Originally posted by: melovesja
Lashy my dear whenever you said it'S transitional there you drawn in your readers. Details on every aspect , deep understanding of character, their feelings all connected me more with them.👏
Heera's diplomacy,her pain, her hesitation on haveli trip,
Was really painful but like she noticed his reply for room choice and understood well. Time again and Gauri knows about her behaviour.
My realistic writer perfectly put all sentiments of pranagrahis. Closed one's respect for shahib and his gesture towards them was👏
Enjoyed all the rituals.
Most touching to my heart is Khan shahib's thought of heera only bring this day in his life and his mix feeling between in all celebration.without looking at her knowing about her pain , her expression, his respect for her family, slow down near her room and noticed and thank to rose flower not only told his care for heera but I feel it symbolizes how this unique plant again grow beautiful thus his shahiba too. His smirk at maids talk and looking everything with interest related to shahiba. His thought about His beguam shahiba's choice was
You always says he is not a romantic person but shahib is loving person not goes with flattery words but his thought s,his action,his care and understanding were must flattering Heera's heart.
The way you drawn his character from ch-24 is amazingly amazing. At parnagrah we saw some zalak but after accepting her With laddu's gift he open up his heart to us . His beautiful,soft,sensible heart came out from the hard shells and saw the shining.
His question how is she ? Feels like skip a bit.
Loved the chappy.