NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 28~CHAPTER 33 - UPD 3rd May - Page 11

Originally posted by: lghosh

I will write about the chapter later but this much I can tell you I was grinning like a fool while reading it. Everything was being played right in front of eyes! I literally visualised him dressing up looking in the mirror all satisfied, the smile tugging at his mouth at all those leg pulling, Heera's nervousness and trepidations, his heart giving a somersault when he saw her, their nikaah, their pheras and sindoor daan kanyadaan...everything was right in front of my eyes! It was as I expected! Perfect to the T!

You know Lana... if there were no discussions about the wedding beforehand, it wouldn't have been an issue...

But 33 was tougher to get this right because the expectations were already so high... when there's so much built-up expectation, it's always tough to live-up to it..

but, everyone's reaction here made me feel so 🤗

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Lashy! It's been an year😲😃

Time ka pta he ni chala na..

Congratulations dearie🤗

Thank you so so much dear... thanks a lot 🤗

Seeing banjaras gifts,now I'm feeling I missed the fun of wedding preparations. But I will be there for their SR😆😆

Yes.. it just somehow started growing and growing and became a very grand and enjoyable affair... I don't think I've had this much while writing a chapter like I did with this one - because of the celebrations

Wish you were here too 🤗

SR 😆

And that vm was from jhanvi di's side lashy. I don't even understand the lyrics of that song.😛😆

Don't let her take all the credit... you made it, na?😈

I'll come back after reading all chapters. Love you🤗

Waiting... waiting 🤗

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Chellam, what a festive feast you just gave us though the leads were in completely different mood but couldn't help but I was in the mood of celebration throughout the entire reading. ❤️ I'm so touched. 😳

Touch panniten! ☺️

The positive signal Durga gave for her little sister was the child like sleep in her lap so the rest eventually lead her to best vision and no headache. I'm so touched. 😳

This was the best part of your entire comment Chellam.. I went 'awww'

Yes her sleep, was a sign from Durga...(if you want to take it that way)

as was her headache gone, much better clarity in the morning

Khan Sahib's newfound feeling of getting embarrassed... is something I so admired.. and a small gesture for his Bahadur.. I'm so touched. 😳

Hee hee😳😆

And Chacha jaan gesture of standing as Heera's guardian... It's kinda overwhelming feeling.. I'm so touched. 😳

Actually, in Muslim wedding... there HAS to be a guardian for the bride - and he has to be a Muslim...Without a Wali, the wedding cannot be solemnised

like how in Hindu weddings, an elder does the Kanyadaan😳

"he thus displayed acceptance of his new wife - into his home, his heart and his life." Ufff... I'm so touched. 😳

>>>☺️

And I also sensibly ignored the part of villagers who boycotting the Nikah for the obvious reasons and moving forwarded with the same grin which I had when reading about Akbar's smile for her acceptance. 😃

>>>>😆

And looking at Heera through Akbar's eyes is something else altogether.. So eternal it's the feeling.. ❤️

>>> there will be a day we look at AMK through Heera's eyes again too!😉

Be it Akbar warm grip - the first comfort or Be it warm gesture of Vaid KakaMohan banna, Daya banna, Bajrang banna and Ratan kaka... Both are equally beautiful.. and I'm so touched.. 😭 😳

The swords being held up is a Rajput tradition - no other tradition has that... generally, it's brothers or uncles who do that, it seems😳

"She could perceive the heat of a thousand eyes watching her unveiled face right then, but it was nowhere as intense as the sensation of his dark eyes upon her, studying her expressions closely. " Uffo... this line is ☺️ something else.. ☺️ ❤️

>>>>☺️

When Akbar looked for some support from his mates and then realizing they are just Traitors.. I was all like 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 OMG!! Really 🤣🤣🤣

>>>>> 😆

'I broke a few rules and went against the norms,

With no regrets whatsoever.

Because every time I gaze into your eyes,

I'm reminded why I did for you, what I would do for no other!' OMG these lines are killers!! 👏 👏 👏 Kudos, Chellam!! ⭐️

>>> Really? I thought it was just simple! But, I'm glad here also his audience clapped for him..

And then Heera's inner turmoil and his temptation.. such a treat to read.. So contrast feeling. But it's very beautifully penned down. "He was gone, his side of the bed just as it was when she'd drifted off - untouched."

Uffo.. I'm touched. ☺️ 😆 🥳

>>> What a seeti maar exit 😎