NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 32~Chapter 37-UPD JUN 28th

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A

Indha chapterkku appuram ippadi oru expression-a???🥱
Our dear DQgiri expert author sahiba...🤗

Really? It's because different strokes for different folks dear... and one can never be sure...

I write every chapter to the best of my ability... but different readers absorb it in different ways, right?

The trepidation will never go.. 😆

Where were you?

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A
Excess Jalal yesterday.
This emotional sensuous stirring delicate ardent chapter today.

Wonder how Chellam is going to concentrate on her exams.🤓

😆

she's weeping!

@ Underlined - can I tempt Sandy for a long lamba comment then? It's been ages!

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Sandhya.A

@Sandhya.A

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Posted: 8 years ago

#142

This chapter, what a fantastic journey it has been Author Sahiba!👏👏 On many fronts and at many levels!

What began as a journey to survey the landscape to deal with the water crisis of Parnagarh ended as a huge emotional crisis for both of them!😕

Wonder why AMK wanted to take her on horse and walk for 2 hrs. Why not a palanquin for her and his horse for him? Did he not want to attract attention? Or did he want to spend time with her alone?

AMK laying out plans to build a canal and seek a permanent solution to the water problems! Good boy! Visvesvaraya would have been happy with him!

Heera's partial blindness and canals always seem to pave way for intimacy and this time how!😳

THE kiss!

( my mobile dwindling on 2% charge! Don't want to lose this so far! So posting it adhoora!😕 Will continue tomorrow!)

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SHIVANGI

@Shivangi28

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Posted: 8 years ago

#143

I'm dead!! Almost! !...

To be continued. ...

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Lana Ghosh

@lghosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

My Remix Poem
Little Birdie
by Alfred, Lord Tennyson

What does little birdie say,
In her nest at peep of day?
"Let me fly," says little birdie
"Mother, let me fly away."
"Birdie, rest a little longer,
Till the little wings are stronger."
So she rests a little longer,
Then she flies away.
What does Khan Sahib Akbar say
On the hill at the end of the day?
"Heera " says Akbarkhan
" Heera, What is this tear for?"
" Trust me; I won't let you suffer"
" Trust me I'll protect you!"
Heera's hurt is not fully healed
So she moves away from him..
What does little baby say
In her bed at peep of day?
Baby says, like little birdie,
"Let me rise and fly away."
"Baby, sleep a little longer,
Till the little limbs are stronger.
If she sleeps a little longer,
Baby, too, shall fly away."
What does pretty Heera say
To her man at the end of the day?
"Khan Sahib" says petite Heera
"Please let it not happen this way"
"I want to be alone" says she
Please, please, don't force me!"
OMG! our poor young Heera
Blurted out what she didn't mean to say!
KK.

Aunty can I add my own musings here? You have covered the first 2 parts, I will write about the last one!!

What does Akbar Mahmoud Khan Say?
To his Heera at the end of the day?
In matters of Life and Death -
Or when your safety is in the way,
I will use force to keep dangers at bay.
Otherwise, I have not forced you;
To come to my races or giggle and sway -
In my arms, where I want you to stay!
But till so it happens, I will go away,
When you accept our marriage as per se,
You will be my Wife in every possible way!!

I know I went by 3 lines more but it would have been incomplete otherwise. Aunty beautiful creation as usual with your remixes which I love to the core! 😃

Edited by lghosh - 8 years ago

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Lana Ghosh

@lghosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: lashy

Oh don't worry by the time you've reached post 50... you'll be quite comfortable around here... 😃
isn't it girls?😉

Unfortunately Binduprasad has no internet at her place... Kalgi has exams in a week, Lana is at work and Rose is asleep... or they would've given you such a warm welcome too!🤗

Devi a warm welcome to our HBAS house where we all chat, mull and muse to our heart's glory!! So please join us daily and we will be delighted to have your company!! 😃 As I always say more the merrier!! And don't get scandalised by my comments, I am an ardent admirer of AMK and I severely drool on him!! 😆 Hope I didn't scare you off! 😛 It's all for fun and gaiety! 😃 Wonderful to have you on board!! 🤗

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Lana Ghosh

@lghosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#146

Finally Bindu is here?? Which assassination mission did you go to?? Completely evaporated from here!! 😕 Good to have you back!! 🤗 Missed you re! Hope you will not leave soon again! AMK left and now I am feeling all soona-soona, need my friends around to perk me up!! 😃

By the way I love your comments about Heera not understanding AMK till she knows about his past! This is very true which I wrote to Lashy long time back!! It will happen slowly, let her take her time, when she will come to an understanding and will start missing him then see she will lap it all up, his past, his missions, his actions, his reactions, his reasonings...everything!! 😃

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Lana Ghosh

@lghosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: Shivangi28
I'm dead!! Almost! !...

To be continued. ...

Shivangi bai...yayyy!!! So good to see you! 🤗 Asked about you so many times but all of you guys were missing!! So how was it? The chapter I mean? Are you in 7th heaven or still treading on this earth? 😆 Moi, go, goa, gone!! 😆

Will wait to read your rest of the comments! 😃

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Lana Ghosh

@lghosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#148

Adwi, even you find the chapter hilarious I want to read about it! I am missing my elixir, so get to it soon! 😃 My state you know, 'swapan jodi modur ato hok se michhe kalpana, jagiyo na amai jagiyo na'!! 😆 I know you are laughing at poor me but I want to read Ms. Sensible's sensible approach to the story compared to my hopeless romantic interludes!! 😆

Rest of you I wrote a Bengali song which translates to, 'if dreams are so beautiful and sweet, even if they are unrealistic imaginations, please don't wake me up'!

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Vmanoh

@Vmanoh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: lashy

So well noted... yes... it's been water all the way... 👏 (that... and horses too😆)
Btw, which clue did she give away? Oh are you referring to their time at the fields in Aidabad? 🤔

So glad to see your comment here... thanks a ton, Mano (If I may call you that?) 😳

You can call me Vathsy & yes the Clue given at Aidabad for the farman. Love the way you narrate this story & also enjoy the banter that goes on in HBAS threads -silently.