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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Part 29...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">jo & salima...😆</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">abdul jalal perfect cooks...😉</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">jo's flirting...ahh jalal when'll u start , plz i really want to see jalal taking some steps now .</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">abdul , mirza tickling jalal...so much fun...😃</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">& this MLA back again...😡</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">i hope all would be ok...😭</font>

don't worry dear there will no revenge it is full of fun story not dark or thriller story so relax .
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Part 30...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">superb chap...⭐️</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">real culprit caught , kudos to jalal & abdul...two smart cops...👏</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">& jalal's another problem solved , they r better now .</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">liked the way salima thrashed that idiot who dared to misbehave with her little one , & if he dares to do something more let jalal handle him then...😆</font>

yes you are right if there is something serious then our smart cops are here to help them and thanks for comments friend.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: dellaakdha

Chapter 30

Awesome...
So Jodha is being followed by the gang to avenge her...
Both Jodha and salima are possesive of each other ...
The thing I like is they Dnt need a hero to save them.They both are enough...Love it...
A good punishment for that guy...

oh thanks I to wanted to show this that girls don't need any hero to protect them they are enough for each other because girls are not week if they can take care of house and family then they can protect themselves to and they are more powerful than boys and you caught that small thought dear that's so sweet.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 31...
another superb chap...👏

salima very well explained her little one .

& jalal he ruled it in this one , u heard me...😆

his flirting actually surprised me as well but i soo loved it am sure jodha too has loved it .

i can understand her plight , want to see what she 'll do when she meets him & will he also flirt same the way he did on phone...😉


that stalkers caught , kudos to jalal & his intelligence...⭐️

waiting for next .
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Part 31...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">another superb chap...👏

salima very well explained her little one .</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">& jalal he ruled it in this one , u heard me...😆</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">his flirting actually surprised me as well but i soo loved it am sure jodha too has loved it .</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">i can understand her plight , want to see what she 'll do when she meets him & will he also flirt same the way he did on phone...😉</font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">that stalkers caught , kudos to jalal & his intelligence...⭐️</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">waiting for next .</font>

well you don't have to wait so much because I will update tomorrow dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago


Wow awesome super update rashmi 🤗
Loved it..
Jo thought herself weak but Salima md her understand tht everyone somewhere lack n tht doesn't means tht thy r weak... It's human nature Noone cn Perfect... She understands but still she was sad...
Thts y when mirza asked she can't control herself n cried.
Ja saw the stalker so he put Trap...
Oh my god Ja... Leave Jo reading Ja words I was lik tht😲😲
Was I day dreaming or it is really Ja... OMG.. N Jo Oh god shock will b under statement she was more than tht... My my this was the frst Tim When Ja silent Jo... Uski toh bolti hi band hogyi n to the end of the call lik salima I too cnt control my Laugh 🤣 🤣 tht was super hillarious... Think abut Jo expression 🤣
JA perfectly execute his plan lik isolated area thm car stop n tht stalker lik stupid gt Trap n caught 😛
Aftrall who md Plan our Mr. Handsome police officer so it had to b success... 😉 Nice
Waiting for nxt 😊

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Posted: 7 years ago


Update nxt soon 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: lovespari




Update nxt soon 😉

thanks for such cute comment Nidhi love it and I am glad you like it and I will update tomorrow till then wait.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 32

(First they drop Abdul to his house then left for there house and after reaching there house Jalal and Mirza get ready to take there ladylove for Dinner then in half hour they left to Abdul house so they could go together to Jodha house and no doubt they were looking hell handsome in there dress Shivani to looking no less she was looking beautiful and looking at her Mirza can't control himself and without caring that his brother is front he kissed her on cheeks and in very loving voice).

Mirza Said : you are looking hell gorgeous Shivani I can't say in words that how beautiful you are looking right now.
Shivani said : thanks for the compliment and to tell you the truth you are not looking less to.

Mirza said : oh my am I in heaven beautiful Angel like you praise me someone pinch me now.

(listening this Shivani started blushing like tomato and softly pinch him).

Mirza said : so I am not in heaven but it is no less then that beautiful.

(listening this Abdul jaw drop He thought what the hell happen to these to brother today one was flirting with his Would be sister in law on phone few hours back and another is flirting with his sister that to front of him and other side looking at Abdul face Jalal smirk and goes to him then in teasing voice).

Jalal said : now it's your time I mean we already flirt with our lady love now it will be your turn next.

Abdul said : shut up and Mirza are you going to drive or not we will be late now.

(and with that everyone sited on Jalal car and left to Jodha house and on the whole ride Mirza and Shivani were stealing glance at each other much to Abdul distress and Jalal was enjoying all this after half hour they reach Jodha house Salima open the Door for them when Abdul stop dead in track seeing Salima in shorts He always saw her in full like she always prefer Jeans top or full skirt top or Salwaar suit and gown which cover her whole body but today seeing her in short sleeveless Red color Frock which was just on her knees with open hair wearing silver bracelet on left and golden watch on right hand and black color boots was making her hell sexy that he just wanted to take her to his room but his chain of thoughts broken by Jalal who pinch him hard that he yelp in pain and looked at him with rage).

Abdul said : you devil why the hell you pinch me.

Jalal said : are you deaf or what I was calling you from last five minutes and you are standing outside like an idiot Salima told us to come inside and left to call Jodha and you like a fool standing here and calling me devil Idiot.

(listening Jalal words Abdul get embarrass and started looking here and there and seeing him like this Jalal shook his head in disbelief then grab his him and take him inside and then they all sit on sofa and started waiting for Jodha).

(other side Jodha was ready and waiting for Salima in her room and when Salima entered her room Jodha grab her Hand and pull her inside then close the door and in nervous voice).

Jodha said : did you saw him Di tell me how was his mood now I mean he was not going to flirt with me right.

Salima said : little one how will I know that he was in serious mood or flirty Mood you love him you will no him better then me and why the hell you are nervous come let's go now I am hungry and I can't wait to have dinner now.

Jodha said : okay let's go but Di don't you dare to show that video to anyone get it.

Salima said : okay okay I will not show that but you know what I am glad that there is someone who can make you shut to I mean no one can make you nervous or silent but I am now glad that Jalal have gut's to do that in starting I was feeling very nervous for him but now I know he can make you dance on his finger to.

Jodha said : Di stop it today is really bad day for me first Jalal flirting and now you are making fun of me I will not talk to anyone you go I will not come for Dinner now.

Salima said : okay okay sory Please forgive me I will not tease you now okay now let's go they are waiting for us.

(listening this Jodha nodded her head in yes then both of them come downstairs giving shock to Jalal now because Jodha to wear the same dress like Salima her style was to as Her elder sister but her dress color was Purple uff only he knew how he was controlling himself from doing something with her and other side seeing him like this Jodha get uncomfortable but then with Salima goes to them and her every step making Jalal mad in Passion he can't control himself and to calm himself he stand up and Hugged her tight).

Jalal said : you will be death of me My sexy kitten I don't know how to control My self after seeing you in this attire.

(listening this Jodha get shy and tried to break the hug but Jalal hug her very tight so she didsn't get success so in low voice).

Jodha said : Leave me Jalal now we are getting late for Dinner.

Jalal Said : you are calling me by my name Beautiful and it is turning me on I don't think that anyone take my name this beautifully.

Jodha said : I...I ...oh god...leave now ...I ...can't take...Breath...You are choking me in your hug...I ..leave Jalal.

(listening this he leave her and then both turn towards everyone and see them that everyone are looking at them with open mouth and seeing them like this Jodha run from there to Jalal car without saying anything and seeing her like this Jalal to saving himself from there teasing session run behind her leaving everyone behind in shock after few minutes Mirza come out from shock and looked at everyone).

Mirza said : let's go or else they will leave us alone here.

(listening him they to come to there sense and started going towards them when Abdul grab Salima hand).

Abdul said : did you plan to murder me by your look today you know there are no words which can describe what I am feeling now Baby.

Salima Said : are you all by chance lost your mind first your friend flirt with my little one and now you are doing the same.

Abdul said : Well in this case you and your sister can't blame me and my friend because yo both are ready to kill us by your look that any saint can fell on his knees for you both then we are just normal human being with our desire Baby.

Salima said : then what you want now.

Abdul said : one kiss and I can get calm.

(with this both kissed each other with lot's of Love and passion after getting out of breath they broke there kiss and looked at each other then without saying anything and goes out and reach there car and saw Jodha and Jalal on with one Bike and Shivani and Mirza on other biker they reach towards them).

Abdul said : guys we will go with car right then why are you both sitting on bike.

Jalal said : don't worry we will go to same Hotel for dinner but by Bike okay.

(listening this Abdul nodded his head in yes and with that everyone drove towards hotel where they plan to have dinner and after one hour they reach there destination and enter the hotel and looking at these beautiful adorable couple everyone who present there started admiring them with love and thought what wonderful couple they are god bless them but ignoring everyone they all were looking at each other then they goes to there booked table and like true gentle men Mirza Abdul Jalal take the seat out for there lady love and make them sit comfortably and after that they to sit with there respective partner but after there flirt and knowing there lady loves shy nature no one knew what to say and same With girls they were to shy to say anything but to there pleasure waiter come there to take there order).

Waiter said : welcome here Sir hope you all are comfortable here.

Jalal said : yes we are.

Waiter said : so what you all would like to order Sir.

(listening this Jalal looked at everyone but to see them lost he turn to Jodha and saw her checking the menu so he casually).

Jalal said : did you like some thing to order.

(listening him She nodded her head in no and seeing this he himself order some food for everyone and taking the order waiter left from there after that Jalal again looked at everyone and thought it's enough I have to do something).

Jalal said : guys for god sake we are her to enjoy with each other why the hell you all are silent now Mirza why you are silent in fact as I know you can't keep your mouth shut more then five minutes and Abdul what are you doing stop staring at Salima like that it's look like you will eat her alive and my miss beautiful why your nonstop radio is in silent mode today did anyone give you punishment not to talk.

(listening him everyone come out of there lovely moment and looked at Jalal with rage).

Mirza said : what the hell you Mean Bro that I can't get serious .

Abdul said : and I am just looking at her not like you flirting with her.

Jodha said : how dare you tease me because of you only I don't know what to say.

Jalal said : and what wrong I did Mirza everyone know that you never get serious and don't be behave so innocent Abdul I know what you did don't force me to open my mouth regarding that and Miss beautiful just by little flirting you become Kashmiri apple and what about me you always flirt with me what about that.

(listening him everyone started laughing there heart out after few minutes).

Mirza said : but really Bro you are no less her I mean your way of flirting was awesome.

Abdul said : yes in fact this is nothing you saw Mirza if you heard him in evening when he was talking with Jodha was hilarious.

Shivani said : forget that Bhai did you saw jodha expression when Jalal Bhai hugged her it's so beautiful for that expression anyone can die for.

Salima said : uff Shivani if you saw her in the evening then you will be on floor because of laughing that time her facial expression was out standing.

Jodha said : stop it Di stop Making fun of me now.

(they were talking when waiter comes towards them with there order and after serving them left from there).

Jalal said : yes guys stop now and let's have our dinner now .

(listening him everyone started eating there food and between that they talk about there day and share very good time with each other after done with there dinner they started talking with each other when the in the hotel soft music started playing and some couple goes to dance and seeing that Jalal Abdul Mirza to take there lady love on Dance floor and started dancing and get lost with there partner and they come in there sense when everyone started clapping for them after having very passionate Dance they were feeling so happy that they thought to share sometime alone with there partner so with this thought Jalal take Jodha to his House mirza take Shivani to her house and Abdul take Salima to her house and after one hour everyone reach there house with there respective partners).
Edited by Rashmisingh9151 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago


Rashmi 🤗
Amazing update dear...
Superb... Loved it 😃
N a big one 😛
Luks lik something gt in all of them... All behaved different N some r opposites 😉 😆
Frst talk abut those two lill bunnies... Yes mirza n shivani... It's frst Tim they both express n even he kiss n tht too in front of Abdul... 😲
N Ja.. Wht to say abut him.. Luks lik he definitely hv eaten something... God today he don't hv any control on him... He opened flirting n expressing his Love... In front of all 😲😳
But ther is something much interesting Frm all Today salima n Abdul too show ther Different side...😉 But in alone "Chori Chori Chupke Chupke" ☺️😆
Love reading it.
Waiting for nxt 😊

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