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Thanks for liking and comments if any grammatical & spelling mistakes in this part ,i am sorry .

Note : everyone want Akdha unite soon but their separation must for ongoing track & u want reveal evil gang cruel game to Akdha & family right & remove evil gang from Akdha life so separation must dearies .sorry dearies I will take atleast four or five parts bring Akdha back to normal couple still u enjoy Akdha past life , present also I give Akdha closeness so don't worry but with twist track . I love twist & turn over .. u know me very well ..

Part 54

Jalal held his head through his palms , he cannot bear his pain, he shout like some one pounding lot of nails in his head through hammer . Abdul run to cupboard area.. he take some injection from cupboard and gave injection in his arms.. his pain reduced little bit insake of drugs..he went to unconscious state.. his lip murmuring Jodha name .. other side Jodha jerked up from bed & her whispering Jalal name.

Jodha wake up from bed and open cupboard take Jalal shirt and held shirt close to her heart and come back to bed , hug shirt tightly while laying in bed but sleep far away from eyes , its routine for her , Jalal not went away from her in empty hand , he taken her smile , happiness ,her sleeping, everything.

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Abdul sitting next with Jalal in bed and his teary eyes starring unconscious Jalal ,his tears fallen to Jalal cheeks , Jalal eyes open slowly , he get up from bed ,sat in bed with weakly body .

Abdul hugged Jalal with tear face and Jalal hugged him back .

Jalal : Abdul , nothing happened to me .. its little head ache .. with slow pain voice

Abdul stay away from hug little : is it little head ache for u ,Jalal.. whenever u r getting pain everytime my fear increased if u r going away from us permanently with tear eyes , ur strength our family & ur Jodha , plz come back to our family .

Jalal smiled weakly : u cannot tolerate seeing my pain, how could able u thinking our family bear my illness. Dadi , after heared about my dead news , she went to coma .if I am near her and seeing my pain daily, may be chance she will be die . zoya, Mizra & others were inmature person & children. my Jo , if she know about me after each second, she will die thinking about me , I can tolerate anything but fear in her eyes for me , till now I saw her love in her eyes but fear, its unbearable for me with tears rolling in his eyes even i want know who want destroy my family with closed his fist tightly .

Abdul : Jalal,u trust that man , our family members helped him with confused face.

Jalal : yes, Abdul .i know he was not trustable person but he said one matter true, our family members only helped him.

Abdul : I have doubt with Adham , Ruqquia, Adham father & ..with dragging tone.

Jalal: Ayesha ..Abdul nod his head

Jalal : me too doubt with them , I need proof against them , if I got it as they only helped & harmed my family , they will see their hell and begging for their death with angry tone.

Abdul : I am gathering their history Jalal , we will get information soon ..what u thought , they helped only that matter or they did more against our family .

Jalal : hmmm, I have same doubt Abdul , u checked Dadi prescription & status of health condition .

Abdul : yes , I did , I sent Dadi medical file to other best doctor, he checked everything

Said everything ok but Doc confused , in this time period , she became cured & she come out from coma but still Dadi in coma state .

Jalal : Abdul , if anyone changed Dadi tablets with worried face.

Abdul : but Zoya only take care Dadi medicine ,without her knowledge no one touch Dadi medicine .

Jalal : Abdul ,Zoya was kid ,anyone could did anything behind her back .

Abdul : hmm , I will check Medicine & u don't worry about Dadi..she will cure very soon.

Jalal : hmm , she is very precious person in my life ..with sad tone

Abdul tried to lighten his mood: u know Jalal , tomorrow , who will be come to MI with smirking tone

Jalal grinned teeth: I knew .

Abdul : In MI ( mohammed Industries ) ,Jodha was favourite person for him with teasing face.

Jalal hit his shoulder : shut ur mouth with fuming face.

Abdul : why I shut my mouth , Mr. Jalal Mohammed.. I never forgot that day , he sent marriage purposal to Jodha that day ur face worth to watch with laughing face.

Jalal : don't laugh Abdul Mohammed with grinned teeth.( guys don't forgot Abdul legally adopted by Dadi so he also Mohammed)

Abdul :Great JMK jealous with Jodha 's kiddo

Jalal : he was not my Jodha kiddo ..with grinned teeth.

Abdul : Jodha calling him to kiddo with love filling voice in giggling voice

Jalal fuming face : get lost ..

Abdul chuckling face : I am not going to anywhere,today I am staying with u .

Jalal : if anyone know about ur outside stay , its big problem for us .

Abdul : I will handle them with calm voice..Jalal rolled his eyes..

Jalal :hmm Abdul, if he flirt with Jodha with deep thinking face..

Abdul laughed loudly : JMK scared for little boy ..

Jalal : Abdul .with grinned teeth.

Abdul :don't worry , that time Jodha was naughty & bubbly person but now situation changed she was business woman , Jodha JMK .if he do any naughtiness with her, she will cut his tail into several pieces.

Jalal smiled ..

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Mohammed Construction

A young man enter in MI with charming smiling face and he stopped in receptionist place and take one flower from hand flower bouquet and gave to MI receptionist ..

Man : this is for u sweet heart with flirty tone.

Recp .girl : thanks sir with blushing face.

Man : I come for meeting with MD ..everything arranged for meeting .

Mr. Mehta MI never delay for any meeting with strict voice behind from man..

Man turned look at person and gave huge smiling to person: dream girl ..with excited voice.

Dream .Girl rolled her eyes : Mr.Mehta , address me Mrs.Mohammed with rude voice.

Mr. Mehta : arghh.. dream girl.. u forgot me I am Nikil and ur kiddo with excited face.

Jodha : ur my client behave like that otherwise forgot MI deal with strict face ..Jodha marched to her cabin while leaving Mr.Mehta to shocking in place.

Abdul tried control his laugh as Jalal also ,he hearing conversation between Jodha & Nikil through Abdul mobile .

Abdul : I said na , He going face to Mrs.Mohammed not Jodha ..poor boy freezed in place.

Jalal : Abdul ,he deserve it ..go to check him , I wont any statue in MI with chuckling face

Abdul shaked Nikil arms and poor boy sad look at Abdul .

Nikil : hi Abdul sir ..

Abdul : hello Nikil ..come let go conference hall otherwise today ur last visit in MI .

Nikil : yeah lets go ..

Conference hall

Sasha present presentation , Nikil concentrate presentation but sometime his eyes went to Jodha side also .

Jodha : Mr.Mehta , are u ok with MI terms & condition then deal will be finalize with bossy tone.

Nikil : I accept MI terms & condition & I love too work with u in flirty voice.

His flirty tone not disturb her , she get up from chairs and tried walk out to her cabin and nikil come to infront of her .

Jodha eyes brow raised and nikil give flower bouquet with puppy face.. Jodha take from flowers his hand

Jodha : thanks ..left the place with emotionless face

Nikil showing whole tooth : ur welcome Jodhau ..

Abdul touched his shoulder : don't forgot previous incidents in MI , Nikil with warning tone.

Nikil : yes ..horror face.

Flashback start

Mohammed construction

Jalal head dipped in his files , poor Jodha watching him with yearning face but he concentrate only his files. Jodha throw to paper ball to Jalal , he head up & look at Jalal but Jodha face fell down to her files .he rolled his eyes ,take paper ball from files , put to dustbin once again concentrate to files , now Jodha launched paper rocket to Jalal, rocket landed on Jalal hairs ..

Jodha : launch accomplished with exciting face.

Jalal take rocket from hairs and curshed rocket through his palm & throw to dustbin and Jodha fuming face to Jalal.

Jodha : u demolished my rocket with marched to Jalal chair but Jalal smirked face look at his files.

Jodha tapped his shoulder with fuming face & Jalal snapped her hand with naught face but Jodha not noticed his naughtiness.

Jodha : how dare Jalal Mohammed.. u snapped my hand .. Jodha snatched files from Jalal hand and put in table with irritating face. Jalal turn his chairs & look up Jodha with calm face .Jodha sit herself in his lap and encircled her arms to his neck while Jalal hand automatically wrapped her waist .

Jodha fuming face: ur files paper than my rocket ..

Jalal chuckling face: ur architect not Kidner garden Kid .

Jodha twisted her lips: why u r work alcohlic person with pout face..

Jalal pecked her corner lip : because my wife & siblings were unmatured person so I need to work hard otherwise my MI will be bankrupt with fake serious tone.

Jodha mouth open widely : I am unmatured ..Jalal giggled .Jodha whacked Jalal shoulder ..

Jalal pulled Jodha more : I just teasing u , Jo , I love ur cute pranks & ur eyes craving for my single glimpse from me hmm why not I am handsome man & charming , any girl fallen for my single glimpse even though girls waiting for my glimpse including u too with smirked tone..

Jodha removed his hand from waist and jerk up from lap and glare to Jalal and left his cabin with cursing Jalal through her cherry lip.

Jodha : dust danav , how could able to compared me to other girls , me & other girls same for him. They wored short short dress tried to impress him, how dare he compared me to that girls with cursing Jalal in murmuring voice ..she bang to strong chest before she fallen to ground , person held her shoulder through his palms.

Jodha blinked her eyes and person broad smiled to her .

Jodha : thanks with smiling face.. same time Jalal come out from his cabin & his eyes searching his Jo . Jalal eyes angry glaring to person held his Jo shoulder ..

Jalal : Mr.Mehta ..with hard voice.

Jodha turned back look at her angry bird while person take his hand from her shoulder .

Jalal come to Jodha side and handsake to Middle aged man : hello Mr.mehta ..

Mehta : Mr.Mohammed , great see u today , last week ur not in meeting but I accept one matter u have best employes in MI mainly Ms.Jodha , u handled last meeting very well even we satisified her clause & design everything .

Jodha : sir, u prasing me more..

Young man interpet before Mehta reply Jodha : oh , u r Jodha , my dad prasing u last one week .. with surprised face.

Mehta : Mr.Mohammed, I forgot intro my son, he is my son .Nikil Mehta , nikil he is JMK & she is Jodha , secretary as well MI architect .

Nikil : wow I think ur boss giving over load work to u and I give u offer , u will join Mehta company even I am selfish , our company get best employees like u and I got my ..

Jalal angry glare to Nikil : what got ur , mr .mehta ..with harsh tone.

Jodha surpressed her smile : no thanks Mr. Mehta ..i am happy in MI with smiling lips & blinked eye to Jalal.

Nikil hand shake to Jalal : my pleasure meet u Mr.Mohammed...but his smiling change to uneasy insake of Jalal tight grip in shake.

Nikil: Mr.Mohammed I think u doing daily exercise but I am not ..with puppy face.

Jodha feel bad for Nikil : Mr.Mehta , plz come to conference , Jalal sir ..with stress word u too while eyes guestered leave his hand from nikil

Jalal leave Nikil hand .. and Nikil thanks look to Jodha with flirty face.

MI employess present presentation & Jodha explained other important project details.

Jalal cabin

Mr.Mehta & Jalal talk about further project progress Same time nikil enter Jalal cabin.

Nikil : dad..

Mr.Mehta : Nikil , me & Mr.Mohammed discussed everything, let Move from here .

Nikil : dad, just wait for 10 minutes , I am going meet Jodha after I come back

Jalal strict face : mr. nikil , why u need meet Jodha with warning tone .

Nikil : its personal , Mr.Mohammed

Jalal : what personal with angry glare ..

Mr. Mehta : sorry Mr.Mohammed, don't misktake him, he just open mind person , without thinking about he doing everything .

Nikil : come on dad, why u explaining Mr.Mohammed, he also my age .

Jalal : Not ur Age , kid

Nikil : Mr.Mohammed, I am not kid ..i am 25 yrs old with shocked face.

Jalal nod hishead : I am mention ur behvaiour not ur age .

Mr.Mehta : true ..with teasing look to his son.

Nikil mouth open widely : dad, u too ..with fuming face.i am going meet Jodha , bye .

No need Mr.Mehta , I am here..

Nikil turn and Jodha stand with files and Dadi, Mizra & Zoya banged in Jalal cabin same time .

Jalal murmured : Already mad Nikil troubling me now my whole crazy family arrived .oh god today really worst day in my life .

Dadi : Jalal beta .

Mr.mehta : Mrs.Mohammed, ur visit surprise me .

Dadi : hello Mr.mehta with professional voice

Mr.mehta : meet my son , Nikil and nikil touched Dadi feet and ask blessing from her. Dadi blessed him and Jalal rolled his eyes .

Dadi : ur so sweet kid.

Nikil : Dadi , plz don't call me kid opps sorry mam.

Dadi : no Nikil beta, u call me , Dadi..i don't mind .ur father not only MI client , he was our family friends also.

Nikil : ok Dadi .. Miss Jodha , I want ask one thing , u come with me to ur cabin.

Jalal angry raised but control because of his family & mr.mehta .why not they don't know Akdha love story even Jodha was married girl .

( Flashback part - before Jodha sucide attempt or say before Akdha confession their love infront of family or after Jalal gun shot in karwachath )

Mizra murmur Dadi ear : how dare , he want talk with my bhabhi alone with angry voice.

Dadi : why u getting hyper , we have great chance making jealous to ur bhai , see ur bhai big eyes glaring Nikil , poor boy today he is our scape goat with murmur tone

Zoya: Dadi, what u saying

Dadi :ur kid in love matters but I am ur Dadi .today we do little play with ur bhai & bhabhi love. They had hidden their love in front of us right .let see how much extreme they hide their love to us with smirked face.

Mizra : great Dadi

Dadi : Nikil beta, why u want talk lonely with Jodha , we were not unknown person to Jodha, she like our family member .u ask anything infront of us.

Jalal (mind): thanks Dadi , u stopped him otherwise today he admit to hospital insake of his bone curshed

Nikil : oh Dadi ,I like Jodha so I thought I ask date tonight with her hestitate voice.

Everyone open widely before Jodha react , Jalal shout what ..with angry face.

Dadi come out from shocking first : Jalal beta, why u shocked , he asked date with Jodha not u while suppressing her laugh .

Jalal (mind): how could not able to shocked ,he not asked date with random girl but he asked that girl ,she is my wife ..with angry look to Nikil.

Jodha : sorry ..before she say anything, Mizra stopped Jodha.

Mizra : JB , he look like nice guy , u go with him .

Mr.Mehta : Nikil , I really disappointed for ur behavior with angry face.

Nikil : dad with sad tone.

Mr.Mehta : I thought , u r going to propose Jodha for marriage but u asked for date with smiling face.

Nikil side hug to Mehta: oh dad, one sec u scared me .

Mr.Mehta : mrs.Mohammed, u said Jodha like ur family members right so I will ask Jodha hand for nikil to her family members from my side .

Dadi : suddenly marriage proposal with shocked face.( Dadi not expect marriage proposal)

Mr.Mehta : no its not sudden decision , last time MI visit I like Jodha .i wish nikil will get life partner like Jodha .

Mizra murmur : Dadi , these Mehta crossing their limits , before Jalal bhai burst, control them otherwise both son & dad cannot bear JMK wrath .

Dadi : Mr.Mehta , first we need Jodha decision then only we proceed to her parents right .

Mizra: yes uncle

Mr.Mehta : Ok, I will wait for good news ..ok JMK ..we leaving ..left the cabin .

Nikil : Jodha , tonight 8 clock XYZ hotel..i am waiting for u ..he zoomed out cabin.

Dadi : Zoya & Mizra , we need escape before our valcono blast ..three of them left silently

Jalal : what the hell, he asked dinner date with my wife with angry face.

Jodha touched his shoulder with calm face: Jalal, don't get angry , I am not going ..

Jalal turn & pulled Jodha tightly : u r mine only .

Jodha : I am urs .noone separate me from u .but Jalal not come out from angry mood .

Jodha smirked face: but he look smart ..

Jalal angry glare to Jodha and she continue : u have no time for ur wife even Mr.Mehta was our important client so tonight I go to dinner date

Jalal : don't do any silly things , I am not allow for date

Jodha : tonight I go dinner date with u not him , u come with me or I go with him .

Jalal : don't dare say u go with him, ur mine sirf Jalal ki Jodha.

Jodha : but in ur point view I am also ordinary girl like waiting for ur single glimpse , why u bothering if I go date with him or not , why u getting angry ..

Jalal pulled Jodha to more and his hand grip tightly : ur not ordinary girl for me , u r angel in my life , I don't care any girl eyes fallen to me or not but every sec I want ur attention with me , ur eyes roaming only for my side ,ur my first & last love in my life .

Jodha : that good for u , don't worry I will handle that kiddo..

Jalal : who kiddo ..

Jodha : Nikil ka nicknames .he so sweet ..so I calling him to kiddo with naughty face

Jalal : Jodha..with grinned teeth .

Jodha encircled her hand to his neck : u don't like his name , JJ ..with innocent face.

( JJ means Jodha ki jaan not Jalal jiju ..for Jodha point view )

Jalal: God sake don't address me to jiju ..i am ur husband.

Jodha : let me try ..while she remove her body from his held , left the cabin

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evening

Akdha come back to mansion , whole masti gang eagerly waiting for Akdha entry .

Akdha keep distance far away while walking enter in mansion , they thought prententing their love in front of family but true , their family have hawk eyes . poor Akdha were going trapped their plan.

Dadi : Jodha beta, u came .our eyes longing for ur sight with dramatic tone.

Jalal rolled his eyes (mind): my dramaqueen started her drama.today what drama she is going do ..

Jodha : why Dadi with confused face.

Mizra : JB , u forgot , today u have date with nikil ..

Zoya : Yes ,gudiya di u have less time ready for date .we arranged ur dress ,accessories , now u come with me , I help u for ur date .

Jodha help look at Jalal but his face already red in sake of angry .

Jalal : Dadi , what is this , how could do with Jodha with angry face.

Dadi: Jalal beta what I did it , I just helping Jodha to find her better life partner .

Jalal : she already know who is her better life partner, she don't need anyone help & she not going anywhere .

Dadi : so don't behave like she is ur girlfriend , she just secretarty for u not ur girl by the way nikil very nice guy , we already know Mehta family .they were very good people & they don't mind status also with straight face

Jalal (mind) : they never touched my wife status , she is Jalal singh Mohammed , wife .my Jo , sirf mine .

Jalal : Dadi with grinned teeth.

Jodha rubbed Jalal palm through her palm while control his angry : Dadi , I don't want marriage . plz say Mr.Mehta I am not interested in marriage proposal .

Dadi : but Jodha beta, give one chance to nikil , it my request with emotional way .

Jodha nod her head and Jalal left the room with fuming face before forgot angry glare to Jodha, she moved to outhouse.

Zoya: Dadi, its too much , poor bhai & bhabhi they hurt so much mainly bhabhi .

Mizra : yes my poor bhabhi but Dadi Jalal bhai face worth to watch .he is very possessive with bhabhi .

Choti & Salima entered mansion with holding lot of shopping bags in their hand .

Salima : Jalal jiju have girlfriend with shocked face .her mind thinking I thought he will be marry to Jodha with crying face.

Salima : who is she with fuming baby face.

Choti also get angry & thought Jalal betraying Jodha : who that girl with angry face.

Dadi chuckled face and Mizra smirked look at them and winked eyes to Dadi & Zoya, they understand Mizra naughtiness.

Mizra : u don't know choti , today Jalal bhai going date with his girlfriend .

Choti : how could he did with di with fuming face.

Mizra : whose u talk about choti with eager tone.

Choti stamped his foot : nothing ,where is Jalal jiju & Jodha di.

Dadi : Mizra , don't tease them , we only concentrate Jalal & Jodha , they were only our target .

Salima & choti : what with confused face..

Zoya come stand between Salima and choti & placed her both hand in their shoulders and explained nikil proposal , date & planning everything.

Choti : but Jodha di hurt because of ur plan.

Dadi : I know , choti beta but it will more fun teasing love birds .

Salima : so its means Jalal jiju & Jodha in love with shocked face even more happy for her sister.

Everyone hit their own head seeing Salima innocence. Whole family knew their love story but now only ,she realizsed Akdha love .

Dadi : mission start . Zoya beta, u make Jodha ready. Mizra u arranged car for us right .

Everyone nod their head .. poor Akdha , one side Jalal hell angry with Jodha & other side Jodha worried about Jalal .

Jalal room

Jodha enter Jalal room through back door , Jalal sitting in bed with angry face . Jodha come & sit next with him and placed her hand to his shoulder but he ignore Jodha , his ignorance she hurt so much .Jodha eyes moist

Jodha : Jalal with sad tone .

Jalal angry melt hearing sad tone and his head turn look at Jodha , he felt bad seeing her moist eyes and his hand automatically cupped her cheeks .

Jalal : Jo , why u crying .

Jodha : why u angry with me, why u ignoring me with baby angry face.

Jalal lips crept on little smile seeing baby angry face and hugged her tightly : my Jo

Jodha pushed him : don't hug me ..i said right I will handle that stupid Kiddo , why u getting angry while whacked his shoulder with palm

Jalal : sorry & don't calling him to kiddo with possessive voice.

Jodha burst laughter & hugged him : I love u Jalal

Jalal: I love u too.. with kissed her forehead , why my crazy family doing more crazy activities with us with angry face.

Jodha : because they r crazy like u ..with naughty tone

Jalal : yes .. he realized what she did mention to him.. I am look like crazy for u .

Jodha : ok .. u angry vanished right , now I am going ready for my date .

Jalal : Jo with grinned teeth.

Jodha : Jalal , I said our date not with nikil & mine ..so be ready & I will show that kiddo ,who is GJMK with evily face.

Jalal side hug to Jodha : that is my sherni with proud tone .

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Jalal ready for date , he was dazzling in black shirt & trousers , first two button open while his bare chest showen .he step down to downstairs , everyone mouth open widely seeing cool face, everyone thought he will make earthquake in mansion but he was very calm .

Jalal : Dadi , Jodha is ready for date with casual tone.

Dadi nod her head with horror face..

Jalal : Dadi, I drop her to hotel , she is our responsibilities .

Jodha come to mansion, she wore white saree ,her open swinging in air like music nodes. her almond eyes applied kajal making more sharp her look . her lips applied lip gloss made more shiny . she wored white bindi in her forhead , her neck around simple elegant chain , her bangles giggled more than her laughing , her payal sound like giggle bells .

Jodha blushed seeing Jalal glaze , both eyes locked .

Dadi clear throat and Jodha eyes look down ..Jalal look at there & here to avoid other question look .

Dadi kissed Jodha forhead : u look beautiful but Zoya beta I give u red saree right but Jodha wored white saree .

Zoya : No Dadi , u send white saree only .

Jalal smirked look at confused Jodha and she understand her dear hubby arranged dress everything for his wish .

Jodha : oh white my favourite colour .

Choti smirked face: di, really white is ur favourite colour ..with doubting voice.

Jodha murmur choti : which dress its not matter, today that nikil going face to Paridhi Jodha with smirked face.

Choti : but di ,Nowdays u forgot ur hero , u did not talk about him , I am happy , u forgot that married , u tried move on ur life with normal voice.

Jodha smiled lightly : I never move away from him, he is my life , choti. Always he is only my love while her eyes only with Jalal

Jalal : Jodha , come I drop u ..Jodha nod her head ..both left the place.

Choti smiled brightly (mind) : today my doubt confirmed , Jalal jiju is ur husband but why u hidden from me. Anyway I will find out soon.

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XYZ hotel

Nikil waiting for Jodha in reserved area , Jodha come to near Nikil .

Nikil held Jodha hand , hee tried kiss her hand before Jodha remove her hand from his grip . both settled down to respective chairs.

Jodha : Mr.Nikil , first I clear said, I am not marry anyone .

Nikil : plz don't say u r not married me, I planned our future family also , I am thinking built villa for u , he start his blabbering ..u know u r my dream girl ..plz give me once chance .with puppy face.

Jodha : Love is unique feeling , its come from heart not with compellsion nor any request . it just like sparkle in heart ,we don't know when that sparkle stricked in our heart ,after fallen in love , our heart never look up others .

Nikil : no problem, I will wait for ur until my last breathe.. no last breathe atleast 2 yrs ..

Jodha smiled : u said u will wait for just 2 yrs .if u truly felt I am ur dream girl, u wait for ur last breathe.

Nikil : but give one chance .. with stubborn kid .

Jodha (mind): surely today he got punched from me

Jalal come stand behind nikil and Jodha winked eyes to Jalal.nikil not noticed Jalal

Jodha : what u think about Jalal sir .

Nikil: don't ask anything about hitler , how u work with him , I think he don't know how to smiling ..with rolling his eyes.

Jodha suppressing her laugh : u called Jalal sir to hitler .. Jalal glare to Jodha .

Nikil : dream girl , u quit ur job and plz join my company.its good for u .Jalal hell angry with nikil.

Jodha : but I cannot ..i bonded with puppy face.

Nikil : don't worry about ur bond ( contract ) .i will release from him .

Jodha : u cannot even though I cannot go away from him, I bounded with him in my all lives .

Nikil confused face: I don't understand ..

She tring to say , she is in love ..with hard voice.

Nikil turn back & look at owner of voice, Jalal stand infront of them with feld hand to his chest .

Nikil jerk up from chair: mr.Mohammed..with shocked face.

Jalal sat in chair with JMK attitude : yes , I am ,now u will propose infront of me with warning tone.

Nikil gulped his saliva : oh ... I am..

Jalal : yes ur nikil Mehta .. with raised eye brow.

Nikil : what are u doing here with stammering tone.

Jalal : its not ur problem, u continue ur proposal ..i just watching u proposing correctly or not .

Nikil become numb

Jalal : u only asked one chance..Jodha given that chance , if u impressed her , she will accept ur love .. I am right, Jodha .. she nod her head .

Nikil tried touch Jodha hand but Jalal snapped his hand and his eyes guestered don't touch her with angry face.

Nikil : I don't know what I feel for u , if u next with me, my life will be good , will u marry me ?

Jalal jerked up chairs sudden Jalal moves nikil body shivering and Jalal placed his hand to nikil shoulder .

Jalal: I thought u propose romantically but u failed to impress her .

Nikil : Mr.Mohammed, propose not easy like sign to deal with teasing tone.

Jalal smirked face and take flower from vase & kneel down like proposal pose infront of Jodha .

Jalal starring her eyes while Jodha look at Jalal : before u enter my life ,I am alive but I don't know my heart also beating for someone . I am running behind everything like robotic life . I chased something even I don't know what I chased ,whom my eyes longing for , I don't know anything but my heart recoginised u before my mind . I am living like desolation humanbeings , after u enter my life , I cherished like drought land got rain drops.u changed my life not only life , u changed me to normal human beings , u made me realized I am not desolation person anymore , u brought smile crept on my lips. my every heart beating saying ur name , (Jodha tears fallen to his hand )I can do anything for ur single smile , ( he get up from kneel down posture and wipes her tears through his palm )ur tears tored me into serval pieces , I can face anything in this world but ur tears making me weak person .( Jodha wipes her tears & give her best smile to him ) my life is yours and yours mine with possessive voice. I am not allow my angel suffer from anything , ur Jalal protective from every evil thing , I promise u , in any suitation I never leave ur hand , I stay with u like ur shadow ( Jalal placed her hand to his chest /heart ) u feel it my heart beating for u , will u allow me holding ur hand till my last breathe .( Jodha nod her head )will u allow me showing love ur children ( Jodha blushed lightly ) will u allow me complete ur life journey with me ..

Jodha hugged Jalal tightly : yes with emotional face.

Nikil mouth open widely not only Nikil ,whole masti gang speechless hearing Jalal confession.

Mizra : Dadi , plz say I am alive or not .

Choti pinched him hardly and Mizra shout ouch before he shout heavily Zoya closed his mouth.

Mizra : mhmmme..Zoya removed her palm from his mouth.

Mizra : why u pinched me with fuming face.

Choti :u only asked u alive or not , so I pinched u .now u realized u r alive ..no need to say thanks .

Zoya : u both shut ur mouth, see Dadi & Salima bhabhi freezes .

Salima eyes moist : wow jiju proposal so emotional , so lovely one .. Jodha so lucky got Jalal jiju .

Dadi : no , Jalal lucky got Jodha like life partner . removes evil sign from Akdha.

Mizra : Dadi , see Nikil face with giggling tone.

Choti : poor boy but he so cute ..Mizra angry glare to choti .

Akdha come back from hug and nikil come back from shock reaction.

Jalal held Jodha palm : see Nikil Mehta, u proposed her like I proposed her ..u got it .

Nikil : sorry I don't know u both r in love with sad face.

Akdha unsion: No ..

Jalal : when I said I love with Jodha with strict face.

Jodha : yes , I bounded with him . its not love ..

Nikil : what ...then JMK confession & ur acceptance ..

Jalal : arhhh... I just gave demo how to confess , Jodha also acted with me ..Jodha nod her head .

Nikil : so I have chance to fallen for me , Dream girl .

Jodha : Kiddo , u never get chance in ur life time ,run out before u got punch from me with warning tone.

Jalal :u face only her one side ,if u faced her sherni side , u never show ur face so better luck next life .

Jodha glare to Jalal and Jalal shout his mouth : U , kiddo I don't want mr.Mehta spend his money to ur medical expenses..get lost otherwise ...nikil run out seeing her sherni avator .

Jodha eyes shifted to Jalal and give punch to his stomach & Jalal held his stomach :ahhh..

Jodha : what u said , better luck next life ha ,.how dare u JMK ..i am only woman ( lady love) in ur life in every life .dont forgot ..Jodha marched to go out ..

Jalal run behind : wait Jo , we come for our date ..

Dadi : omg Jalal changed totally , he run behind Jodha like love sick puppy ..

Mizra : Dadi, see they left ..let go follow them.

Dadi : we r going back to mansion , leave them alone . they need privacy .

Gang sad tone : ok .

Dadi : why u sad , they will entertain more in future , don't worry my assistants .

Gang : yes boss with salute to Dadi .

************

Flashback end

Akdha come back from flashback ..

Jodha : u promised me , u stay with me like my shadow , now my shadow left me ..

Jalal : in mid of 12 noon , shadow never showen but its not mean shadow left u , ur shadow with u , I never left from u , Jo .

MI

Adham come to MI and staff bumped to Adham , files papers shattered in floor . his evil eyes noticed something favour for him , he bend down take paper from floor with evily smirked face. Staff left the place, he don't noticed paper in Adham hand .

Adham : i got proof in my hand ..today Bua praising me...

Moahmmed Mansion , Hall

Ayesha : Jodha beta, who u trust blindly , that person cheated u with indirectly taunting tone in fake concern voice

Mizra : Mom, what is ur problem ,why everyday u come with new matter to broken us .

Ayesha : u don't know anything Mizra ,see this papers.

Mizra checked papers even he shocked but he did not show anything to his mom.

Ayesha : now u say , I am doing any drama or it papers not real one.

Abdul , Salima & janumaa come back to mansion , Ayesha smirked look them .

Ayesha : welcome , everyone waiting for u.

Mizra : mom please don't do .

Ayesha : Mizra beta, it depend on Jodha bahu trust , he broken her trust ..Abdul , u stabbed our back but u thinking we don't know anything

Abdul scared that they know about Jalal alive .

Jodha eyes look at Abdul , his eyes shown clearly fear about something but she did not open her mouth.

Janumaa: Ayesha , mind ur language , u talking about Abdul beta .

Ayesha : bhabhi , u r innocent , u don't know anything about him,he theft MI money .

Abdul got relief but he hurt Jodha not say anything , she stand like statue , she did not against Ayesha word.

Salima : Aunty ,Abdul never did that cheap act .

Ayesha : Salima , u support ur future husband but true ur Abdul was real culprit , he transformed huge amount MI account to his personal account without anyone knowledge .its not matters for thousands , last two months he transact more than 50 lakhs .

Salima : 50 lakhs ..no its not true , u saying lie . he never did it .

Ayesha: u r not trust my word , ask ur Abdul directly.he infront of u only.

Salima : what is this Abdul , say to her, it lie.

Jodha : Salima , he already informed me , I know what purpose he taken money , so no one ask any question to him (look at Ayesha ) no one have right ask anything to him. He also share holder of MI.dont forgot he also Mohammed .Jalal Mohammed 's brother .Ayesha feel like she got slap from Jodha .she stamped her foot ..went inside .

Jodha eyes look at Abdul , her eyes signed , u too betrayed me , she got one more heart broken without saying anything to Abdul , left to room.

Abdul (mind): sorry , Jodha ,u saved me , but I know I broken ur trust , I did everything for ur Jalal, plz forgive me .he left to his room.

Salima , janumaa, Mizra showing their blank face because of Jodha & Abdul behavior ..

Part end

Precap

Present life

Kurbaan song😳

Jodha in danger if Jalal save his Jo or not😲

After long two months gap , Akdha face to face..they will become together or separate once again.😉

Past life

Rajaram (Jodha father) & Samir ( Jalal father ) face off 😡..

Akdha Grand parents arrival 😲

Akdha Vs Masti gang naughtiness .😆

if u likes this part do likes & comment ..

i will update my stories , dont worries dearies ..😳

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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice part
Continue soon 😊
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Good one dear
Please update soon dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow wonderfull part 😊 i love it😛hope u unite aakdha verry soon😳.pls update next part soon im weighting for the next chappy😉.
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