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konica.arora.92

@konica.arora.92

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Posted: 7 years ago

#41

Super Se bhi ooper
Lovely
Good going
She is in pain
And ja is helping her
Too good

😛

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Rashmi Singh

@Rashmisingh9151

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#42

you know I read this story on wattpad
and comment there as well and
I wished that you write
this on Akdha and I love you for
fulfilling my wish without saying
dear anyway I love it the innocent
struggling with life Jodha and
the playboy rich enjoying life
Jalal I love both of them
the way Jalal didn't try to take
advantage of her like player type boy
do was Fantastic I love it that he is
trying to help her superb sorry for
late reply thanks for pm
do continue soon and by the way
when you will update prince I am
waiting to read that. please update that
soon.

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#43

Awesome chapi but felt short... am curious about jo reaction next day.. continue soon nd do pm

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kartikaJA

@kartikaJA

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#44

fabulous update
totally love it
thanks for pm
waiting for your next update
update next chapter soon

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dellaakdha

@dellaakdha

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#45

Super Update Vrinda...

Jalal is badly fallen for her innocence ..

He is behaving like a lover boy..So cute..

The play boy who used girls is behaving decently with a girl and treat her with dignity...😉

Lovely moments...

She was in so much pain... But regarding baby😕Hope he will heal her pain...

Really interesting dear...

Thanks for pm...

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dellaakdha

@dellaakdha

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151
you know I read this story on wattpad
and comment there as well and
I wished that you write
this on Akdha and I love you for
fulfilling my wish without saying
dear anyway I love it the innocent
struggling with life Jodha and
the playboy rich enjoying life
Jalal I love both of them
the way Jalal didn't try to take
advantage of her like player type boy
do was Fantastic I love it that he is
trying to help her superb sorry for
late reply thanks for pm
do continue soon and by the way
when you will update prince I am
waiting to read that. please update that
soon.

@bold. Means this story is on some other couple in wattpad...

Sorry Vrinda dear then i will love to read here only.once it started with AkDha then i wish to go on with them..I am interested to read this eagerly..so will wait for ur updates...

Sorry for this😳 But I will try to catch ur other works 😊😊sure...

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Rahi

@Rahiramesh

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#47

Part 1 :

Good start
She was beauty and cuteness personified
But utterly sad it seems
She was rare r else who would ask for a baby to any random man
But then its Jalal
She wants her baby like Jalal who would have good fate

Jalal is taking her home
I am too curious to know the story of this cute but sad young lady whom Jalal is determined to make his...

Edited by Rahiramesh - 7 years ago

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Rahi

@Rahiramesh

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#48

Part 2 :

Seriously Jalal had to work hard to not get into the innocent seductress
& Then cleaned her of her vomit changing her to his shirt
She only only him to give her a baby and not cheat her
Jalal took her in arms and went to sleep

I want to know how would she react once she is up and in senses.. Continue soon. Very interesting storyline

Edited by Rahiramesh - 7 years ago

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mamina

@mamina

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#49

Cutest chappy vrinda. But the way jodha is desperate for baby and the pain in her words shows how much she was gone through in her past. Jallal is all the way smitten by jodha's cuteness. No doubt jallal had problem in handling a crying jodha because he knew the cry of ecstasy not the cry of agony. But loved the way he handled it without given into his desire. Eagerly waiting for the next one.

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Srivalli

@Srivalli.t

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#50

Awesome update!!

Loved it.

Thanks for d pm:)

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