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Posted: 8 years ago
Broken Dream

At thresholds of girlhood like bloom
I was and saw my Prince charming
In dreams but Hide it from
My teas a throne shakhis.
I met him at cannal as
My savior and He vibrated the stings of
My heart and with unblinking eyes
I gifted him my heart.
He gave me a shoulder to cry
In my grief time and his first touch
as blooming bud thrilled my heart,
Stered my feelings...
I saw most beautiful dream
As growing girl with open eyes
to be a bride of my man and
Felt as his wife...
He wrapped his arms around me
At the loveliest moments
Secure my dreame with in
And I got my world...
Alas! If I could stay in that dreamy world but
HE brought to reality so soon and left me alone
And came back with ugly truth and
Saw me mirror of my life's need...
His reality only crushed image
Of my dream man but today
He shattered most elegant
Dream of mine...
When again I saw my Khan shahib in him
Whom I try to forgot but with imposed proposal
I feel everything slips from
My hand like sand...
My dream of to be a bride of
Man of my choice, be with my love
scattered in numerous pics I wake up
with my broken dream , was so close to my heart.
Edited by melovesja - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Bindu.

Shruti, even I'm unable to see AkDha in my DP. Actually I changed then removed and again changed the DP..and now sometimes it's visible and most of the times, it isn't! 😆

Magic 😲
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Posted: 8 years ago
@ Bindup
Superb review.👏

And with all pranagrahis vaid kakasa😊 reaction.
Edited by melovesja - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

Lashy di

What a update
Seriously di i am speechless
Parnagarh is the place from where all this started
now back to Parnagarh
Heera home , sweet home
Now khan sahib home also
Starting of the update is fantastic
Description of the surrounding is so beautiful
Thanks to your beautiful writing we can imagine everything
I was so eagerly waiting for heera and khan sahib meeting when it happened than that is something else altogether
Heera no matter how much she is trying to put straight face but she was nervous to meet khan sahib
And khan sahib well prepared to meet heera with his demonstration
Don't he knows heera so well
And heera my my this 16 year girl never failed to impress us and khan sahib with her royal attitude
I know khan sahib is not a romantic person but still when he admire his girl
That's was treat to read
Both heera and khan sahib compliment each other so much
Both are self-respect personality
Both knows when to admit their defeat and most important when to appreciate someone
When two intelligent personality meet and talk
Thats was really something impact full to read
Khan sahib try every way to convince heera that he is simple men but heera is tough candidate to convince
After all she is heera who won khan sahib heart so it obvious na its hard to convince her
Once heera loves khan sahib wholeheartedly
He is the first person apart from her family heera shows her weakness and share her pain
Once khan sahib three words affected her so much
In her hard times his three words assure her so much
But how everything change
>>>😭
Here now khan sahib ready to share his life and his pain with her but heera not ready to believe him
Forget believe she is infact denied to know him also
Indeed a sad irony
Khan sahib real identity change everything
How much khan sahib shows his care ,concern and even hurt himself to protect her but heera
She is hurt terrible hurt because is khan sahib who hurt her
His whole hard work hidden under one word ustaad
>>>well said 👏
It take time to unearth it
Let see when it happen but we can trust khan sahib in this matter
That day come soon very soon
Khan sahib is practical person and behave maturely every time
He is very sensible person
But sometimes heera behave like a teen
Of course she is just 16 year old girl
Sometimes she throw tantrums
Finally khan sahib reveal about burned scrolls
Another betrayal of khan sahib but he did all this only for heera safety
And heera knows this also
She knows khan sahib loyalty towards shehzaade
He take this risk only for her
If only she is not blind by his betrayal else she understand that he already won half her battle
If only she understand khan sahib shift everything from Aidabad to Parnagarh to start everything only for her safety sake
He leave his home for the benefit of her
Khan sahib loves heera so so so much
His actions shows that
For the first time he is fearing for his life
Since childhood he is fighting but he never fear but now he is afraid
If what something happens to him
Who protect heera and who protect Parnagarh
So many lifes depend on him and on Heera
Khan sahib behave just lime men of the house
Thinking of family future
To protect all of them khan sahib and heera get married soon
And khan sahib have to convince her by hook or crook
Of course for our good sake our love ones or our parents behave strictly with us
That time we feel bad but in future that was all for our benefit only
Poor khan sahib it so hurt him that she think so poor of him
Not even a one percent she believes him
No body beat khan sahib speed na
When he wants to reach somewhere he will reach there on time there
Poor heera feel so awkward to meet khan sahib in front of everyone
But this time she meet real ustaad not khan sahib
Heera also taken a back with his new attitude
I really impressive with khan sahib new attitude

>>>me too😛
But feel so bad for heera also
God Poor girl
Her painful cry is too much to handle
I salute to khan sahib for keeping his emotions in check
We can imagine how much he is in pain to witness his love in that pitiful condition
For only for her good sake he is doing all this
She is suffering lot but one day god return everything to her in such a beautiful way she never imagine also
How can god will so cruel to our heera
God she has cursed him
Cursed which he already suffered very badly
I just can't imagine also how much it painful for khan sahib
For whom he is risking everything she is curing him
But i don't blame heera for this
She is really don't know about him
He called himself Merciless monster and become Merciless monster only for her
I really don't know for whom i feel bad more
And finally she agree for marriage for her people sake
And her conditions
Of course she is hindu Rajput lady so her thinking is right
She don't have choice also
But khan sahib answer surprise her and uplift her spirit atleast
Life is so complicated na
If only heera just for few hours forget about ustaad and think about khan sahib than surely she understand him more than khan sahib himself
But her wounds are still fresh so it take time to heal all her pain
Khan sahib long way to go win her again
What a beautiful ending of part 2
Parnagarh to Aidabad to bansi and now back Parnagarh
Next chapter will be so interesting
Marriage of khan sahib and heera sounds so beautiful
But it interesting to see gauri , bindiya , and all Parnagarhis people reaction on this marriage
I know they will be surprise but pleasantly
New life for both heera and khan sahib


Thank you lashy di for this fantastic update
And plz take care of your back pain
Love you loads




Wow!! You never miss a point,be it their emotions or actions👏👏... It was really beautiful read, Bindup ❤️🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: melovesja

Broken Dream

At thresholds of girlhood like bloom
I was and saw my Prince charming
In dreams but Hide it from
My teas a throne shakhis.
I met him at cannal as
My savior and He vibrate sting of
My heart and with unblinking eyes
I gifted him my heart.
He gave me a shoulder to cry
In my grief time and his first touch
as blooming bud thrilled my heart,
Stered my feelings...
I saw most beautiful dream
As growing girl with open eyes
to be a bride of my love and
Felt as his wife...
He wrapped his arms around me
At the loveliest moments
Secure my dreame with in
And I got my world...
Alas! If I could stay in that dreamy world but
HE brought to reality so soon and left me alone
And came back with ugly truth and
Saw me mirror of my life's need...
His reality only crushed image
Of my dream man but today
He shattered most elegant
Dream of mine...
In the tent I saw my Khan shahib
Whom I try to forgot but with proposal
I feel everything slips from
My hand like sand...
My dream of to be a bride of
Man of my wish, be with my love
scattered in numerous pics I wake up
with my broken dream , was so close to my heart.


So emotional and touching mitu di 😭
So beautifully you describe heera whole love life in this poem
Title is just perfect 👏
You are the best mitu di ⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: melovesja

@ Bindup

Superb review.👏

And with all pranagrahis vaid kakasa😊 reaction.


Thank you mitu di 🤗

And waiting for vaid kakasa reaction
He was the one who wanted to make him Parnagarh jamaisa 😳

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Kuki715


Wow!! You never miss a point,be it their emotions or actions👏👏... It was really beautiful read, Bindup ❤️🤗


Aww Thank you so much dear 🤗
And study well
Take care also 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: binduprasad41


So emotional and touching mitu di 😭
So beautifully you describe heera whole love life in this poem
Title is just perfect 👏
You are the best mitu di ⭐️


Thank you 🤗Bindu
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: melovesja

Broken Dream

At thresholds of girlhood like bloom
I was and saw my Prince charming
In dreams but Hide it from
My teas a throne shakhis.
I met him at cannal as
My savior and He vibrate sting of
My heart and with unblinking eyes
I gifted him my heart.
He gave me a shoulder to cry
In my grief time and his first touch
as blooming bud thrilled my heart,
Stered my feelings...
I saw most beautiful dream
As growing girl with open eyes
to be a bride of my man and
Felt as his wife...
He wrapped his arms around me
At the loveliest moments
Secure my dreame with in
And I got my world...
Alas! If I could stay in that dreamy world but
HE brought to reality so soon and left me alone
And came back with ugly truth and
Saw me mirror of my life's need...
His reality only crushed image
Of my dream man but today
He shattered most elegant
Dream of mine...
When again I saw my Khan shahib in him
Whom I try to forgot but with imposed proposal
I feel everything slips from
My hand like sand...
My dream of to be a bride of
Man of my choice, be with my love
scattered in numerous pics I wake up
with my broken dream , was so close to my heart.


😭😭😭

Brilliant Mitu di 👏👏
Edited by Kuki715 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Kuki715

I will😎😆


Bindup.. yes was studying, I am an uloo, day time sleeping, night time studying 😆

Chellam di, Bindu di 🤗🤗

🤗

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