NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 24~CHAPTER 29 upd 10th MAR - Page 12

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Anusha..

Kal, where is your take/review? Did I miss it ?... 🤔 . I read Bindu's and Sandhya's.

Bindu, I don't know how you summarised that emotional rollercoaster so well... I just couldn't travel through it all in my take. As I said, first reading I was lost. 😆 Second reading I began to ... see the brilliance of our author again. And I am only happy when I recognise my fav author Lashy's top form.


I penned down everything I felt while reading the chapter.Didn't feel the need to think what and how to write..It was all spontaneous.Such is the affect of our dear author's writing prowess!⭐️

And I'm super happy that you liked it,dear!😃

Yes,our author's brilliance could be scene in every scene and chapter.Her form has been top-notch consistently!⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: roseraja1915


Good night darlings- Periyamma, Lashy Sahiba, Chellam DA, Bindup, Bindu, Shruthi, Mitu, Manu, Adwi , Sandy Begum, Harshu, Payal , Akanksha, Jyothi, Shagun, Sherry, Vrinda, Ashu, Shivangi and 6Bs! 🤗

See you tomorrow, sweet Sahibas! 🤗


GOOD NIGHT ROSE DI...🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
@ SANDY DI
NICE POEM DI...👏
COMPLETELY DESCRIBING BAHADUR AND AMK RELATION...

@SHRUTI DI...
My heart cried for Khan Sahib 😭. Seeing all attempts amounting to nothing. Hope when he takes her to his past she will understand
I HOPE THE SAME...ATLEAST HEERA'S HEART MELT WITH AMK PAST... ...AND NICE REVIEW DI...👍🏼

@HARSHU DI...
NICE MUSINGS DI...LOVE THEM WITH APT PICS...👍🏼

@DIVYAVM..
NICE REVIEW, IT WAS LIKE READING THE SUMMARY OF CHAPTER...👍🏼




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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: roseraja1915


Very good review, Vrinda! Enjoyed reading it! 🤗 👏

THANKS @KAL DI @ROSE DI @SHRUTI DI...
GLAD U LIKE MY FIRST PROPER REVIEW ON CHAPTER...😳

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--

@ SANDY DI

NICE POEM DI...👏
COMPLETELY DESCRIBING BAHADUR AND AMK RELATION...

@SHRUTI DI...
My heart cried for Khan Sahib 😭. Seeing all attempts amounting to nothing. Hope when he takes her to his past she will understand
I HOPE THE SAME...ATLEAST HEERA'S HEART MELT WITH AMK PAST... ...AND NICE REVIEW DI...👍🏼

@HARSHU DI...
NICE MUSINGS DI...LOVE THEM WITH APT PICS...👍🏼

>>thnx vrinda😳

@DIVYAVM..
NICE REVIEW, IT WAS LIKE READING THE SUMMARY OF CHAPTER...👍🏼




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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: roseraja1915


Good night darlings- Periyamma, Lashy Sahiba, Chellam DA, Bindup, Bindu, Shruthi, Mitu, Manu, Adwi , Sandy Begum, Harshu, Payal , Akanksha, Jyothi, Shagun, Sherry, Vrinda, Ashu, Shivangi and 6Bs! 🤗

See you tomorrow, sweet Sahibas! 🤗

Good night, di🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--


@SHRUTI DI...
My heart cried for Khan Sahib 😭. Seeing all attempts amounting to nothing. Hope when he takes her to his past she will understand
I HOPE THE SAME...ATLEAST HEERA'S HEART MELT WITH AMK PAST... ...AND NICE REVIEW DI...👍🏼



Thanks dear 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Anusha..




😆 oh yes, that's just the teaser for the Kal Review.


Chitti is waiting...





Disclaimer: This is Lashy maatas signature find.😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

(I'm literally screaming while conveying this) - OH MY GOD! Just look at the picture !!!!!!!!!!! How can you find such a pic...Such a B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L pic!! ❤️ ❤️
The morning became extremely Good as soon as I received a mail saying that- Hey Bore! Get ready to Jump!!😆
I just LOVED it! Just Loved it! No matter how bitter Heera Baisa was but it WAS needed. The emotions, the anger, the hatred needed to get...OUT! And it happened before their NEW start...is all the more good!
There were some lines which made me jump on my chair and slightly hop around my class😆
and my teachers were like - Isko kya hua? Uchalne kyu lagi ?!!😆😆
How was I supposed to tell them that Khan Sahib was murmuring his admissions in her ears !!☺️

""WHOOOSH!

Akbar jerked his shoulder just in time, avoiding the blade that came lurching towards him. 'Sahiba... stop...'

'MANSABDAR? Y... you betrayer...' She raised the weapon once more, bringing it down in a flash 'You've taken away everything from me and my people... our homes... our lands... our pride... and you used ME to do it!!'

'Sahiba... I am not interested in Parnagarh... or in gaining power...' he angled sideways a little - keeping a watchful glance upon her, and another one upon the metal that'd just brushed past the skin on his arm 'trust me... I did this for...'

'I am supposed to protect my people...' she cut short his explanations with another swift attack 'but I... I'm the one who's let them down... and because of you...'


WHOOOSH!

'Sahiba! This is risky... the force with which you're handling that blade, it's going to cut your palm... please put it down...'


'What? MY palm?' How smug of him to preach about HER safety, when HE was the one facing the sharp end of the blade! It only made her feel smaller than she already felt!
Embittered, Heera sliced the knife against his blurry profile again.

And again.

But he dodged her attempts with such ease - it was as though he already knew where she would aim for, even before she actually took aim. ""

>> This whoosh whoosh scene brought back the memories of the very similar scene between Aishwarya and Hrithik Ohhh I just love it.
The exact way in which he was continuously reminding her of HIS being HER husband and the cute manner in which she was constantly paying no heed to his words. Though Khan Sahib is always A gentleman unlike the Akbar in the movie.😆

'That is ENOUGH!'
Having finally slapped his fingers around her right wrist, and then around her left hand, Akbar restrained her within the might of his clasp.
>> Now That was ☺️ very much required. If I were to write then😆 I wud have made him clasp her hands and spin her around ,held her from behind and...ohh my Wild fantasies !!🤣

""She waited for that 'freedom' to come. But it didn't come.
Instead, he took a step closer.""
>> ☺️ I m imagining the CLOSENESS !!☺️

""Why, even the most delicate glass bangle on her wrist hadn't cracked yet.""
>> This line meant too much His genteelness 😳 His unmistakable care for her

"" 'Who knows how many innocent lives you might have destroyed... how many homes you have looted...' she bit the insides of her lip to stop them from quivering 'who knows how many women you might have used... preyed upon... argh' "
>> There!! She hates him, she felt hurt, she is frustrated YET while saying such awful words for HIM, her lips quivered!"Him, using women"... the allegation which even her mind is unable to accept , her lips trembled while speaking ! God! Not everything inside her has finished for him.

""Just like the other bittersweet irony where his heartbeats that'd stayed calm until an instant ago, despite a knife being stuck at his throat - had now started quickening.""
>> ☺️ ☺️

""Waiting for her to regain some form of normalcy, the young man bent low, near her ears - his palms tenderly nestled around her arms 'Sahiba...' he whispered 'believe me when I say I've never destroyed the lives of innocent people... believe me when I say, I've never preyed upon any woman... in fact... in all my life, there is no other woman I've interacted closely with...' his voice cracked into a husky murmur 'I have touched, no woman...' his eyelids gently shut 'no woman, except one... this is the truth... I swear on Allah's name...' "

>> Haaayee!☺️! Im GONE! The PASSIONATE Khan Sahib...A Chappan- Bhog Treat to eyes.☺️ ☺️ Even I had felt the flutters in my stomach 😆 So what if I made a fool of myself in front of my teachers, So what If my red cheeks gave birth to so many misunderstandings in their mind... What bothered me most was that The Khan Sahib was admitting...
#Correction- Was Passionately admitting his feelings for her in the most beautiful way. So what if she is not ready to listen now...his charm is too magnetic to get a hold for long!😃 Ufff!!

""Slapping on the wall of armour around his punctured heart, he put his mask back up. To face her as the 'Ustaad' that she so sarcastically referred to him as - there was merely a resigned sigh on his lips in reply to her questions.""
>> Painful !

""Well, who else could've done it? Only HE could've swiped them away, when she wasn't looking!

'Unbelievable!' her hands went up to her parted lips 'What a sly man!' she was generally very astute at sensing things like this and yet she had no idea that she'd been robbed.""

>> Though she didn't acknowledged his skills with appreciation but sly remarks, HE is no doubt the BEST in his art. 😉

'I risked their future, by bringing you into their lives Ustaad Sahib... I'll set it right...""
>> Now that is something to worry... Hope she is not planning some rescue mission again.
Nevertheless, this confrontation has cleared some of the clouds (at least some) Yup , she wasn't even paying a little attention to his explanations BUT he has told what he has to. So... all in all... Its awesomely good that all this bitterness , hatred and rage was coming out at this juncture. So that there wud be no qualms left to explain in future...! 🥳

Akka...🤗 It was one of the best chapters! I'm still reeling from that "Admission" part Thank goodness that I'm a Pre-school teacher. If in any case I was a secondary one.. God! I wud have been teaching them the formulas of Love, Concepts of Romance and theories of Hatred-wala-love..😆😆😆

Now the Waiting part begins... huh!!
🤗 ❤️ 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: roseraja1915


Good night darlings- Periyamma, Lashy Sahiba, Chellam DA, Bindup, Bindu, Shruthi, Mitu, Manu, Adwi , Sandy Begum, Harshu, Payal , Akanksha, Jyothi, Shagun, Sherry, Vrinda, Ashu, Shivangi and 6Bs! 🤗

See you tomorrow, sweet Sahibas! 🤗


GOOD NIGHT ROSE DI❤️

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