NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THD 36~Chapter 41 (2 Parts) 1st Nov

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@old_charm

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Posted: 7 years ago

#41

U're the best..

U're the best...

U're the best Lashy di !!

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@old_charm

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Posted: 7 years ago

#42

Congratualtions for the new house to my dear banjaras & baisas...🥳

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@lghosh

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Posted: 7 years ago

#43

Who is it? Royalty with blue blood?

No, He is clad in blue, a noble stud!

Relaxing with his Sherbat in the sun,

A tete-a-tete with his Begum is super fun,

With his Begum Sahiba sitting opposite him,

Her coyness and shy smile flowing to the brim!

But He knew and caught her furtive theft,

of being in his room and before she left,

Her hair on his pillow left a warm fuzzy feel,

He realised her heart is no more of cold steel,

It has thawed to him and his presence,

It looks forward to a feel of pleasance!

Being caught by him she did not bow down,

She faced him with defiance but without a frown!

He asked her about her time in the evening,

She answered jovially her lessons in receiving,

From his best man so far in Chaupar,

He, in turn, invited her to the game at par,

Playing with him to show her tricks,

His Begum has picked with her dice sticks,

In conversing, he came to know, she is Seventeen,

Her Birthday came and went in between,

He was not there to celebrate and wish her so,

Now he wished her from his heart at get-go,

a loving, joyful, heartwarming wish,

That filled her within, cosily in a bliss!

She thanked him for that warm, generous feel,

He hoped she liked his gifts and their appeal,

She knew not he had sent her awaited gifts,

Immediately her young mind to those drifts,

Seeing her so he said she can go and look,

She went to see what gifts did he undertook;

To present her after his prolonged trip,

Seeing two boxes her eager heart skip,

She opened the smaller one to find,

a treasure to cherish, it is one of a kind!

It was an ivory framed magnifying lens,

Helping her see a lot bigger times tens!

She was thrilled to see his thoughtful gift,

Next, her gaze to the mid-size box shift!

She opened to find a magical toy,

It brings things closer - what a joy!

Later she found a scroll hidden inside,

She opened and read the letter with pride,

He said it is a binocular that she can use,

to discover, explore and study in profuse -

the world around her making it beautiful,

as She does always excitedly in plentiful!

She felt brimming with joy and happiness,

May her abundant joy form into togetherness!

In her happiness, He wanted a share and to drown,

He was eager to see the invisible wall going down!

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Bond_7

@Bond_7

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Posted: 7 years ago

#44

Gosh,this is the chapter that had me grinning,non-stop..like crazy!😆 Had to fake few coughs and a yawn to hide my grins in front of the family!Else,they would think too much of studying has loosened my screws!😆

Reading abt the monster in the beginning itself was not something I expected..the very mention of Khalil invokes repulsion..😡🤢 God,his hunger for revenge is frightening,di! Don't know what would these two devils plan against our Sahib and Sahiba!😡😔

Though,I didn't want these two to join hands again and the swine to find the truth,I loved the way you've written their convo. Swine's reactions to the facts were worth watching(reading).He had never thought even in the wildest of dreams that Mansabdar is none other than Ustaad.So,he thought Khalil is ranting something in his drunk state.BTW,I loved Khalil's balancing act to show his poise..how do you get such ideas?!⭐️

Mahender now knows that Heera is aware of the other side of her husband and has been keeping it a secret from the outside world.Without an iota of doubt,he is going to do something big with this new found info.By the time MaLil(Mahender+Khalil😆) sketch a plan and implement it,our AkHeera should be able to get rid of the thin wall separating them and become one strong force..else,it would be difficult to fight against them,me thinks!

You've again shown how Mahender is the lesser of two evils through his distaste at witnessing kids working as slaves and the patriotism he has!

I don't think I can write anything abt my favrit part..only grinning and dreaming is what I wanna do!😆

So,quoting few lines,favoritest of the favorites..

'He IS our Huzoor's army!'

>>This is one whistle-podu line..I felt so so proud of my jiju!☺️😆

The same mentor, Khan Sahib... yet, Khalil and his men abuse power, humiliate women and destroy everything... while the likes of Ibrahim, Sayyid and Azeez were righteous and honourable'

So, when Dronacharya wasn't accountable for the Kauravas' crimes, in what way was Ustaad responsible for Khalil's atrocities?

>>This was splendid,di..⭐️ Could there have been a better way to make this point clear to Heera? The moment Ibrahim's summary of Mahabharat struck the right chord,I felt happy,immensely happy!

I will not forgive you so easily for ignoring your wife... for sending everyone else gifts and not even a letter to your Sahiba...

>>Aww,my cute lil Heera..why are you so cute and adorable?😆

'Because I suspect there are thieves in the Haveli.'

>>And instantly,I knew what was coming..was soo 'xited for the further convo..😆

Yes, she'd missed him. And she couldn't be so fussed about keeping this reality a guarded secret anymore.

'That way...' the deliberate pause sent the tension in the air peaking 'I'll get to see what tricks he's taught my Begum Sahiba'

Did that make him possessive of the woman he loved? So be it. And what's more - he couldn't even be fussed about keeping this reality a guarded secret anymore.

>>My my,were you planning to kill us,di?😆

'I might be late in saying this... but know that the best of my wishes would always be for you, Begum Sahiba... I pray that Allah fills your life with endless happiness by bestowing his mercy and kindness upon you... that He protects you from all evils of the world... I hope that the days ahead would bring you prosperity and umpteen moments of joy'

>>OMG,this was so beautiful and heart-felt!!.We wish the same,Khan Sahib..to both of you and its possible only when you have each other by ur side!

BTW,Happy Belated Birthday,Heera Sahiba!🤗

The gifts..good lord,how thoughtful of him to gift a magnifying lens and a binoculars!⭐️ But the best part was the letter attached to it!❤️

Lashy di,thank you so so much for this double dhamaka..there are so many points I loved..actually,loved everything,but I don't want my post to be another Mahabharatam!😆

Heera's reasons behind going back to the old routine,the game of chaupar,her earnest attempts to feel close to her husband and be updated of his safety,Bindiya and co's laughs and teasing..all these were wonderfully written!

I enjoyed the foodie Azeez's part so much!😆 Akbar Khan is a master at seeking revenge perfectly,either from his enemies or friends!😆😆 Of course,he is the USTAAD,after all!⭐️

That hair on his pillow part reminded me of JA where Jalal too holds a strand of Jo's hair.I though Heera might've left an earring or anklet when something caught Khan Sahib's eye!😆

Since,its 20 days more for the next update,hope I can read it after my first exam on 28th of this month!

Love you loads for making us so happy and content!🤗🤗🤗

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

It's Me 🤔 Then

Dhat ! 😆
I Love You 🤗

Aww just like herself , Kal di review is also adorable

🤗 🤗 🤗

I wanted to know what is this controversial 'Dhat' means?? 😆

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Bond_7

@Bond_7

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#46

Lashy di,

Look what Sayyid has sent me..☺️ and this also represents my feelings for you..😆

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Bond_7

@Bond_7

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#47

Wow,Lana..BEAUTIFUL poem!👏

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Bond_7

@Bond_7

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Posted: 7 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--
U're the best..

U're the best...

U're the best Lashy di !!

Yes,she is..⭐️ and I was exactly like Madhuri above..all excited ,while reading the second part!😆

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: lghosh
Who is it? Royalty with blue blood?
No, He is clad in blue, a noble stud!
Relaxing with his Sherbat in the sun,
A tete-a-tete with his Begum is super fun,
With his Begum Sahiba sitting opposite him,
Her coyness and shy smile flowing to the brim!
But He knew and caught her furtive theft,
of being in his room and before she left,
Her hair on his pillow left a warm fuzzy feel,
He realised her heart is no more of cold steel,
It has thawed to him and his presence,
It looks forward to a feel of pleasance!
Being caught by him she did not bow down,
She faced him with defiance but without a frown!
He asked her about her time in the evening,
She answered jovially her lessons in receiving,
From his best man so far in Chaupar,
He, in turn, invited her to the game at par,
Playing with him to show her tricks,
His Begum has picked with her dice sticks,
In conversing, he came to know, she is Seventeen,
Her Birthday came and went in between,
He was not there to celebrate and wish her so,
Now he wished her from his heart at get-go,
a loving, joyful, heartwarming wish,
That filled her within, cosily in a bliss!
She thanked him for that warm, generous feel,
He hoped she liked his gifts and their appeal,
She knew not he had sent her awaited gifts,
Immediately her young mind to those drifts,
Seeing her so he said she can go and look,
She went to see what gifts did he undertook;
To present her after his prolonged trip,
Seeing two boxes her eager heart skip,
She opened the smaller one to find,
a treasure to cherish, it is one of a kind!
It was an ivory framed magnifying lens,
Helping her see a lot bigger times tens!
She was thrilled to see his thoughtful gift,
Next, her gaze to the mid-size box shift!
She opened to find a magical toy,
It brings things closer - what a joy!
Later she found a scroll hidden inside,
She opened and read the letter with pride,
He said it is a binocular that she can use,
to discover, explore and study in profuse -
the world around her making it beautiful,
as She does always excitedly in plentiful!
She felt brimming with joy and happiness,
May her abundant joy form into togetherness!
In her happiness, He wanted a share and to drown,
He was eager to see the invisible wall going down!