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Vrinda

@--Vrinda--

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Neetu 🤗 It was an awesome Os where Ja can't live without his wifey Jo for a second and here his jo is being bad who is expanding her stay 🤣 Even if it's coincidence, Opps Revenge ka 2nd Epilogue 😉, Love it so much Neetu ❤️ Keep writing such lovey dovey more 😃

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Anonymous

@ParijatDeewani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: ParijatDeewani
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You know what I'm speechless jaan

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Neetu

@NSKay

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: ParijatDeewani
You know what I'm speechless jaan

Oye esa ni chalega😛

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Anonymous

@ParijatDeewani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Woah a continuation to my most fav ff Revenge 😳😳😳

I'm speechless darling 😳😳

Once again u've proved darling why I call u my fav 🤗

Okay now coming to the OS😳😳

It was mind boggling one

Jo troubling Jalal that too at this hour upar se Mr. Short tempered is really frustrated n the credit of course goes to Jo only😆😆

I knew it would be jo only as she alone has got the guts to trouble him like this 😆😆

Mujhe toh laga ki he won't pick up the call only par finally he picked it up😆😆

Woops chill Jalal take it easy 😆😆

Jo ko cold hua hai ufff yeh Suja ne pakka uska dhyaan nahi rakha hoga pagal kahi ka 🤣

No matter waht Jalal can never neglect jo 😉

How cutely he said to take the meds😳

I guess if Suja would there be infront of him he would have screwed him up🤣

I was wondering what teh hell did Jo do that left Jalal so angry 😕

I thought Jalal maybe over reacting but teh actual reason was a valid one

How can Jo leave him for so many days 😭😭

As far as taking care of Amita was concerned it was okay coz it would def be difficult for Suja to take ccare of teh little one

But the two two days ka extension was just too much 🤢

Jo has seriously lost it I guess she gave into Misha's demands upar se agreed for a trip 😡😡😡

She's insane😡😡😡

If I would be at Jalal's place i would have taken Jo with me😆😆😆

She should understand it's hell for him to live alone, what it feels to be alone😭😭

Upar se she was like forget Jo I don't like ur behaviour here 🤢🤢

First anni pe aise wish 😭😭kya kar diya Jo ne 🤢🤢

I'm with Jalal here 😉

Jo needed to think so before doing anything as such 😡😡

Sick I undewrstand it's her fly but Jalal ka kya 😡😡

Poor Jalal i really pity him hee 😭😭😭

How much he misses her i just wished Jo could have atleast told no to her bro😭😭

Before u assume that I'm against Jo here lemme tell u I'm on Akdha's side neetu 😆😆

Just Jo's behaviour has angered me a bit😆😆

Par chalta hai coz it is true that absence maked the heart grow fonder...it def does

Thank god der se hi sahi Jo decided to go back to Jalal

I loved the sweet part of Akdha's convo that u added ❤️

It was short but yet it conveyed a lot

Ur beautiful writer darling 🤗

A small scene can be made into an enduring with ur sense of writing🤗

Woah Jalal must have felt so contended to have jo by his side

N then Akdha moments

The snuggling moment ufff

Akdha ur magic😳😳

I was like Jalal needs to give jo a punishment for that 😆😆

Are par tune wahi rok diya kya yaar 😭😭😭

Thank u so much neetu for continuing with the very story that has occupied a huge place in my heart 🤗🤗

Ur fabulous to me darling 🤗

Mere liye bhi likh liya kar kabhi itni buri bhi nahi mai😆😆

Love u 🤗🤗

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Anonymous

@ParijatDeewani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Monucute

Oye esa ni chalega😛

Oyeee tujhe lagta hai kya ke tere stories pe main nahi comment karungi😆😆

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Mavaddat

@Mavi_16_2

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

It is the best os neetu... i love it very much... but you shouldon't continue with two more shots as it looks that it is at cliffhanger...

Overall it is best thanks for pm dear...update BH as well

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lovespari

@lovespari

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Sweetupie 🤗

It was a beautiful beautyful os loved it..

A extend part of Revenge.. Haaye

OK coming to os.. Whn I strt reading I was desperate to know tht Y is ja angry to her but I know u will tell in middle n fr tht I patiently read n thn I gt reason..

N the reason is tht he cnt Stay away from his Jaan... Awww tht soo sweet.. Kitna pyaar 😳

His desperation his frustration n his YEARNING... Beautifully neetu 👏

Ohh reading this it tk me to Revenge... Now i so desperate want to revisit tht thread 😆 all ur fault.. 😆

U know I still feel u shouldn't end Revenge so soon I feel ther r much more in tht story... U abruptly end the story *sad pout *

But really feel good to read this Os 😊 Lovely...

U r amazing sweetupie 🤗

Please do write more n more n more n more 😆 os on revenge 😉 🤣

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lovespari

@lovespari

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Ohh sorry sorry I frgt to mention the last part...

Hw I frgt... Uff.. Anyway

Last part was awesome

Jo came to him bfr morning lik he want n giv him surprise as he was nt expecting naa.. 😉 😆

N tht desperate hug fr he was YEARNING Frm weeks gt satisfy... No actually both wer yearning 😉

N the last line... God this Ja naa... Very naughty 😆

Ohh one more thing I frgt to mention above post..

Tht is Ja GUSSA my god he didn't change a bit still gt so angry but now he try to control it... But sadly he fails 😆 But it's OK it's his way to show his Love to her... Really a tedha way 😉 😆

Chalo abb m done... Sach m 😆