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konica.arora.92

@konica.arora.92

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Wahab a tragic written os dear
Good job
Beautiful
Liked it
Thanks for pm
With a good message for this ruthless society 👏

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Neetu

@NSKay

Rocker

+ 11

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: paridhiloveu
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kya hua?😆

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Haya Zehra Jafar

@HayaJafar313

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

You are an amazing writer...i always love your stories...carry on...n thnx for PM..😳

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mamina

@mamina

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Very emotional and sensitive os neetu. Kisi k soch pe kisi ka jor nahi hai. U can just explain ur self to others But do they understand or not, it's not in ur hand. The hypocritic people really sucks. Oye neetu tujhe pure world main mirza hi mila for beast. Or kisiko nahi leskti thi.😡 cute se boy ko rakshas banadia. Chepudinn and adham the na. Ja 10sec tujhse bat nahi karungi.

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Rashmi Singh

@Rashmisingh9151

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

This was eye opener post
for people of society dear

we often heard murder
or attack cases like this
but we never learn for
there consequence all
know this crime had
punishment as well but
no one understands this
the post was really right
if just for once people
imagine there own family
Member than may be
people will never do these
type of crime alas
mindset of people are
so complicated to understand
anyway I like this post
it's awesome and I am
really happy seeing you
all are taking these types
of issue here nicely written
dear do update more posts
like this we will love to read
more.

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Anjali Jha

@ANJIJHA

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

I am speechless sexy...👏

I don't know what to say...😛

But beautiful written os...

Mirza is hilarious...how can he do that...😭

Thank God ja saved jo..

First time I heard that Mirza evil characters...

Poor Mirza Ko evil Bana diya...😆

Seriously aise accident hote rehte hai..😭😭

But caste is doesn't matter..

Agar Mirza Ko nahi pasand..iska MATLAB nahi hai ki wo logo Ko hurt karta phirega..😡

Uski toh bail hi nahi honi chahiye..

Chalo atleast he feel guilty'😊

Edited by ANJIJHA - 7 years ago

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Anjali Jha

@ANJIJHA

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

I am speechless sexy...

I don't know what to say...

But beautiful written os...

Mirza is hilarious...how can he do that...

Thank God ja saved jo..

First time I heard abt Mirza evil characters..

Poor Mirza Ko evil Bana diya tune..

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Anjali Jha

@ANJIJHA

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: ANJIJHA
I am speechless sexy...
I don't know what to say...
But beautiful written os...
Mirza is hilarious...how can he do that...
Thank God ja saved jo..
First time I heard abt Mirza evil characters..
Poor Mirza Ko evil Bana diya tune..

Sry teri O's itni acchi lagi ki double post ho gaya😆..

Edited by ANJIJHA - 7 years ago

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dellaakdha

@dellaakdha

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#19

It's very emotional OS...and sensitive issue too...

I like the part where Mirza's departure from Ja's home to Jo's apartment till that incident.. Well written dear👏

I thought it will result as many real incidents where the girl will be tormented both physically and mentally 😔

But U gave a different ending for this...Ja saved Jo by involving himself in between them... Both are affected...the best part is mirza got the punishment the next moment...

That question by Jodha's father...👍🏼 Don't know whether they(involved in the crime) are thinking about the ladies of their family...

Beautifully penned down...

Between Mirza as villan.. Its the 1st story I think...😉

Thanks for pm..