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Originally posted by: Kritu98

Beautiful chapter😊👏

So aabir is Mirza only...that was a big surprise for me
Akku is too cute... I want him for one day😆
Loved Jo and Mirza bonding...beautifully portrayed😊
So Jo went manali and aaku baby to his father house...interesting
Loved akku and family part😊
Jalal and akku night and morning scene...my favourite scene of this story till now😃
Jodha past is painful
Jealous akku was too cute
Jodha missing...jalal in manali...waiting for the story to unfold
Update soon dear
Sorry for late reply
And thanks for pm😊


Thank u so much dear 😃
U want akku.for one day
Let me think 😳 😉
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Thank u so much for lovely avishi dear 😳
I will update Saturday 😳

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Thank u so much for lovely comments dearies..if any grammatical & spelling mistakes in this part..i am sorry..


Part 9

Jalal and Mirza come out of airport.

Jalal: Mirza , call to pinky , ask her if she got any information about Jodha.

Mirza nod his head and call to pinky.

Pinky: Sir,plz come to xyz hospital.few minutes before only I got information about Jodha mam got accident but don't worry about her.she is alright

Mirza: Pinky I am coming

Jalal: What happened Mirza

Mirza: Jodha ko accident hogiya hai with tensed face

Jalal: Accident ,she is alright With panic tone

Mirza: Pinky said nothing happened to her but we need go soon bhai

Hospital

Jodha wake up in unconcious state and look at person infront of her

Jodha: U with confused face

Man: Jodha how r u

Jodha:mr Surya khanna , what r u doing here with little harsh word

Surya: I saw ur unconscious state in car at road side.I admitted hospital and also informed ur PA.she on the way with friendly voice

Jodha tried to sit but her hand : Ouch..

Surya: Jodha I help u

Jodha: No I manage with little bit hard voice

Surya: Jodha, iam sry what I did with u in past with guility tone

Mirza and Jalal enter Jodha room

Jalal seeing Jodha in bed and Surya standing next in bed

Jalal: Jodha with worried voice

Jodha look at Jalal selfthought: What he is doing here even come with Mirza .it means hey babaji he know every truth with confuse face

Jodha look at Mirza & Mirza nod his head to Jodha as gesture Jalal already know everything

Jalal: how u got accident with pain voice

Jodha : Silent ( because she didn't want insult Jalal infront of Surya)

Jalal: Mr khanna ,u r here with doubting face.

Surya: I admitted Jodha in hospital

Jodha: Ouch

Jalal and. Mirza: What happened

Jodha: It is paining

Jalal: Mirza, go to call doctor with worried voice

Surya: Mirza u stay here.I will call doctor

Surya went out to room as give privacy three of them

Jodha: Mr Mohammed what r u doing here with unemotional voice

Jalal: Jodha with painful voice

Jodha cut his word: JR not Jodha with hard voice

Mirza: Bhai, I go check doctor

Jalal: Jodha , I know u angry with me.plz first listen my words

Jodha: Mr Mohammed ,who am i for u, listen ur words and angry with u.iam nothing for u with taunting tone

Jalal: Plz Jodha everyone waiting for u arrival with pleasing voice

Jodha mind thought: Everyone waiting for me but u Jalalji with painful thought

Jodha : I am not coming to ur house with angry face.

Jalal: Jodha plz thing about our Akku.he is crying so much.he is waiting for u

Jodha:Akku with worried face

Jalal dailed Bazir number and Bazir pickup Jalal call

Bazir: Jalal u found out Jodha

Jalal: yes, dad she is infront of me and dad give phone to sunshine.Bazir give phone to akku baby

Akku: Papu mummaa with crying voice

Jalal: Sunshine talk ur mummaa

Jalal give phone to Jodha and but her hand not hold phone and Jalal helped held to phone but Jodha not accept Jalal help.

Jalal : Jodha plz,Akku waiting for hearing ur voice and Jalal held phone near her ears

Akku: mummaa with crying voice

Jodha: Akku baby ,sweet heart . nothing happened to ur mummaa ,don't cry dear

Akku: mummaa come with chocked voice

Jodha: my Akku not crying baby ,he is strong boy right, I will come soon dear

Akku nods his head: yes... mummaa

Jodha: stop crying then only I will come infront of u

Akku stopped crying and wipes his tears with his little hand.

Akku: I stopped crying.come infront of me with babish tone

Jodha smiled: tomorrow I will come infront of u and ur good boy right. Don't trouble anyone. Tomorrow ur Aabir bring u back our home.

Jalal mind voice: I missed this cheerful moments in these years. My jaan and my sunshine both are dido like baby. One really baby and other one baby hearted. No Jodha u not away from me. U and my baby stay with me till my end of breathe.

Doctor enter Jodha room with Mirza and Surya

Doctor checked Jodha : ms Jodha u alright but don't strain ur arms. U take completely rest for few days . u become alright. I give injection to reduce ur pain and u have good sleep .

Jodha: thank u doctor & Doctor went out

Jodha: Mirza,plz arrange my flight ticket ,I need go soon to see my Akku.

After some time Jodha slept in sake of drugs.

Next morning

Jodha wake up in sleep and shocked seeing place.

Jodha thought: What iam doing here.iam sleeping Jalalji arm with shocked face

Jodha seeing Jalal sleeping next to her and Akku sleeping above Jalal

Jodha carrying Akku hairs with self thought : I never think I saw this view in my life.Akku sleeping above his father.he held him protectively in sleeping state.my family, what r u thinking Jodha no once again he will break ur heart.u never comeback that hell.ur family only ur baby

Jalal already wakeup seeing Jodha every reaction in lower eyes

Mind voice: I know Jodha what r u thinking when u come back our home

Flashback start , yesterday night

Jalal: Mirza arrange our flight .we need back to delhi

Mirza: Iam not coming without Jodha,bhai with stubborn voice

Jalal: I am not said that Jodha not come with us.she also come with us to our home.

Surya: Jalal, she is not well.how she will travel

Jalal: Mr Khanna thanks for helped my wife but don't interfere my family matters.she is my wife. I will take care of her health with harsh tone

Mirza: bhai

Jalal glare to Mirza enough shut his mouth

...

Jalal pick up Jodha in his arm enter Mohammed mansion and Mirza come behind them

Everyone waiting for Jodha arrival

Naazira: Jalal what happened to my child.why u pickup in ur arm even she have bandage in her arms

Jalal: Mom Little accident but nothing to worry.she is sleeping.where is sunshine

Naazira carrying Jodha hairs: He is sleeping my room

Jalal: Hmm.mom bring baby in my room

Jalal went to room with Jodha.everyone follow to Jalal

Jalal placed Jodha in his bed and kiss her forehead.

Bakshi: Bhai she is alright with crying face

Jalal side hug to Bakshi: She is perfectly alright.everyone go to sleep and talk with her tomorrow.she need rest

Everyone went out to respective rooms with heavy hearted

Jalal seeing two angels next to him sleeping peacefully.both are sleeping with smiling face.Jalal kissed Akku and Jodha forehead.

Akku automatically come to Jalal chest in his sleeping state.Jalal hold him tightly and pull Jodha close to him in her sleeping state Jodha placed her head in his arm.Jalal hold one hand Akku and other hand Jodha waist protectively but not disturbing her broken arm

Flashback end

Jalal lose his grip from Jodha waist with closed eyes.Jodha closed her eyes , she thinking he wake up in sleep.poor Jodha don't know he already wake up.

Jalal smiled seeing her antics and kissed Akku and Jodha forehead & placed Akku next to her and went to washroom

Jodha open her eyes: He kiss me lovingly with shocked face

Akku wake up in sleep and seeing his mummaa next to him.

Akku: Mummaa with excited voice

Akku kissed her face fully and Jodha also reciprocate his kiss.

Akku: I miss..u ..sooo mch ..with sad face

Jodha: I missed u too baby with sad voice.

Akku: Don't go away from me mummaa as hugged jo tightly..

Jodha: I am not live without u baby.ur mummaa always with u.

Jalal come out washroom and stop washroom door and looking his both babies talking and other family members also reached Akdha room watching their cute talk.

Jodha: Hmm..Akku tell me what naughtiness u did it.

Akku: I...i didn't anything with naughty face

Jodha: Don't lie baby.i know my baby sharing everything to her mummaa..

Akku : Oh..mummaa garden uncle look like dirty with chuckled face so I opened water tap.water splashed to his face..he he he he

Jodha: I alright told don't trouble anyone

Akku: Mummaa I helped him to bath.

Jodha: Next

Akku: Badedade irritating me. Everytime she roaming behind me with my food..she kissed me like u kiss me.Akku show face whenever dadi kissed him

Dadi hearing cute complaint and smiled

Jodha: Ur bade dadi love so much that only she cared for ur health

Akku : Dadu give me more toys I will show u come to me gestured open his arms to wide to more toys .

Jodha: Not now baby I will see it later

Akku nods his head: Baby play with me

Jodha: Baby

Akku: Ha...but she more height than me with sad face

Jodha: Oh u talk about miyra baby but she is not baby for u, she is ur sister.

Akku: Mummaa,papu not love me with sad face

Jalal mind voice: No sunshine I love u much with shocked face

Jodha: Why u said Akku that ur papu not love u with worried face

Akku: See mummaa this room fully ur photos only not single photo for me with cute pout face

Now only Jodha scanning whole room and seeing everyside her photo only shows

Jodha strucked Jalal eyes.both r starring each other.

Akku tried to divert her starring session unfortunately he touched her wound arm

Jodha: aahhaaa

Everyone shout: Jodha

Akku hearing mummaa pain & everyone shout and his eyes moist

Akku: Mummaa sryee sryeee with crying face

Jodha kissed his forehead; iam alright Akku dear.

Akku kiss her wound arm: Okk. mummaa

Jodha: Now my pain is gone

Dadi carrying Jodha hairs and Jodha looking dadi face.unknownly both eyes tears flowing in their cheeks.

Akku hit his forehead and mind voice: Hey badudadi make everyone cry.kya karo hey badi dadi ko . see my mummaa also crying .

Akku wipes Jodha tears but Jodha eyes not stopped tears.

Mirza pickup Akku in his arm: Let go champ.we play outside

Akku: Mummaa

Mirza: Mummaa need rest.dont disturb her

Akku look at everyone: Don't disturb my mummaa .she need rest with bossy tone

Everyone smiled hearing bossy tone including Jodha.everyone went out except Jodha and dadi.everyone very well know what relationship sharing Jodha and dadi.

Jodha placed her head to dadi lap.both r not speaking anything

Jodha: Sry darling.I broke ur trust with chocked voice.

Dadi: No kibo iam only asking sry to u.i spoiled ur life with painful voice.

Jalal hearing their conversation and remember their past life

Flashback start

Jalal come back to Delhi and went out mansion

Dadi room

Jodha in bed post and everyone around her.

Jalal enter dadi room and seeing Jodha state .everyone tried to make Jodha speak up and alteast make to cry.but everything is vain

Jalal: Everyone go out I talk with her with hard voice

Everyone went out

Jalal sit infront of Jodha: Jodha with slow voice

Jodha: No reply

Jalal shaking her shoulder: Jodha listen to me with hard voice. U want everyone will die.everyone worried about u.noone eat anything insake of u

Jodha look at Jalal face and tears rolling in her cheeks.

Jodha hugs Jalal tightly and crying vigrously.

Jalal rubbing her back and even his eyes also moist

Jodha: Jalalji mom and papa, they leave me alone in this world with chocked crying face.

Jalal cupped her cheeks: U r not alone iam with u (Jalal baba u saying this word from ur heart but ur mind not accept this truth)dadi, Mirza , Bakshi, mom and dad ,everyone with u.

Jalal feed her food with his own hand.everyone happy she have eat something.

***

Almost two month passed but Jodha speak less word to everyone.Mirza missing his old bubbly Jodha so much.after 2weeks Mirza and Jodha will go to London for their studies but Jodha denied that offer

Mirza: Jodha this is golden opportunity.plz come with me.otherwise I am not going anywhere

Jodha: Mirza don't compel me but u going london it is final with slow voice

Mirza: Iam not leave u alone

Dadi: She is not alone Mirza.i will take care of her.

***

Bazir and Naazira room

Naazira: ji, .i want marry Jalal to Jodha..what r u saying

Bazir: Even iam also thinking same Naazira.my friend become happy seeing that her daughter become our daughter - in law

Naazira: Plz talk with maaji about Akdha marriage

Bazir: Akdha

Naazira: Short form of Jalal and Jodha

Bazir smiled: Lets go we need talk now itself

*****

Dadi room

Jodha sitting next to dadi and Bazir, Naazira enter room

Bazir: Maa I need talk about Jalal marriage

Jodha hearing Jalal marriage as lighting fallen down in her head

Dadi: But beta, u already chose girl for Jalal but dadi want Jalal marry with Jodha.

Bazir: Yes maa she is perfect for Jalal

Jodha want to cry loudly but control her emotion

Dadi: Hmm ok beta .ur wish my wish with half heartedly accepted. Tell me her detail and then we will talk her parents

Bazir: She have no one maa without us.

Dadi and Jodha look at Bazir

Bazir: I am talking about Jodha maa.

Dadi: my wish also same Bazir but we need Jalal accept marriage with his whole heartely.

Jalal enter dadi room and hearing his dad and dadi conversation.

Jalal: iam not interested in marriage. Plz don't compell me

Naazira: but Jalal she is right choice for u.

Jalal: plz maa try to understand. I don't want marriage to anyone. First I need settle down my business.

Dadi: Jalal beta, u not love Jodha

Jalal: iam not love with anyone specially Jodha. Yeah I worried about her because she lost everything. She have no one in this world.its not means I love her.

Jodha eyes tears flow and wipes her tears and dadi noticed her tears.

Dadi : stop Jalal iam with her.she is not orphan. Bazir beta call to khanna family. They already asked me alliance for their son hand to Jodha.

Bazir: maa but sudden decision. I know khanna family is good name in society but i don't know anything about their son. He settled down in abroad.

Dadi: I know beta. Khanna family is good person.they will take care of Jodha

Dadi carrying Jodha hairs : Jodha beta what is ur decision. This is ur life. U have full right take any decision.

Jodha: dadi , what u saying I will do .i accept for this marriage.

Jalal: what r u saying .this is ur life matters.

Dadi: Jalal don't interfere Jodha marriage. U denied that enough.

Jalal went out angry face and Jodha went to her room.

Jodha cried vigrously : why maa ,papa u leave me alone.

****

Khanna family and Mohammed fixed marriage date to next weeks but Jodha shattered, Mirza not tolerate Jodha decision. One side Jalal not seeing any man next to her but he not understand what is that feeling.

Marriage day

Jodha ready in bridal dress with sad face.

Mirza: Jodha ur happy in this marriage.

Jodha: iam happy Mirza.with hide her sad in smiling face

Mirza: ok u r happy right then look my eyes then tell me. U r happy in this marriage.

Jodha tears flowing in their eyes : iam not happy in this marriage.this is my fate so I accept my fate.

Mirza: but u love Jalal bhai insanely. I will talk with bhai. He accept ur love.

Jodha: I need his love not any pity.he not love me with tears flow in her eyes.

Mirza hugs Jodha and Jodha recriprocate his hug.

****

Guest everyone gossip about Surya khanna run out marriage because today only he know about Jodha have nothing in her hand. Her every property in auction.he accept marriage because of her property.

Dadi know about Surya run out marriage .she fainted in ground.

Dadi in serious condition and she want to see Akdha marriage. Jalal have no option. Jalal wears mangalsutra to Jodha neck . both r married. Dadi come out serious condition but Jodha hell life start now.

Flash back end

Jodha: dadi u didnt anything wrong with me. That is my fate.

*****

Shivanya: di I informed dad about ur accident.mom and dad come to delhi tomorrow.

Jodha: Shivanya why u informed to sir. He have urgent meeting in London.now he cancel meeting come to see me.

Bakshi: even I am also informed about ur arrival to Abdul

Jodha: oh no Abdul bhai also coming. Both are give me good lectures with pout face.

Bakshi and Shivanya laughed seeing her pout face

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PART 10

Akdha room

Everyone pampered Jodha so much.Jodha overwhelmed everyone love .after long back she got their love.

Akku: Mummaa why u crying.

Jodha: Happy tears Akku

Akku: Happpy means smile not cry with confused face.

Jodha smiled : Sometimes , we cry in happy times also dear.

Mirza enter Akdha room with some files.

Mirza: Jodha , pinky sent this file for u

Jodha: Ok that file.

Mirza: This one, its bhai project file.where he is

Jodha: I don't know with straight face.

Mirza rolled his eyes: Ok I kept there after he come back to room , give him.

Jodha: Iam not

Mirza placed file in table: Ok I will inform bhai and went out.

Akku: jo .mera file with cute face.

Jodha: Oh my baby want file.

Jodha smirked face and give Jalal file to Akku baby.

Akku: Joo it is papu file with confused face

Jodha ( mind voice) : What I do with my intelligent baby. He dido like his papa ..sharp mind.

Jodha: Ur papa so much busy so u help ur papa na.

Akku: oh..I help papu with bright face

Jodha went to restroom and baby work his papu file.

After some minutes

Jalal enter his room and seeing Akku doing something seriously sitting in his bed but Jodha not in room.

Jalal: Sunshine what r u doing

Akku raise his face to looking Jalal: Iam working papu said then concentrate his work once again

Jalal chuckled: Working ..

Jalal went near to Akku and sitting next to him.

Jalal phone ringed and Jalal pick up the call.

Jalal: yes, Mirza

Mirza: I placed ur project file to near ur bed side table.u see it bhai.

Jalal: There is no file Mirza.

Akku tapped Jalal hand and but Jalal concentrate Mirza phone

Mirza: Checked it clearly.few minutes before only i placed file in ur room.

Jalal seeing Akku hand in one red file

Jalal: Mirza file color is not red right with little bit trust voice.

Mirza:yes, bhai ur file colour is red.

Jalal horror face: I got my file .i call u later and cut the call.

Akku show file to Jalal: Papu iam good boy right.i helped ur file with smiling face

Jalal: Sunshine what u did it.oh my project file.now tomorrow what I will do.

Akku sad face: U not like my work.ur badoo papu..with pout face

Jodha come out of washroom and smiled seeing Jalal face.

Jodha:super drawing baby showing her full tooth.

Jalal glare to Jodha but Jodha not worried about his glare.

Akku smiled broadly: Joo , ur good mummaa

Jodha: Ur mummaa always good baby

Akku: U said help papu file but he not like my help with pout face.

Jalal angry glare to Jodha and Jodha not looking Jalal but looking there and here

Akku kissed Jodha cheek : Mummaa I helped ur file.and Akku show Jodha file .her file fully Akku baby ka art work.

Jodha open her mouth and pointed her finger to file with shocked face.: My file.

Now Jalal smiled seeing Jodha expression.

Jodha glare to Jalal and poor Akku looking his parents weirdly.

******

Jodha: Darling dont angry with me with hesitate face.

Dadi: When u have hesitate with me Jodha.

Jodha: Oh I stay Delhi only three months after me and Akku shifted to Australia .

Everyone shocked: What..

Jodha: Plz dadi this is my decision.

Naazira: Jodha beta this is ur house.how u go away from us..

Jodha: This is not my house maa with sad face.

Dadi: I accepted ur decision but u give me one promise.

Jodha nods her head and dadi carrying her hairs.

Dadi: U permit me, see u and my grand child in future with painful moist eyes.

Jodha hugs dadi: Dadi why u ask me permission, Akku is ur blood.he belong to u.whenever u want talk and see with him .u don't need anyone permission.

Naazira: Maaji..u also

Bazir: Iam also accept Jodha decision but in these three months u stay only our mansion otherwise I am not accept ur decision.

Jodha: But papa...

Bazir: I want spend time with u and my grand child.I think u give atleast this right to us .i don't know I will get this chance once again or not with pleasing face.

Jodha have no choice: Ok papa..

****

Bazir and Naazira room

Naazira: Why u accept Jodha decision.u want Jodha away from us.,if she will go away from us .we will become happy.ok dont consider us.plz think about Jalal.he already live in guilty in these years with harsh tone

Bazir: U think about only ur son not about Jodha.she only hurt so much because of our Jalal.she have full right take any decision.

Naazira: What about baby, I cannot allow my Akdha child going anywhere.

Bazir: Why u not understand Naazira.

Jalal enter his parents rooms.

Jalal: Dad saying right mom.she have full right to take any decision.

Naazira: Oh u also accept .ok u also happy for Jodha will go away from her house with angry face.

Jalal: no mom with guility face

Bazir: Jalal, I need my grandchild and my daughter in law stay with us.i don't know what u will do.u have three months time.in these months u will win her heart .otherwise I never stop her decision. Once again I trust u dont break my trust, Jalal

Jalal. No dad this time I never break ur trust . I will win her heart she never go away from me.

Bazir: Naazira , now u understood why I asked Jodha stay in mansion.

Naazira nods her head with moist eyes.

*******

Akdha room

Jodha: Mr Mohammed why u doing everything.why u acting infront of everyone like u caring me.if noone around us so stop ur acting.i cannot tolerate anymore with angry face.

Jalal: This is not acting Jodha I truly care and worried about u with painful voice.

Jodha smiled weekly: What u said ,u worried about me..u never take care of me in ur life time with taunting tone.plz go away I need to sleep.

Jalal went to study room and sitting in sofa with closed eyes.

Jalal: Why Jodha u not see my love in my eyes.I know u angry with me.in u anger not accept truth.i love u Jodha ...i love u so much.

Flashback..

Akdha marriage finished because of only dadi health condition.

Dadi recovered and come back to mansion and elders decided today Akdha SR.

Jalal room

Dadi helped Jodha sitting in centre of bed and kiss her forehead.

Dadi: Sry beta in my sake only ur married with Jalal.

Jodha: Iam happy dadi.

Dadi: u love Jalal so much but he.. ..u only change workacholic person to normal person.

Jodha nod her head and dadi cupped her cheeks.

Dadi: Give me great grand child soon with teasing face

Jodha faced red : Darling with blushing face.

Everyone went out .Jodha alone in Jalal room and Jalal enter his room with irritating face.

Jalal seeing Jodha sitting in his bed and Jodha sensed Jalal enter room and her heart beat raised thinking about her happy life.

Jalal grabbed Jodha hand harshly and Jodha looking Jalal and her body shivered seeing his angry face.

Jalal hold her arm tightly: U think I accept ur my wife.we r married because of dadi health condition.in front of family members only we are husband and wife .inside we r stranger with each other.u never cross ur limit and never interfaces my life.do u understand with harsh tone.he pushed her to bed and went to study room.

Jodha eyes tears rolling in her cheeks: Why mom and papa u leave me alone that day if I come with u . iam happily died with u.I thought Jalalji accept me and he give me love but my wish become only dream.my dream vanished so soon

.***

Next day

Jodha wake up thinking about last night and unknownly tears flowing in her eyes.

Jodha Mindthought: Jodha what u thinking.u will win his love.u can do it.he is ur life.he is everything to u.u never give up in ur step and Jodha wiped her precious tears.

Jodha bathed quickly and went out outside After marriage,today her first day of her law house.

Jodha enter kitchen and Naazira and dadi already in kitchen.Jodha bent blessing to Naazira maa and dadi.

Jodha: Darling, I don't know cooking what I do with pout face.

Maham: Ur England ka princess so u don't know cooking with taunting tone.

Dadi: Maham with harsh voice.

Maham: Maa what iam trying to say

Dadi: U shut ur mouth that enough .

Maham stamps her foot , went out

Naazira: Jodha beta .add this sugar to kheer bowl that enough ur rasaam will be complete with smiling face

Jodha : But I will make sweet ,u both help me with pleasing face.

Dadi told how make kheer and Jodha listening carefully and did it what both r said.

*****

Dinning table

Everyone praising Jodha kheer and except Maham and Jalal

Mirza: Jodha definitely nothing happened to me na after I ate ur kheer with teasing tone and till yet, iam not love with anyone.i don't want to die so soon with dramatic face.

Jodha glare to Mirza: Eat my kheer otherwise..

Mirza: Why angry I will eat ..

Dadi, Naazira , Bazir and everyone gift to Jodha for first rasam completed.

Maham give gift to Jodha: This ritual finished but u go to ur mother house today.but u have noone with in ur family.this ritual how will u complete with taunting tone.

Jodha eyes moist thinking about her parents not more in this cruel world.

Abdul: Maham bua ,u dont worry about my Jodha.she have brother and his name is Abdul

Jodha smiled seeing Abdul come with Bakshi.

Abdul side Hug to Jodha: She is my sister.u never forgot Maham bua..with little harsh tone.

Bakshi: Jodha Bhabhi ,u pack ur things.lets go to our home.

Jodha nods her head and Abdul, Bakshi and Jodha went to Abdul house .

****

After two days

Mirza packed his things for London journey.

Jodha: Mirza u packed everything.

Mirza: I packed everything but I don't want go without u.i never stay without u yaar with sad face.

Jodha hug Mirza: I miss u too.only 2 yrs after ur finish ur studies u come back to India with crying face

Mirza: But u call me daily with moist eyes

Jalal enter Mirza room and irritating seeing both behaviour

Jalal: U both not child.stop ur crying and pack ur thing soon with angry face.

Hall

Mirza hugs Jodha tightly: I miss u so much.take care..

Jodha:u too take care .call me daily.

Jalal rolled his eyes: both stop ur drama and we need to airport soon otherwise u miss ur flight.

Dadi : Jalal beta this is love not any drama.till now they r not separated in their life.now Mirza going study for abroad so they can't tolerate their separation.

Mirza hug Jalal: Bhai plz take care of my angel.she is everything to me.she is very innocent.I request u bhai.

Jalal: Mirza with irritating face

Mirza give one pack to Jalal: This is ur wedding gift both of u.

Jalal opened cover and inside two flight tickets for Paris.

Mirza: This is ur honeymoon trip ticket.i arranged everything in Paris.i know u have meeting in Paris so I arranged Jodha flight ticket with u.now u go to ur office trip and Jodha come with u for urs honeymoon .how is my gift with teasing tone.

Jalal angry glare to Jodha and thinking Jodha already know about Mirza gift but that poor soul dont know anything about Mirza plan.

dadi: Mirza beta awesome gift.lets go u caught ur flight.

*****

Akdha in Paris, evening time

Jalal reached Paris almost two days and Jalal busy in his business meeting.Jodha stay in hotel room.in Paris Jodha saw only that four wall in hotel room.

Jodha: Jalalji I am also come with u with puppy face.

Jalal: Hmm but ready soon.

Jodha smiled and wore green saree ( Jalal favourite colour).

Jalal starring her without removing his eyes.

Jodha blushed: Jalalji with soft voice

Jalal come back to lala land.

Party

Everyone looking Akdha pairs and Jalal hold Jodha waist possessively enter party hall.Jalal busy with client and Jodha don't know anyone so decide call to Mirza.

Mirza: Madam finally remember me with little angry voice.

Jodha : Sry baba ...

Mirza: Why so much noise yaar.

Jodha: Oh I come party with Jalalji.

Mirza: Iam not hear anything.

Jodha went out side without informing Jalal while speaking to mir

Jodha: Now u hear my voice

Mirza: Hmm tell me how is going ur honeymoon with teasing tone

Jodha sad face: Super Mirza ,Jalalji showed me full Paris.

Mirza: U saying truth with doubt voice

Jodha: yes, Mirza iam saying truth only.u tell me u got any gf in London with teasing tone..

Both talk with each other and Jodha forgot her surrounding.

Somemen looking Jodha in lusty way.

Jodha cut Mirza call and men surrounded Jodha .

Jodha: Ji why u surrounding me with stammering voice.

One man hold Jodha hand and Jodha tried remove his grip but his hold her hand tightly.

Jodha shout: Jalalji...Jalalji

Time god some cop come to place otherwise that bad guys what they did with Jodha.

Men run out seeing cop and Jodha run to party hall and hugs Jalal Back tightly with feared face

Jalal embrassed infront of his client and Jalal remove her hug and dragged her outside of party hall forcefully.

Jalal: don't mess my Life .u enter my life ,day itself I lost my everything with angry tone.

Jodha already feared about that men and now he said that lost everything because of her and her tears not controlled flowing like river.Jalal frustrated he told everything but her tears bothering him.

Jalal: U waited her .i come soon with harsh voice.

Jodha: ...ji ..Jalaljj...i am also..come with u...with stammering voice.if men come back that fear caught up her little brain.

Jalal: I said right.u sit in this bench.i inform clients come back with harsh tone and went inside party.

Jodha scared more and it is dark ,cold and lonely place .Jodha siting in bench ,hugged her knees her tightly.she eagerly waiting for Jalal but time only passed but he not come outside.if she go inside once again he angry with her.she waiting for him..even she slept in sitting posture.

Other side Jalal forgot Jodha and went to hotel.he enter the hotel room remembered Jodha also come with party.

Jalal went back to party hall quickly and seeing Jodha slept in sitting position.Jalal scopped in his arms not disturbing her sleep.

***

Jalal placed Jodha in bed and her face clearly shown in tears mark in her cheeks.Jalal carrying her cheeks.

Jalal pov

Why Jodha u enter in my life.after u and Mirza birth ,no one take care me.my dadi roaming behind u.she forgot me totally but iam not care about it because dadaji stay with me all time.my age of 18 ,that time dadaji passed away.everyone break down.dad not interested in construction. So I will go to office daily.once side I managed my studies & other side managed my company.its really difficult.iam running behind money.i forgot my family everything.now iam truly business man.i don't need any unwanted relationship.ur relation ship make me weakly person.i don't want ur love ,care anything.i know u love me insanely.but I have no time spent time with u.this is my life.iam not allow no one rule my life.

*****

Km

After 5 months

Bakshi now 8 months pregnant . Abdul shifted his business to uk.Abdul have no relation .so Naazira went to take care of Bakshi in uk.other Akdha life Jalal behave Jodha is stranger for him. Outside they no show their relation to anyone.dadi also doubted sometime asking about Jodha their relationship but Jodha manage very well dadi.whenever Jodha become alone Maham bua taunting Jodha .Jalal not take care Jodha any need. He live in robotic life.

Flashback end

Jalal : u right Jodha ,I never take care of u in our past life but that i stupidly behaved with u. I thought ur my weakness. U went away from me .i understood ur not weakness.ur my strength with moist eyes.

Jalal enter room and his both angel sleeping peacefully in bed.

Jalal placed Akku in his chest and pulled Jodha in his arms .after some time Jalal slept hold both angels.

Jodha wake up midnight and looking in her posture.

Jodha mindvoice: Jalalji, I saw ur eyes love for me but I scared if once again u broke my heart.i definetly I die then only I will throw u out my life .iam not ur old Jodha. I live for my baby only for my baby.i don't know I doing correct or not.

Part end


Precap:


Akdha past..😭😭😭...jodha ka hell life because of cunning Ruqz & Maham😡😡😡...ufff jalal not care about jo..


Present..

if anyone want my cutiepie opps sorry our akka ka real name..i already told , akku is pet name not his real name.😉😉😉.


next parts , i will update this weekend.😳😳


MFS & Massoom stories..i will update after two weeks..not now..u know very well, i need unfold more writer stories otherwise they kill me sure..😛😛😛


one more doubt..u really enjoyed MFS ka special part..yes, i am really happy with Akdha version response but maaneet version..i confused , why i got less response 😔

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