn't know when they'd have to run next

Thoughtful and meaningful conversation between Ibrahim sahib and heera.
Both were bound by their own duties but heera smartness impressed Ibrahim also.
👍🏼

So Khalil, Farooq sahib and Mahendar dirty plan managed to snatch the title of ustaad from khan sahib.
God...that's terrible .
Yes... that always happens when you have powerful enemies... they'll use you till they need you... once you start growing too strong, they want to see you dead and buried
Somewhere, other than the Hindu fanaticism, I think FS also didn't like the fact that AMK became Mansabdar! 🤔

Look like farooq sahib is great player who knows how to play with khan sahib after all he knows him too well.
Of course!

God knows what more false information he gave to Shehzaade so things are turned out that Shahzada has to sent whole troops to bring khan Sahib's wife to capital.
So finally Ustaad's big secret revealed in front of whole Parnagarh in a very bad way so heera doesn't got time to explain herself.
No... 😭 she was between a rock and a hard place!

We always scared if his secret come out how Parnagarhis would react but reading their reactions i felt like crying.
God that was really terrible for heera.
😭

I don't wanna blame them for their reaction like heera said...she first reacted that way only ...but I am surprised to read Heera's close ones reaction ...infront of them she grown up. ...how could they all judge her for her one decision .
Wohi hotaa hai Bindup... gussaaa guroor and ego...
they don't let you think... even elders in our own house judge us first and then when things cool down try and handle the situation..

I understand they all are shocked, surprise , hurt but atleast they should trust their baisa who always think of them.
They all also know khan sahib and his men...how they all are supported them and help them whenever they all need them.
How could they misunderstood their own daughter.
They basically needed time... and maybe a better/gentler way for the news to be broken out to them... Khalil's men breaking the news to them was like someone coming and mocking them rubbing salt in their wounds... they've faced terrible losses because of Khalil's men in the past na

It was so painful to see when she tried to save khan sahib honour and justify his actions to her love ones .
Poor girl mentally and physically hurt but she doesn't have time to look after of such things . ...most important she does not get time to justify her actions also.
No...

Everything is just not right for her.
I feel terrible when no one came to help her when she was dragging loaded trucks...yes Gauri came forward but only for responsibility .
If reaction of Heera's maids was terrible ...Parnagarhis crowd reaction was worst.
Few movements ago they ready to put their life for protecting their baisa but one single revelation completely change the situation .
😔 You need magnanimity to understand that everything in this world is NOT just black or white... it is grey!

Thank god Ibrahim and Sayyid is always there for her and her Sahib along with their men.
Tough Man like ibrahim also has tear in his eyes after seeing heera condition.
Yes... he feels like he couldn't do more to protect his bhabhijaan & his promise to his best friend! He is worried for them...

I just love the entry of mohan banna.
He came late but he bring hope for Heera . ...and for readers also.
He said everything what I am wanted to say .
Everybody was so blind by their anger ...they failed to differentiate between right and wrong.
👍🏼 der aaye par... you know the saying

Nodoubt why Khan sahib choose him for protecting heera when he is away .
He always choose best.
😎

He answered everyone brilliantly . ...especially to those who point finger to his fancy crutches ...what an answer he gave.
Thanks da😳

I like the sweet gesture of Maharaj kakasa also.
He didn't judge their Mansabdar and baisa ...his experience eye can see difference between Khalil and Khan sahib.
I am glad to know this.#
I think he was shocked too.. but he possibly didn't want to send Heera away without giving her some food.. aakhir he is like a father to her...

Again bad ominous ...Heera forgot to take this time her Kakasa's handmade food like she always do.
One after another bad ominous . ...God I am scared .
Bindiya last confession shouldn't fixed what damage they done with their rude behaviour .
They failed to support their baisa in her most weakest point . ...
Ohhh Bindup😭

One thing I wanted to mention Khan Sahib men never question his decision ...like why Khan Sahib rode like madman to save heera from Khalil and why he married a Hindu girl .
I know they were trained men but phir bhi.
That is true! Then again, that's the difference between trained soldiers and villagers😊

love the poem included in the end of part one.
Emotional one and expressive.
Thank you😳

Beautiful edit but painfull.

Part 2
We never seen Khan Sahib so helpless . ..It's painful to read about his condition .
Such a strong personality he is...his powerfull aura surrounded him always .
Nobody dare to misbehaved with him but Shehzaade's mere guard mocking and laughing at him.
So well said!😭

His power , freedom and title had been snatched .
Everything he is tolerating only because he wanted to prove his loyalty .
Like a true Ustaad he easily figure out ...somebody else is behind all this who knew him too well.
Haan re! 😎 Aakhir Ustaad hain woh...

Shehzaade provide him every luxury but he is a prisoner and helpless .
Only Heera's love keep him going ...her well being matter most to him.
😭

Both love birds silently supported each other . ...their love giving them strength to keep going.
I loved this line so so so much!

Both are fighting for each other .
Nothing but both have each other in this fight and we all pray they will win in the end.

👏

Finally Khan sahib see glass of hope inform of Shehzaade himself . ...near but yet so far .
👏

Shehzaade thinking is so calculative ...how brilliantly he notice khan sahib nails to figure out his mental state and body language .
But he refer him his victim...God Knows how will khan sahib prove himself .
Yes!

Lashy di
what a beautiful balance of emotions you show in this chapter .
Tough chapter for you...I Understand .
How delicately you written every scene . ...delicate but Impactful .
It was very tough...

Starting of chapter 4 is this then what else store in further chapters.
But we have hope ...everything will be fine.
Thank You so much for this power pack chapter .

Thanks da.. and thanks for these beautiful comments.. love you loads.. but you already know that!🤗

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