Akdha SS:The Insecure Begum*** Chapter 2 Updated***

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diksha

@sweet_diksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#91

superb chappy👏👏...and good concept..

but why this Ruks has to poke her nose in every story..😡

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ameena671

@ameena671

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Posted: 8 years ago

#92

wow amazing update loved it can't wait for next part thank you for pm.

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roseraja1915

@roseraja1915

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Posted: 8 years ago

#93

What an exciting first chapter, Shelly!

I am glad Jalal has very cleverly deduced that Rukaiya is the reason for Jodha's changed behaviour.

What could she have told Jodha to make her feel this way?

How understanding and caring Jalal is.

Hope Jodha confides in Jalal since we don't want her to drive him away with her insecurities.

Very, very interesting chapter, dear!

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Shinning_Stuti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#94

I will read it for sure... res till then. 😆

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Senapatichandri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#95

RES...but looks like brainwash of JO

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divya

@diya2291

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Posted: 8 years ago

#96

Interesting Story And Great Start
Insecurity Eating Up Jo And Affected Her Health
Such A Caring Husband Jalal Is ..
And Cute Bonding Between Hamida n Jo
Ruk Will Always Remain Evil Witch , Selfish
Ahem Ahem Moment But Jo And Her Insecurity
Hope Jalal Find Out The Truth
And Shelly Don't Make Ruk Win 😡

Update Soon And Thanks For Pm

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ritujajadhav

@ritujajadhav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#97

Amazing episode. I really love it. This ruqaiya I want to kill her stupid idiot.Waiting for the next part.

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priyadogra

@priyadogra

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Posted: 8 years ago

#98

This ruk is such a devil started her work from day 1

She has already created some distance b/w joja

Hope jo discuss this matter qith ja soon before its too late

Update soon and thanks for the pm

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lovespari

@lovespari

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Posted: 8 years ago

#99

Shellu 🤗

Congratulations fr ur scnd story...

Well Title itself interesting 😛 *Insecure * means jealousy n I m sure m going to love it 😉 in love story I truely love n enjoy jealousy prt... It's fun always 😉

Prologue is nice dear... LOVE MARRIAG ...n too akdha

Going to read chappy 😉

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lovespari

@lovespari

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Posted: 8 years ago

#100

Shellu 🤗

Wonderful chap... Awesome strt 👏 👏

Frm the topic gt Lil sense tht wht will in chap...

God it just the frst day of Jo in agra... N this ruk already strt troubling her... 😡 N tht too just bfr jashan tht means she didn't even let her enjoy ther very frst celebration. .. Argh 😡

Aww... Ja was so worried... Obviously his beautiful loving wife scare hell out of him by suddenly passing out... Whn thy should enjoy lovely moment... *stupid ruk*

Aahaan... Super smart Ja 😉 Although jo tried her level best to hide wht bothering her... But his ja is nt fool (atleast in ur story 😆) he easily understood tht ther is something tht is bothering her n it nt tht it strt now it Frm bfr jashan... Smart ja 😉 iI love his dialogues * THIS CUSTOM NT TILL YSTERDAY * thts the Tim I gt tht he understood n he gonna find out 😉

M Lil smart too 😎 😆

N here he strt introgating too frst no. Is of servant n the nxt no. Of main culprit ruk *angry*..

Ohh... His anger his dialogues which clearly evident Love fr jo.. Aww... I cnt tell u Hw much I love n enjoy Ja n ruks face off😉

Hw clearly he threat her to down mess with his Love his Jo Aww... N wht her place n Jo place I'm his Life very clearly n openly... I love u fr this shellu 🤗 Atleast in ur story we gt this which we wer dying to see in show... The ja open confession n tht too very clearly... Nt lik in show the he used to talk her lik she is baby n he is cajoling a baby...stupid I truely hate this in show...

Ohh shellu u too... Here too she didn't change a bit frst torring forring krna phir woh chudail wali hasi 🤣 yaha bhi 😆

Ohh I frgt tht Ja Jo n hamida scen tht was beautiful shellu.. 😊

N tht Ja Sweet threat tht he will bcm strict on it... So cute but we very well know he cnt b on jo if he want thn also he cnt... Areee she is his Jaan begum naa 😳 😉

The last prt is beautiful written shellu... Ja passion Jo nervousness yet happiness too... Sharing the frst close moment.. Hw thy enjoying but suddenly again tht stupid stuff came in her mind n let halt on tht blissful moment... Argh ruk😡 But thank God Jo handle carefully n Ja too so much understanding... Aww love him...

She lies n he believ no nt believe he pretend to believe bcz I know he somewhere gt know tht she hiding n he is waiting fr her to cam n talk to her till thn he will lik tht pretending... Right 😉 😆

Shellu although u say u r writing frst Tim historical.. But it didn't seems dear... U write very well 👏

Waiting fr nxt update...

Update soon 😃