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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalgi22





I am Harka Bai from valleys of Parnagarh
A puppet in the hands of fate
I may fall down many a time
Yet I will hold my head high
Like a true Rajput lady!

I am a blind... partially blind
A mishap took our carefree days
The guilt she never got over
Still, that doesn't hinder our affection
She's my sister, a protective mother!

I am proud daughter of Jagat Prasad Singh
He, a faithful savior of Mughal Empire
Awarded utmost rights over lands
Securing our future, the Mansabdar
Peacefully retired four years ago!

I am little sister of Durga Bai
She, a marvel of nature, a warrior
Fought with all her might, till her last breath
Faking the farmaan thus saving the land
A guardian angel, truly she is!

I am an orphan forced to flee from motherland
Till a lone traveler stirred my desolation
He, a unsolved puzzle, twice saved my life
Kept on conquering my mind eventually the heart
Strange I felt his Haveli... a second home!

I am just sixteen year old in his presence
Ignoring all the warnings deeply drawn to him
Risking my life so the future of my people
Jumped into a canal - a hollow of no return
brought alive a complete stranger only to slay my sentiments!

I am godchild of Maharaj and Maharani of Bansi
Ran to their cocoon to find solace
Instead I found... Jijasa as my groom
I exposed his true color and he exposed my secret
At the end, lost the only hope I had, my godparents!

I am bride of Mansabdar Akbar Mahmoud Khan
He, the shrewd businessman once spurned my feelings
Unmasked as Mentor of sister's murderer
Returned from nowhere claiming his love
Only to takeaway my Pride... My people!

Yes I am the unfortunate heiress of Parnagarh
The last ray of hope for my people
I lost everything in the game of politics
Still I am trying and standing on my feet
Holding my head up so high!


~~Kalgi~~



As I read this exceptional work of art from you Chellam... as I read how you've weaved the life of... the trials and tribulations of this young lady... showing its beauty, many tragedies and ironies... all I can say for now, is that I'm proud -

Proud to have thought of writing this story and it's main character Heera

Proud to have the medium of IF to reach you all

Proud to have friends like you

Thank you so much... this is the most beautiful piece of art from you where HBAS is concerned...

Don't believe me? Think of this... your poem inspired Bindup to pen a Haiku, forced Periyamma out of hibernation and compelled Manu to write more than 1 line ... 🤗 What more proof you want? 😆

You're a ⭐️

Love you girls... 🤗

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

*knock knock*😛

Hello dearies🤗


Good Afternoon Payaliya... or is it morning for you 😉

😆🤗 hows you girl?
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Posted: 8 years ago
Khan sahib haveli
Heera second home
Future of heera 😳

>>>>👏

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

Am I the only one here who doesn't have anything to do?🤔

😲
You forget payu
You have very important work😳
Like start writing journey part 2 and plz update God also
Lashy di also waiting remember 😳


>>>👏

Originally posted by: Kuki715

Bindup called me cookie... first time


Today Bindup's on a roll😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

Khan sahib haveli
Heera second home
Future of heera 😳

>>>>👏


>>>👏


Today Bindup's on a roll😉


Really 🤔
Lashy di ❤️🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali



Kausi dear,

You are a special lady, your poems are beautiful
You choose the words that are bountiful
Apt topics you always seem to choose
Making sure that they conform to our views

Your poems are much more than for a mere read
They give food for thought which we sure concede
Your poems always are the main story's highlights
Your imagination thus takes us to new heights

Even those who visit the forum very seldom
Are sure to admire the picture you pick for the poem
We know how very talented you are
We are lucky to have you with us who is a star!⭐️

Karkuzhali.



A trick that even the past 4 chapters couldn't do, Chellam's poem did... Wow Periyamma... what a way to drop in... beautiful... ❤️

And we all agree with what you've written... Chellam is a ⭐️
And this is 100% true👏
Even those who visit the forum very seldom
Are sure to admire the picture you pick for the poem

Btw, we are all (Baby and Babloo included) are missing you.. counting down to April 17th.. 🤗
Edited by lashy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

Oh 😆
You are most welcome payu 🤗


🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Why everyone is making me emotional? Image result for getting emotional gif
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy


And chath pooja! 😉

😆
Lashy di 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Kalgi! 🤗 How are you doing, dearie?😃
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Posted: 8 years ago


Originally posted by: lashy



As I read this exceptional work of art from you Chellam... as I read how you've weaved the life of... the trials and tribulations of this young lady... showing its beauty, many tragedies and ironies... all I can say for now, is that I'm proud -

Proud to have thought of writing this story and it's main character Heera

Proud to have the medium of IF to reach you all

Proud to have friends like you

Thank you so much... this is the most beautiful piece of art from you where HBAS is concerned...

Don't believe me? Think of this... your poem inspired Bindup to pen a Haiku, forced Periyamma out of hibernation and compelled Manu to write more than 1 line ... 🤗 What more proof you want? 😆

You're a ⭐️

Love you girls... 🤗


and lashy's words forced me to bookmark this page. I will read after reading last chapter, kal.🤗

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