Koi toh mila meri mistakes batane wala 😃Originally posted by: ..Prii1994..
U r a very good writer kiddo, but what u need to work is on grammar and more approachable stuff in the track... Sometimes u get so involved in one scenario that it loses the track flow... Rest alls good...👏
and bout grammer meri English teacher ki bhi yhi complaint thi 🤣
will try to follow ur track tip 😃