The riddle of death... (end) - Page 66

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

Hey stuti

Wonderful update dear

At last one review! And that too such a detailed one! Thank you so much Bindup! 🤗

I love the way you unfolding the mystery in this story. ..

So many things are hidden and so many people's are involved in it.

yes! I am making jalebi ka paanch in the plot! 😆

Because of one murder everything coming out now.

It's not just about money and property but corruptions , women trafficking and all.

In small village so many wrong things are going on.

Yes! Because there i no proper administration in the village. 😔

Poor jodha

Her family members are involved in it.

So sad to know that.

Yeah!

So i think bharmal also involved in bhiwandi case. He started handcrafts business only to hide his main business. No doubt why every girl never return from mumbai art-mela.

Rambha knows lot more that's why someone try to harm her.

Jodha save Rambha in right time but she herself injured.

Jaymal is really trying hard to hide something or wanted to save someone may be.

Right!⭐️ [You know what, you reminded my the whole story. I actually had forgotten what I wrote in this chapter and had to read it again. Thanks for such a detailed one!😃]

Bacchu sonar another new important character.

So he is the same person who called surya and now he try to harm rambha but unknowingly he harm jodha.

YES!😉

Now God only save him from jalal.

😆 🤣

Everything and everyone is so related to each other.

Ghotela nehi paka to maza kaise ayega! 🤣

So finally nirmala tell truth from her side.

So she too wanted to kill bharmal but someone else did that job.

But anyone in her place think and like do that. After all bharmal destroyed her life and try to destroy Sukanya life also.

Yes. What she did was very normal!

Bharmal was too much. He never think for other happiness. It's really sad to know he killed his own brother because of his dirty business.

He destroyed too many life. Anyone can kill him.

Yes... anyone can kill him! (Whom do you suspect? 😉 )

Stuti dear

So beautifully you penned down every scene. .now i am really excited to know further. .

Update soon.

Thank you so much dear!!! You really energized me to write further! I was not getting enough motivation for this one. 😆 Thank you so so much for ur comment! 🤗

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

What happen dear! 😳

Keep smiling and stay happy 🤗

Originally posted by: selvi1275

All your 3 stories are my favourite...😃😊

😳 😳

With Bharmal's murder, It is like a lid has been opened...But lid of what...A Pandora box ...Secrets have been coming out like flood... Jalal and group are bearing the brunt of this...poor fellows...their brains are on overdrive ever since that murder....

Wow I liked your analogy of pandora box. 😆 Yes many things are revealed.

Everybody on the radar now...Jo's mother and Grand ma are the ones left, I think...Their confessions are eagerly awaited...

Hmm...

Even the people of the village aren't behind...A lot of people know a lot more details...But you know...cooking with lots of ingredients is a thrill😃😆...and you are getting a lot of people into suspect list...this churning is going to yield a Beautiful story for sure...Good going Girl👏👏...I so like this story⭐️😃...

hehe... thanks for your beautiful words!🤗 I hope I will come up according to your expectations 😃

Going back, I realised that nothing has been divulged...so a lot more digging and a lot more confessions are needed to shape up something...

Yeah, more riddles coming up! 😆

I better start maintaining a diary ...to keep track of story...

🤣

Well I wanted to ask, do you by any chance feel the story is being unnecessarily stretched? 😛

Soon Jo's chacha will be cornered, I hope...with this attack...though he didn't mean it on Jo...

Letz see how JoJa make use of info that Jaymal is involved in attack...

Sujamal's diary needs to be retrieved...it will open the pandora box

Right! Let's see if they get it or not!

This is web of suspects...and this chapter has only added to its messiness...but i like how your story is growing...Waiting for more...Don't stop writing ...Once festival season ends, readers will return...itz really tough to find time these days...

Hope so!😆 Thanks di! 😃

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Originally posted by: selvi1275

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

No actually I was wondering if the net is too much complex and much stretched so people are losing interest. 😛