Akdha OS :: Yearning :: - Page 4

lovely extension to revenge..the moment I read the names Misha and Amita, just remembered that story...

anyway, waiting for ur crazy stuff...update that too, soon..😉

Appreciation tujhe milti hai n I be on clod nine

Originally posted by: RamSiyaRam

A story full of sentiments and affection🤗

You have conveyed the feelings nicely.

I like your short stories the best😳

Do keep writing, they are so enjoyable

😳😳

neetu darling...

am so soo overwhelmed...thanx re !

now coming to your OS , ahh my JaJo...

wow its from revenge , wait...what is this ,what made you believe that it would be boring & u called it worst too...how dare you...😡...pagal ladki..huh..

madam ,

clear your misconceptions as soon as you can !

none of your readers can forget this story nor its lead pair , am also one of them & being a revenge reader i take pride to be associated to it though only as a reader...😊

& am really happy that you brought this shot for us it very well conveys that how much this story means to you just like us...😃

What a start , so its their anniversary & they are back to business i.e. busy with fiery fights...😆 but both have pertinent reasons to do so...😛 kya karein , they are so used to the presence of each other , ki ab raha nahi jata...😉

Anyways I like the way they are...😃

Jalal : so loving yet so relentless , so caring yet so possessive...I would say he is a full fledged PASSIONATE man...⭐️

Jodha : so affectionate yet so candid , so ardent yet so understanding ...I would say she is a true COMPASSIONATE lady...⭐️

They are very good together , they caters to each other...❤️

I liked the flashback you put here , his confession to her , her way of conveying to the overwhelming revelation...😳 it came out soo well...👏

This tells how much they have come to understand each other , jalal is now emotionally dependent on her & so is she... , loved reading those tid bits of their relation , so did they consummate their marriage yet or not...😉

Ok before you kill me I'll come to climax , gosssh it was full neetu style...😎

& you can't end it that way , am waiting for the next one...really want to know how his jaan will finally manofy his majesty who is in full tantrum throwing mood though in a jesty manner...😉

looking forward for the next one , so buck up neetu darling...😛

Thankyou so much neetu , it made for a lovely read...🤗

It's a lovely read👏 neetu

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

neetu darling...

am so soo overwhelmed...thanx re !

now coming to your OS , ahh my JaJo...

wow its from revenge , wait...what is this ,what made you believe that it would be boring & u called it worst too...how dare you...😡...pagal ladki..huh..

madam ,

clear your misconceptions as soon as you can !

none of your readers can forget this story nor its lead pair , am also one of them & being a revenge reader i take pride to be associated to it though only as a reader...😊

& am really happy that you brought this shot for us it very well conveys that how much this story means to you just like us...😃

Manu di ka comment dekh kar mujhe toh party karne ka man karing

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

Thankyou so much neetu , it made for a lovely read...🤗

i truly loved this surprise... after reading it , i read your note & realized that it was for me my my...

voila , it really made my day...looking forward for more of such surprises...😉

& yes i'll definitey murder you if u'll cal it a boring & senseless stuff so never do that...😳

also , am really sorry for commenting so late hope i'll be forgiven .

Mai bhi see I told u na bandar tere stories best hote hai 😎

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

neetu darling...

>> Manu di🤗

am so soo overwhelmed...thanx re !

>> Aapne bola and mai na kru esa ho skta h kya?😉

now coming to your OS , ahh my JaJo...

wow its from revenge , wait...what is this ,what made you believe that it would be boring & u called it worst too...how dare you...😡...pagal ladki..huh..

>> I've typed the whole os from my phone.. And it's a tough job. Or bhagwan jane kya kya likha hai

madam ,

clear your misconceptions as soon as you can !

none of your readers can forget this story nor its lead pair , am also one of them & being a revenge reader i take pride to be associated to it though only as a reader...😊

>>> This statement just made me so elated

& am really happy that you brought this shot for us it very well conveys that how much this story means to you just like us...😃

>> This story gave me so many friends actually a small family including you di⭐️ of course it's special to me. 😳