Akdha OS : The Haunting Question - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
#21
Amazing concept neetu
Penned beautifully
Those acid attackers out there doesn't know the pain they subject the girls to
They should be given the same treatment
They should how it feels to burn
And then have a reminder all life long
Just because mirza didn't wanted jalal to get married to Jodha
He decided to do this to her
Chiii

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Posted: 7 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: melovesja

Awesome dea . lovely start up then in a very light way you wrote the rage and pain of lovers , still the mentality of socity and most ugly thing this acidic attak to pour the acid in socity. At the end burning night mares. loved jalal's presence of mind. how mirza too burn in gilt was👏beautifully written.loved it. Thank you so so much and love you lots❤️

keep writing and stop writing it's not worthy reading because your os were always a treat to read.🤗
titel really suits.😊


Mitu di🤗
I'm so glad that you liked it.😳
Unfortunate but it's true, Jodha was saved by Jalal, people usually doesn't think this way.
Victims of acid attacks face much more than just some nightmares and fears. That's so disheartening, that rather than helping them to overcome, society pushes them deeper despair.
Thank you for this appreciation through your comment di.⭐️

Love you❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

this one is very disturbing !

this gives us a insight what a human mind can resort to once filled with rage...😭

its all with thinking , the mindset...😡

anyways kudos to u neetu , once u pulled it off very well...👏

Thank you so much Manu di🤗

Still, how much we try, there are people who aren't ready to move on from their destructive mentality.
Sad but true.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: avika444

Will read this soon ...

...ti then res :)


Will be waiting for your review di.😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-



Sorry for the late reply


Thank you Kavya di.😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#26

What an adrenaline-rush this OS was. From the moment Jalal overheard Mirza's evil intentions until he reached her apartment, it was nerve-wracking all the way.

Inter-racial marriages are still a contentious issue and evoke extreme reactions from those who oppose them vehemently. Even one person opposed to it can be disastrous as in the case of Mirza.

The leads bear the scars and memories but Mirza suffered much more , as it should be.

Thank you , Neetu for your thought-provoking OS.👏

Love your Oses for the strong messages and issues that are highlighted wrapped in stories using our beloved couple as the protagonists.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Rahiramesh

This is a very sensitive issue
I appreciate the way you wrote it giving justice to the concept
I am strictly against these mentally sick people who destroy not only the body but mind and soul of a lady just because she did something that is not set in their parameters
Here it was Mirza, as it is a story he got a taste of his medicine
But in reality nothing of this sort happens
It is always the victim female who suffers
Extremely intriguing and a very well written concept, Neetu


Rahi di🤗
I'm contented with my OS after reading this comment.😳
Yes, the acid just sucks out life from them. The survivors of acid attacks are the real heroes of our society.
It takes a lots of effort, time and patience on their part to get back to life.
If not in real life, we can at least punish a culprit in a story.
Thank you so much di.
Love you❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: konica.arora.92

Wahab a tragic written os dear
Good job
Beautiful
Liked it
Thanks for pm
With a good message for this ruthless society 👏


Thank you so much Konica dear.🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: kartikaJA

awasome os
thanks for pm


Thank you :))
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: HayaZehra313

You are an amazing writer...i always love your stories...carry on...n thnx for PM..😳


Thank you so much Zehra dear.🤗
I'm flattered.😳

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