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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 1...

He fainted... really fainted just by looking at her...Not Bad !!...😉

So finally we meet the cool & composed counselor in form of Dr. Pragaya Mukherjee who is trying really hard to get some response from her patient Mr. Rohan Sengupta a poor soul who is really suffering a kind of acute depression now...🤢

Really a sad thing happening to him , making him really helpless as nobody around him can really understand his problem nor him...

BTW , am loving this R & P factor here...😎

But god is really merciful finally someone who can cure him is sent to him or I better say his cure reached to him...😛

Her first touch , too much for him to handle so went in state of delirium pushing poor pragaya in an uncomfortable she has to face awkwardness like his father & her thoughts...comical...😆

Then comes Dr. Sen another key character , is jovial...light hearted & offcourse a seasoned practitioner in his field who saves the day for our praggi by being positive , easy going & offcourse good humour...😃

With him pragya can be more of herself , can put her assumptions , complexities with a hope to get analytical guidance we were also told he is the major reason behind her opting for the subject , his words make an impact on her & she is very happy to abide by him...😳

I liked the way u kept the ease in their conversation...handbag joke but at the same him telling her the reality to her as well...😊

Their joking around with each shows the relaxed relation , a kind of bonding they share .

The first flashback came...😲

What a heartfelt piece it was...😭

The emotions both the husband & wife going through , they hv spend a lifetime...from their talks it could be presumed that it was not some cheerful existence yet there was some sort of unblemished love they hv in their hearts for each other...😳

May the passage of time & complexities of life hv not really given them chances to come out of their shell & confront each other , heaps of it they hv carried for years & in the final moments its making them more remorseful...😭

But the deep down affection helped them to pull down the wall they keep stretching all their lives & a promise was made to build a better life in their next chance...❤️

Again back to rohan who is completely restless with all these past flashes which keeps muddling his peace , then inconsolable mother too needs to be handled...

very nicely u hv put the way a human being handling all the intricacies who has so much to take care of in his present but the fate has other plans offcourse...😉

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

Part 1...

He fainted... really fainted just by looking at her...Not Bad !!...😉

>> 😉 A perfect start, what say 🤣


So finally we meet the cool & composed counselor in form of Dr. Pragaya Mukherjee who is trying really hard to get some response from her patient Mr. Rohan Sengupta a poor soul who is really suffering a kind of acute depression now...🤢

>> 😃

Really a sad thing happening to him , making him really helpless as nobody around him can really understand his problem nor him...

>> Just think 😔

BTW , am loving this R & P factor here...😎

>> What is that? 😛

But god is really merciful finally someone who can cure him is sent to him or I better say his cure reached to him...😛

>> Rightly said!

Her first touch , too much for him to handle so went in state of delirium pushing poor pragaya in an uncomfortable she has to face awkwardness like his father & her thoughts...comical...😆

>> 😆

Then comes Dr. Sen another key character , is jovial...light hearted & offcourse a seasoned practitioner in his field who saves the day for our praggi by being positive , easy going & offcourse good humour...😃

>> Praggi🤣

With him pragya can be more of herself , can put her assumptions , complexities with a hope to get analytical guidance we were also told he is the major reason behind her opting for the subject , his words make an impact on her & she is very happy to abide by him...😳

>> Right! He is an ideal mentor for her.😳

I liked the way u kept the ease in their conversation...handbag joke but at the same him telling her the reality to her as well...😊

>> 😳

Their joking around with each shows the relaxed relation , a kind of bonding they share .

>> Yeah... A very friendly bond between the teacher and student.😳

The first flashback came...😲

What a heartfelt piece it was...😭

>> Really?😃


The emotions both the husband & wife going through , they hv spend a lifetime...from their talks it could be presumed that it was not some cheerful existence yet there was some sort of unblemished love they hv in their hearts for each other...😳

>> You described it so beautifully.

May the passage of time & complexities of life hv not really given them chances to come out of their shell & confront each other , heaps of it they hv carried for years & in the final moments its making them more remorseful...😭

>> You know, I am very tensed... Whether I would be able to show the complexities of their relation properly or not. Writing a love story or a hate story is easy... but writing something beyond just love or just hate is... too tough!

But the deep down affection helped them to pull down the wall they keep stretching all their lives & a promise was made to build a better life in their next chance...❤️

>> Another beautiful line!

Again back to rohan who is completely restless with all these past flashes which keeps muddling his peace , then inconsolable mother too needs to be handled...

>> 😆

very nicely u hv put the way a human being handling all the intricacies who has so much to take care of in his present but the fate has other plans offcourse...😉

>> Thank you sooo much!


And this is the reason I keep on nudging you for comments!😆 Just love you for this one, Manu!👏⭐️
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

Teasy Teaser...😛

OMG stutu...

U again did it what a powerful teaser it was...👏👏👏

The Shehenshah Jalalludin Mohammad Akbar raising is head in the sweet sophisticated Rohan ...😲

Poor pragya very badly scared , I wonder if she is really the one whom shehenshah is talashing so desperately...😉

I loved the way u penned it down , shocking the daylights of pragaya pulling her out from her restful slumber only to face the storm not only outside but also the one brewing in the insides of her patient rohan .

will she be consumed ?


Manuuu!!! Tu aab tak kaha thi meri jaan??😆🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
Waise one koshten for you stuti. Why it took jalal more than 400 years to come back and fullfill his wish😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: divyadaya13

Waise one koshten for you stuti. Why it took jalal more than 400 years to come back and fullfill his wish😆

Gud koshten. 🤣 I should have started in a backdrop of British period at least. 😆
Well... The reason is maybe Jalal had came back numerous times in different births within those 400 years, but he could not find Jodha as she did not take birth in a common county and common city. 😆

Well, jokes apart... the next chapter might give you a partial answer. 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Gud koshten. 🤣 I should have started in a backdrop of British period at least. 😆
Well... The reason is maybe Jalal had came back numerous times in different births within those 400 years, but he could not find Jodha as she did not take birth in a common county and common city. 😆

Well, jokes apart... the next chapter might give you a partial answer. 😆


oh my my...😆

& i was thinking in every birth they were united !
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--


oh my my...😆

& i was thinking in every birth they were united !


That is another point of view😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti


And this is the reason I keep on nudging you for comments!😆 Just love you for this one, Manu!👏⭐️


aww stuti...🤗

u made my day dear...😳
Edited by --cute.manasi-- - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti


Manuuu!!! Tu aab tak kaha thi meri jaan??😆🤗


in the flashbacks of rohan...😉😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti


That is another point of view😆


& u're leaving it to reader's mind...😃

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