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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: divyaJA

Amazing chptr...
poor jalal really feeling bad fr him...
jo is slowly remembering abt her past...
she is also cnfuse...

happy fr mirza nd shivani...
tnxx fr the pm...
interesting precap...




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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: avishi467

Awsme chapter.Josh is falling for her jalal very nice.hope she will remember soon.Mirza shivani part is good.interesting precap.plz update soon Di.thanx for pm





will update soon...now i can see its avishi misra i presume...hello...m subhasree c sen of facebook...hope you remmber
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: SomeoneloveJA

Awesome update..
Thanks for pm...



thank you can u pls tell me your name...as i thnk m communication with you for the first time...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb chapter n thnxx for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Senapatichandri


HERE IS THE CHAPTER 20 FOR YOU ALL





Chapter 20

All the people somewhere gone hypnotise by the scene in front of them. Those who know what is their relation started hoping to see them together again.

HMMM... 😆

Both of them still standing the way they were. In front of eachother, while jalal has looking down. While she is looking at him.

Mirza was about to open his mouth want to break the silence, suddenly jalal's pocket vibrated. He took out his phone. It Manohar sir. Their manager.

Wrong timing! 😡

He took the call.

"hello manoharda"

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"ji bataiye?"

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For a moment jalal look at jodha. While looking at her he asked on phone,

"kab?"

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"ab mujhe information of baki sari cheese curier kr dijiye. Main milte hi aapko phone kar dunga."

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"thik hai manohar da, bohot bohot sukriya"

He keep the phone on his pocket. And without looking at anyone he went inside.

Bye to kahe dete! 😆

Mirza is the one who is the most confused with his beloved brother's behaviour. He doesn't even look towards him or his bhabi before leaving the function. He looked at his bhabijaan, she is looking down, may be thinking something. He can see tear drops are in the ages of her eyelashes, about to fall down but before it could fell she walkout of the function to the house.

Eder daabi ta ki boloto? 😆


Now mirza is in in a tug of war. He wanted to go for his bhai and bhabi but he cant left the fumction. So he sgnals shivani to manage and start the movie which they bought to entertain their guest.

Gochhano chhele. 😆

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Here in the room jalal is pacing one corner to another. What will he do? Can he do that? If he do that the pain will come more to him.but he has to do.

Eto kiser somossa?

The moment he turn around he saw her. She was standing outside of the room. With a billions of question in her eyes.

Aha aha...

"kya main andar aa sakti hu?"

She asked in a shockingly calm and composed voice. He looked at her for a moment. An unknown and surprising question meark she has right now in her face. Did she remember anything? He had been a fool doing those things, singing songs, that too infront of too many peoples. Did that made any vital mistake?

😲 Ei lok tar ki hbe!!!

"aao" th only word he said giving his back to her.

She has many question in her mind, but she don't know what she want to know. She had seen a thing which made her restless the moment jalal went out of the lawn. She has to ask him about that.

"tum busy ho?"

"nahi bolo."

"woh mujhe tumse kuch puchna tha."

Jalal for a moment got still on the place where he is. The he only tilted his head a bit,

"kya puchna tha?"

"kya tumne kabhi khule ankho se sapna dekha hai?"

"kyaa??"

😆 😆

She come more closer. With a fake anger and circeling her doe shaped eyes she said,

"kya kya?? Arry baba pucha ke tume khuli ankho se sapna dekha hai?"

"main itna bhi mandbuddi nahi joy eh sab mere sath ho' jalal moked her

Mandbuddi! 🤣 bangali chhele suddho Hindi bole???

"huh!! Langur kahika. Ek sawal pucho to 100 kilo ka bhao free" she murmured.

"kya bola tumne?"

"kuch bhi to nahi. Bas jo pucha uska jawab do."

For a moment jala could find his old chulbuli jodha in front of his eyes. Like nothing happened. Everything is fine. But he jurk his thoughts,

I thought the same...

"nahi mujhe kabhi aisa kuch nahi hua."

Now jodha grab his hand in excitement, "per mere sath hota hai"

"kya bakhwas hai. Aisa nahi hota."

"main bol rahi hu na hota hai."

Jalal now got irritated with her constant nonsence. He barked,

"ha hota hai,bilkul hota hai, tum jaisi pagal ladki ke sath hi hota hai"

😆 😆

"tum pehle suno to ke kya dekha?"

"kya dekha hoga, Shahrukh khan ke sath pahari area me train ke upar chadke chaiyaa chaiyya dance kar rahi ho."

🤣 🤣

The moment he compleated, a cushan landed on his face.

🤣 🤣 🤣

"idiot...gadha...yeh sab koi dekhta hai?? Woh bhi shahrukh khan??? Tumhe pata nahi kya mujhe shahrukh khan nahi salman khan pasand hai kya tumko to pata hona chahiye."

Salman Khan pasand! 😲 🤣 And she remember this info. 🤣 BTW, why does she think Jalal should know this?? 😡

Jalal look at her puzzled. What did she just say, yeh to bilkul pehle ki tarha...' he thought.

"thik hai batao tumne kya dekha hai"

Bol bol...

Jodha sat on his bed. For a moment she hesitate. what will he thought??'

"tumhe dekha maine."

"kyaa??????"

😆

Jalal turn around to her. What the hell she was talking??? He have to know. Did she saw anything??

Jalal went to jodha who was sitting on his bed. He sat near her legs and hold her hands. "what did you saw"

"i saw mandap and you are sitting there as groom, but i cant see your bride. Its blur. I saw mirza may be others was there also but cant see their face. You forward your left hand, then other some female came and hold the bride's mangteeka and is saw you filled her partings with vernmallion..."


I have a question. How can Jodha see a 'blurred' wife jabki she herself is in the place of bride? 😆 She should have seen that Jalal is applying sindur on her maang na? In TV shows the viewers can see a blurred bride, but how can the bride herself see her in her own dream? 😆

Jodha continue her talks, but jalal was shockingly looking at her. She is remembering!!! She have some memory last till now. He looked at her, she was talking and talking, like she was in a daze. Jalal keep looking at her cant understanding anything.

After some time, jalal keep his hands on her. Jodha look at him. In her mind she said no, no not again...again this feeling, i cant handle it. Kya hai ye... jab bhi yeh khadus mere kareeb ata hai ya hath pakadta hai to lagta hai mera dil nikalke abhi bahar aa jayega. Uff kaise roku ise' she continuously looking at him, thinking.

Thappar marke rok! 🤣


On the otherside jalal was calling her nth time, she is still in somewhere.

"huh!!!" she jarke out of her thought.

"what? What are you thinking? I called u atleast 5-6 time. Where are you??

She smiled like a fool then said, nothing, tum batao kya bol rahe the?"

"tumhe yeh sab kab dikha?"

"woh that day you are singing na that ravindrasangeet... during that time. I was listening your song closing my eyes, but suddenly this vision came in front of my eyes. But you know one thing, i dint feel it weird then, like i was enjoying then. But the moment i open my eyes, i felt that i don't know when this happen? Kya sachme tumhari shadi hui thi jalal?"

Look at the whole event, the dream, and her deduction... What a conclusion! 🤣


The last question shook him. Now this is hard to explain her. How could he tell her? He is in great dilemma. He want to tell her. But it will pressurise her on her brain to think and will effect her health.

Jalal ta manush hbe na

"u just forget na" he told wile controlling his emotion. "you may be saw some kind of weird dream."

"yes i also think that. May be its a sudden dream."

"yes so stop thinking about it. Ok?"

Jalal ke petabo!!😡 He does not want Jodha's memory to be back?

Jodha nodded.

A faint guitar string sound came from the outside. Jalal jodha both look at that side. The windows of jalal's room are wide open, the door of the balcony also. Jalal went and stand beside the window.

Tumi ashbe bolei...

[Since you'd come; ]

Mirza was sitting ona chair in the middle of the lawn with his guitar while Humayun was standing beside him.

"its for you my love, my hamida. Today is the festival of colour and you are the one who painted my life in a canvas with colour. Thas my dear for coming into my life and filling my life with so much love and the giving the biggest gift to my in form of Jalal and Mirza."

Romantic papa mummy. 😆


Here jalal didn't know when jodha came beside him. He was leaning on the window pane loking to the lawn. His eyes filled with tears looking at his father who loved, love and will love his mother to any extant. Being their son henow can easily understand where all the love for his jodha come from. Unknowingly the lone tear trassed his cheak while listening his fathers words. His father is a gem of a person whom he admire since birth. And her mother is that shadow who always protected them from any harm. Today he is roud of their love. He didn't know hs father's love for his mother is this much.

Jodha was also looking down but the moment she look at jalal she saw his silent tears. She can understand what is going on inside him.she turn to him and with her dupatta she wiped his tears slowly

Tumi ashbe bolei

akash meghla brishti ekhono hoy ni

Tumi ashbe bolei

krishnochurar ful gulo jhore jai ni

Tumi ashbe bolei...

[Since you'd come;
So sky is cloudy, rain didn't occur.
Since you'd come;
So flowers from flame trees didn't wither.]

Love is in the air...

He look up feeling a mild touch on his cheek. She look at him. She is here, yet so far. He cant tell her now that how much he loved her...how much he missed being loved by her...How much he want her to kiss him just like before and say with her dimpled smile "i love you my hubby" but now its all past...he dont knw if she will ever recover..but he will love her no matter what if she remember him or not

Tumi ashbe bolei

Andho kanai boshe ache gaan gai ni(2)

Tumi ashbe bolei

chourashtar police ta ghush khay ni

Tumi ashbe bolei...

[Since you'd come;
So didn't sing Kanai-the blind beggar .
Since you'd come;
So didn't accept bribe the policeman at the juncture.]

She look at him. Somewhere its giving him a great feeling to be near him. His feel always give her pleasure yet an assurance of safety. From the day she met him and unwanted restlessness surrounded around her. Shestill didn't know what it is. But being around him she can feel her restless heart calmed a bit. She always feel thattheir si something she is missing about them. Some relation, some sharing, some feeling she realise, but cant recognise. A feeling to have acompanion in her life...and unknowingly loving the feeling loving being with jalal all the time...she can easily underatand he created a special space for how mself in her heart.

Tumi ashbe bolei

jakir hushen vul kore fele taale

Tumi ashbe bolei

mukhho montri chumu khelo stree-r gale

Tumi ashbe bolei

sonali swapna vir kore ashe chokhe

Tumi ashbe bolei

agami bolche dekhte ashbo toke

Tumi ashbe bolei...

[Since you'd come
So Zakir Hussain(the music maestro) commits error.
Since you'd come
So kissed on wife's cheeks, the Chief minister.
Since you'd come
So golden dreams flock in visor.
Since you'd come
So 'I'd come to visit you', promises the future.]

The song ended. But they still looking at each other. Suddenly jalal realise what is he doing. He lookback from her., breaking her reviery.

Oi hbe Jalal er. Kadbe r gaan gaibe. 😆 Dude, try to recover her problem, try to get her back in her actual life, at least try to make her fall for you again to make everything clearer... No! Khali panpan kore morbe.

"i thing the programme is has ended. Tum jaao main badme ata hu." He said wile going towards bathroom. "tum woh sab mat socho. Tension free raho. Varna jitna recover hui ho, utnihi beemar ho jaogi" saying he went to bathroom.

Sudhu gaan nach e holo? Ektu hullor kore Holi khello na? 😲

Jodh look towards the door, "why do i feel you are hiding something jalal? Why o i feel you are avoiding me for purpose. Why do i feel you know the think which couldn't find till now, the relation between me and you"

Only Jalal knows. 😆

lunch time

all the guests have gone after the programme ended. Mirza gave every child a packet of chips a pencil box with stationary and 2 cup cakes as a token of gratitude. Parents are soo much happy to have their child happy. They thanks to humayun and ask him when they will send their kids for the class.

After saying good bye to all the parents, Humayun entered the hall. They have invited shivani's parents for discussion. Sitting on his seat humayun look at Mirza first. His face is coverd like a a thunder had been fell on his head. He is really scared.

Jhamela pakanor somoy bhoy lage na. 😆

"Mr. Mehta, what did you think about my little son's weird proposal to you daughter.?"

🤣

He look at his son who is now bowing his head down. Humayun wanted to laugh. He look at jalal who is comically looking at his little brother.

" you see, Mr. Muhammad, i am a very perticuler about my daughter" mr. Mehta said while looking at mirza. "i want every great thing for my family and specially fo my only daughter."

Mirza gulp half glass of water listening this. His heart started racing. Is he didn't agree? Humayun want to laugh out loud watching mirza's plight. But cant. Jalal bit his lips to cover his smile.

On the mean time shivani came from the kitchen with casarole ful of puri whiole jodha with the dum aloo. Shivani was hell scaired looking at her father. She satnd beside jodha making her hand empty.

Sosur-sasuri ke potachhe? 🤣

"till now i choose every best thing for my daughter. From best dress to best food to best education. And i will also choose the best groom for her."

Shivani - mira both look up shockingly. Shivani is in verge of crying looking at her father.no, no, she cant part away from mirza no.

She look at mirza who is more varnarable that her. More helpless. Mirza can not give her any courage now as now its all in both of their father's hand.

"and i have chosen a suitable boy for her." The last bomb from mr mehra shocked all of them present their except humayun. He know this will come.

Moha taal! 😆

He just about to say something but mr. Mehra stopped him but signalling by eyes.

"before today i felt that my daughter is daughter, but she disappointed me." Mr. Mehta said dissapointlly.

😆

Shivani cant control her tears now. She hugged jodha beside her and started crying. Mr. Mehta look at her daughter with a bit astornished. Humayun called her.

"shivani, look here."

Shivani slowly look at him. Then her father. He was looking at him. He saw his wife and hamida also cameout listening her cry.

"shivani, we have choosen the best groom for you." Shivani look at her father and mother helplessly.

"i think you know a boy named, Miza Humayun Muhammad, i think he will be suitable for you to be your life partner, what say Mr. Humayun??"

I knew it. Predictable twist. 🤣

"what???????" the first word came from mirza. He was so shocked that he cant cooover his shock.

Humayun and Mr. Mehta cant stop their laugh and they laugh out loudly. "i must say Mr. Mehta u are a great actor. Why don't you try for a theatre group. You will be red in a month. Ha ha ha ha ha..."

Everyone couldn't stop smileing looking at both elderly people. Hamida place her hands on shivani's cheek and kissed her forhead.

"welcome to our family beta, we are eagerly waiting for you to arrive as out mirza;s begum."

Shivani shyed like a red rose. And from the corner of her eyes look at mirza who was grinning at her.

"i love you" he said whispering.

Shivani just smiled hugging her mother tightly.

"now, this call for a celebration, isn't it abbujaan?" jodha said excitedly.

Ei to... 😉

With her words all stopped their laugh. Did she said abbujaan? Al thought for a while, all the family member look at joodha then jalal who himself is in shock.

"what?? Kya hua, aisa sannatakyu chaa gaya??"

"Nothing beta, you shouted so loudly so we had to stop our gasping." Hamida said grinning

"he he" jodha was embarressd. Here shivani's mother went in and came with kajukatli packet.

"First aap bhaijaan," she said forwardedthe acket to humayun. "pehla haq aapka hai bhaijaan, muh meetha kijiye is naye rishtey ki khushi me." Humayun about to take a sweet.

"nooo...' a sudden shut make them look at the site. Jodha shouted.

"kya abbujaan aap mithayi khaa rahe hai? Aap bhul gaye kya doctor ne kya bola tha???" jodha came to humayun, "aapko yad haina doctor ne aapko mithayi khane se sakt mana kiya hai. Aapko diabetes hai or aap bhar bhar ke mithayi khaa rahe the. Programme me bhi apko humne jalebi chakhte dekha, ab phirse?? Ap apna khayal kab rakhenge abbujaan??"

I sincerely wish Jalal will not spoil this spontaneous recovery process at least.

All are shocked and numb with her long speech. Humayun rememberd last time it was jodha who went with him for his suger test and scolded him after coming home founding his suger level high.

"beta, aapko kaise pata ke woh diabetic hai???"

Now its time for jodha to go stupified. She didn't know how she knew about diabetes. She looked all the people then her eyes land on jalal who was looking at him with smile onhis face. She can see a little tears on the corner of his eyes. Its always tough to understand him and her feeling towards him' she thought

PRECAP: JALAL ARRENGE A FAMILY PICNIC AS A SPECIAL GIFT

Jalal office toffice jay to? Bapre koto somoy oder! 😆


BTW, Jodha r family r sobai kothay? Or Maa chhilo na?

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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome chapter di
Jo behaving as old jo
Update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago



bhoi nei...bhule jas na sorkari chakri...jodha r accident er jnno 2 weeks chuti te chilo then holi so...


n yaa jodha r barir loker entry jnno stage ta toiri korchi gate crash to korano jayna...meyer sosurbari bole kotha...


r hullor korbe kire ora muslim to...bhule jas na jst fr celebration ei onusthan emni normal rkhlam jst ora muslim bole...
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Posted: 8 years ago
woow dr 👏
jo improving now to gain memory sooo nice
nice song 👏
thanku
update soon😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Fantastic teaser😊
Wonderful chapter⭐️

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