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Anonymous

@ParijatDeewani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: divyadaya13
It was an excellent update.😊

Thank u soo much😃

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Vrinda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: ParijatDeewani

Oyye tujhe ab tak mera naam nahi pata tha😆koi nahi ab pata chal gaya na.Are yaar tujhe sab pehle se hi kaise pata chal jata hai fortune padhti hain kya😆forgiveness milne me bahuttt time lagega aur Jo ki shaadi bhi ho jaeygi😉

i m no antaryami...bus ye sab ulte pulte track hi sochti hoon...or i guess jo ki shadi hogi par ja se.. 😉

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misty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#93

Sooo sooo sooo sooo Awsmmm...

It was a collection of emotional wrenches...

Guilt... Anger... Pain... Determination.. Betrayal...

U hv brought out each emotion so well dat m at loss of wrds nd here i bow to ur bfull writing...

I had a visual pleasure all this while...

Atleast jalal noe knows of his mistake...

Nd where was jo all ds time.. Nd suddenly came up...

Wats in her mind nd surya her fiance..

Yup something is definitely wrong😕...

Correct the wrd shelly dii.. It shd hv been jo's brother 😆

It will be interesting how ka gets bak his jo..

Nd he ll hv to strive a lot...

Thanku fr pm nd update asap.. Bfull update 👏👏😳

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misty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--

i m no antaryami...bus ye sab ulte pulte track hi sochti hoon...or i guess jo ki shadi hogi par ja se.. 😉

Nooo dnt marry jo to surya... I ll kill him else.. Nd u too

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eshalli

@eshalli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#95

Awesome update fear
Continue soon
Thxc 4r pm

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Anonymous

@ParijatDeewani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: misty22

Nooo dnt marry jo to surya... I ll kill him else.. Nd u too

Jo ki shaadi hogi re aur Surya se hi hogi😆

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@old_charm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#97

Nice update dear , surya...jodha's fiance...😲 , interesting...😆

waiting for next , thanx for pm...😳

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nikki

@natashathakur

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Posted: 8 years ago

#98

Superb chapter n thnxx for pm dr

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Anonymous

@ParijatDeewani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: swetiii
amazing
Jo is so devastated
Jalal Atleast regrets his deeds
what the..
she is engaged
update asap buddy

Jalal to ab sirf regret kar raha bahut zada pachtayega baad me😉

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Anonymous

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Posted: 8 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--

i m no antaryami...bus ye sab ulte pulte track hi sochti hoon...or i guess jo ki shadi hogi par ja se.. 😉

Agar Jalal se shaadi hogi to twist hi kahatm ho jayega na😆

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