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Posted: 8 years ago
#21
Yes Toofaan Payal 😆 I haven't read the last 20 pages yet me thinks...

Short? 😲
Not short update 6000 words 😭 meri maa..

And even before I finished editing, Bond finished reading😭

Harshu... will you say this was more 'intense' than Mathura? I am hoping it is... 😭 because the misunderstanding here (I hope) is more justified...
The misunderstanding there in JA, I felt was unnecessarily stretched... 😕 and that was the one was Jalal was acting like dead man and all na...
I didn't like that track... because the leads were acting out of character for far too long...

I liked the misunderstanding in the JA movie though... it was taken very majestically...

I'll be away till Sunday morning because tomorrow is the Holi programme! Please wish me luck! 😃

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: lashy

Yes Toofaan Payal 😆 I haven't read the last 20 pages yet me thinks...

Short? 😲
Not short update 6000 words 😭 meri maa..

And even before I finished editing, Bond finished reading😭

Harshu... will you say this was more 'intense' than Mathura? I am hoping it is... 😭 because the misunderstanding here (I hope) is more justified...
The misunderstanding there in JA, I felt was unnecessarily stretched... 😕 and that was the one was Jalal was acting like dead man and all na...
I didn't like that track... because the leads were acting out of character for far too long...

I liked the misunderstanding in the JA movie though... it was taken very majestically...

I'll be away till Sunday morning because tomorrow is the Holi programme! Please wish me luck! 😃

yeah i go wid and agree as u said dat in dis updte d intensity in d MU was more and deep and meaningful too i too disliked mathura track since never liked d emperor even thou in disguise faking his death dat really irked me...😆d d entire track xecution was horrible...and dragged too much...😕JA movie since its a movie dey cant drag dts d 1st thing😆and yeah it lukd sensible...😃nywys wish u all d best and do share d pics if u can of d dance😉🤗happy holi in adv🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: lashy

Yes Toofaan Payal 😆 I haven't read the last 20 pages yet me thinks...

Short? 😲
Not short update 6000 words 😭 meri maa..

And even before I finished editing, Bond finished reading😭

>> 😆😆

Harshu... will you say this was more 'intense' than Mathura? I am hoping it is... 😭 because the misunderstanding here (I hope) is more justified...
The misunderstanding there in JA, I felt was unnecessarily stretched... 😕 and that was the one was Jalal was acting like dead man and all na...
I didn't like that track... because the leads were acting out of character for far too long...

I liked the misunderstanding in the JA movie though... it was taken very majestically...

>> totally agree on this , movie...❤️

I'll be away till Sunday morning because tomorrow is the Holi programme! Please wish me luck! 😃

>> oh ya its 11 th tomorrow , ALL THE BEST lashy di we know u'll rock it on Dheem Ta Daare...👍🏼

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Posted: 8 years ago
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yeah i go wid and agree as u said dat in dis updte d intensity in d MU was more and deep and meaningful too i too disliked mathura track since never liked d emperor even thou in disguise faking his death dat really irked me...😆d d entire track xecution was horrible...and dragged too much...😕JA movie since its a movie dey cant drag dts d 1st thing😆and yeah it lukd sensible...😃nywys wish u all d best and do share d pics if u can of d dance😉🤗happy holi in adv🤗


Totally agree...
If I had to compare it to a MU in JA serial... the closest I can think of (though still not too close) is the Arti scene/Sword practise... where there's attraction, but she thinks he's evil and he knows she thinks of him that way, but he will not bend! No?

Then also, two entirely different scenarios 🤔

Thanks for the best of luck dearie... 🤗

And the thumbs up about the picture!


Manu how have you been dearie? 🤗 thanks for the wishes...


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: lashy


Totally agree...
If I had to compare it to a MU in JA serial... the closest I can think of (though still not too close) is the Arti scene/Sword practise... where there's attraction, but she thinks he's evil and he knows she thinks of him that way, but he will not bend! No?

Then also, two entirely different scenarios 🤔

>> both Jalal & Amk are different...😆
Thanks for the best of luck dearie... 🤗

And the thumbs up about the picture!


Manu how have you been dearie? 🤗 thanks for the wishes...

>> am good , i hope u finally hv some rahat ki saans 😆


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Posted: 8 years ago
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And God knew she wasn't unjustified in wanting to give up. Yet somehow, at the end of each treachery, each tragedy, she managed to pick up the broken pieces of her life and continued wobbling ahead. She did the same today. Of course, the only thing that kept her going was a sense of belonging, a sense of responsibility towards those 400 families who were dependant on her.
👏 👏 👏

OMG so many emotions being shocked to cry to worry to proud. You just have outdone yourself once again, Chellam. Be it businessman Khan Sahib or Rajput heiress Heera Sahiba. Equally stolen the show. Just loved it.⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lashy di,
I've the same question again. Whom do I cry for? Both of them are guilty of their decisions and deeds. Heera is not in a position to think properly. It takes time for her to let these latest developments sink in and understand Akbar. Even if there was no Khan Sahib in her life, she would've lost the farmaan and worse, everything else too with Khalil behind her!

But, how can we expect a girl who has got nothing but betrayal and rejection lately,to behave in any other way just after encountering the biggest betrayal of her life!

I felt terrible when she thinks of ending her nightmares for once and all! 😭😭And was tensed too..but, how can AMK let his Sahiba do anything of that sort! 😳 If he isn't careful,all his efforts to save her would go down the drain.

Poor guy tried everything he could but failed to gain her trust.
Thus reducing the essence of every sacrifice he'd made for her, to nothing!
This again pricked my heart! He risked his and his men's life for her only to hear such horrendous accusations in return! 😭😭

It might seem she loathes him. But, if that's the case, her heart wouldn't have skipped few beats at his proximity. She would've felt disgust like how she felt in the presence of Khalil. She observed how gentle his grip was though firm..unlike that monster's! Heera knows her Khan Sahib is nothing like Khalil but how can she come to terms with all these things so soon.

Even I can't bear anyone ridiculing Akbar's painful past. So, it's better if he gives her some time. And I'm sure she's gonna heal all his pains, both past and present!

Thanks for those beautiful reassuring lines from AMK and letting Heera feel reassured albeit for a very short period! And AMK calling her Heera in his husky voice was..uff.

Thanks again for the wonderful chapter, for the captivating narration that let's us feel everything our leads are going through! 🤗


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Posted: 8 years ago
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And those ending paras abt Heera's strength to rise after every fall are marvelous, di! I feel proud of her and you for sketching such a strong character!⭐️⭐️Heera is an inspiration to all of us!
Want to know what is she going to do now. She could neither tell her ppl about Ustaad nor marry him! Pls update soon,di!😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved the chapter for several reasons...😊

ONE Engrossing conversation that made up the whole chapter yet so gripping and I felt it got over so soon.
TWO Akbar dealing it the way he knows best - business. When emotions, sentiments, soft appeals, reasonings nothing worked, his change of tactics to present a profit and loss statement was the most natural and interesting.😆

THREE Heera's refusal to see reason is perfectly justified. His refusal to acknowledge their relationship then, she sees as because his work was done, he wriggled out info and didn't need her any further then, and his acknowledging the same now as an underhand tactic to appeal to the people or some other sly reason.😕

FOUR This is the case of the perfect misunderstanding. Both of them are right in their views. Both can feel very strongly, yet regain their composures and think practically. What lovely characters you have designed Lashy.🤗

FIVE Both of them inspite of their best composures, feel butterflies in each others proximity. He inspite of her latest painting of him as the devil incarnate and knifey attacks and she inspite of what she saw of him as the biggest betrayer. His 'Heera' practically destabilised them both for sometime.😳☺️

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Is Heera going to agree for the wedding as it was the best way to control Parnagarh...🤔. Okay. I will wait and watch.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: lashy

Yes Toofaan Payal 😆 I haven't read the last 20 pages yet me thinks...

Short? 😲
Not short update 6000 words 😭 meri maa..

And even before I finished editing, Bond finished reading😭

Harshu... will you say this was more 'intense' than Mathura? I am hoping it is... 😭 because the misunderstanding here (I hope) is more justified...
The misunderstanding there in JA, I felt was unnecessarily stretched... 😕 and that was the one was Jalal was acting like dead man and all na...
I didn't like that track... because the leads were acting out of character for far too long...

I liked the misunderstanding in the JA movie though... it was taken very majestically...

I'll be away till Sunday morning because tomorrow is the Holi programme! Please wish me luck! 😃


6000 words? Okay, I believe you di.But we can never get enough of ur updates. Kyaa karein?

I was refreshing the page like crazy for every few seconds and jumped into it once you posted. Couldn't wait for you to change the title and give a green signal! 😆 Don't cry, I wanna read it again and waise bhi, it didn't look like there's a need for any editing.

Please don't remind me of that mathura track! It was such a 😡
Your NR and Ekta's NR are poles apart, di!

Finally, good luck to you. Rock the performance and return with new energy! 🤗

Love you and good night, everyone! 😊

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