Akdha ss- Mera Maasoom Patidev -Part 7 /29-MAY-18 - Page 18

Originally posted by: sharda_123

Superb updates dear

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: dellaakdha

Congarts for new story... Prologue is nice..diffrent jalal...

Res for chapter..Thanks for pm...

Originally posted by: sorathsheikh

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">First of all patidev aren't masoom but you're saying so i'll believe</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Awesome updates sis! Loved the way you have written. So the story started with the girl telling the baby about their first meet! Simar was teasing her a lot. Jallu bhai was telling the reason behind his sadness to her baby sister. Yup jallu bhai you're absolutely right! Girls can slap isme ladkon ki shan hai Aur jallu bhai ki train patri se utar gai re jallu bhai ki motor cycle pom pom pom. Wao he again called her di jallu bhai bhagora ho gaya hai kiya . The conversation between Jallu bhai and jodhu was bit funny. Kuch ziada nahi jallu bhai laddo ho raha hai? Her father teased her And so her family knows jallu bhai's family. Juilee is a dob wow . Continue soon and thanks for pm<img src="http://dl2.glitter-graphics.net/pub/1941/1941772dixlxfwdkq.gif" alt="" /></font>

Originally posted by: avishimishra

part-1 is damn cute yar.so jodha jalal have their child.jalal is so innocent.how can he call her di.her family also tease her.he is behaving like kid.obidient brother.he lick icecream using his tongue. who is julii.intrsting chapy.will reply again for 2 part.thanks for pm.

Originally posted by: avishimishra

part-2 is also awsme.so juli is pet dog of jalal.jodha's gutter mind. what think she about .became mad for jalal.jalal badepapa is devil.how can their family torture jalal.poor jalal.hope jodha will make him right.he is naive.he doesn't understand anything about husband-wife realtion.precap is intresting.continue soon.Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

nice..

Originally posted by: Geetanjali1993

Awesome update

Ja is too naive

Ja questions like a kid, non stop and they were hilarious😆

Looking forward to see how Jo will enlighten her masoom dulhe raja about love😛

Continue soon and thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Annasabu

Let's see.

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--

<font color="#6600ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Hayee...</font>

<font color="#6600ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">mera Jallu kita sweet and innocent hai😳</font>

<font color="#6600ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">calling jodha di and then Jodha ji😆</font>

<font color="#6600ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">unknown to what jodha feel😆</font>

<font color="#6600ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">wah Jodha ki kya family hai...</font>

<font color="#6600ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">everyone know of her crush to Jalal and teasing her😆</font>

<font color="#6600ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">even her Mum too 🤣</font>

<font color="#6600ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">I think Maina will take jodha's rishtah for Jalal as she know his family😉and Jodha is gona on 7th cloud😆</font>

<font color="#6600ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">and Jo jealous of Julie😆</font>

Originally posted by: bluesky10

Awesome update