New Life: Thread 3... Chapter 50 (epilogue) updated - Page 43

Originally posted by: sweety992

Finally joja going to agra 😛 you wrote superbly 👏

Thanku dear 😛

Update 😊

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

Stuti

Wonderful update dear

>>Thank you dear. 😳

I just love the attitude of jalal in handling sharif .

Only with words jalal made sharif nervous like hell.

After trapping jalal also sharif didn't won over him .

After all jalal is jalal

>>He is THE SHAHENSHAH you know? 😆

Like the dialogue of jalal that throne also didn't accept sharif as emperor.

>> It is true also...

Funny indeed .

So aftaar also with sharif.

Woah what timing of jodha to save jalal

>>😉

Jodha saved jalal with her arrows

Woah she hit arrows perfectly at night also.

>>The way she did with Benazir. 🤣

I love the fight scene.

Whenever sharif started to defeat he started to manipulate people with using emotional cards.

>>Sharifuddin's character is like this only. He is coward and foul.

First he used bakshi name to defend himself but when it didn't work he attack jalal most weak point.

Poor jalal just now he is healing from this grave pain , when sharif instigate him with jalal death babies, he couldn't control himself.

>> 😔

God sharif attack jalal already injured left arm.

Poor jalal he is in so much pain.

That was so painful part to read.

>>It was tough to write as well.

Then come jodha in kali ma avatar to save jalal.

Finally jodha punished sharif for all his crime.

Sharif deserved that.

>> 😆 (Btw, did Sharifuddin of the show was also given the same punishment by Jalal? I just can't remember so asked.)

Last part was beautiful.

All is well in the end.

>>😳

So beautifully jalal console jodha but he himself going through emotional pain.

Till now he can't come over from the pain and now sharif words make it worse.

>>Yes Sharifuddin did not only hurt his physical wound, but also doubled his mental turmoil.

I hope jodha love heal everything.

>>Yes... 😳 😳

Precap is good.

So finally both are returning Agra.

But this time both are unite to fight with every problems.

Now they start their new journey.

>>Yees a new start in a new life. 😊

Thank you so much stuti for this wonderful update.

Waiting for next chapter. .

>>Thank you dear for such a wonderful review...⭐️

The fiery exchange between Jalal and Sharifuddin was superbly written.

The lion and rat analogy was amazing!

And the final showdown between Jalal and his nemesis was fantastic!

Through your precise description the reader could visualize each and every strike and counterstrike.

On the verge of losing , the pathetic coward tried everything in the book to plead for his life, from playing the brother-in-law card and when everything failed, to hitting below the belt to bring up the matter of the deaths of the twins to cause Jalal to falter, which he did and allowed Sharifuddin to get the upper hand.

Oh, when that devil was torturing Jalal, I was literally fuming mad and was so relieved when Jodha came to save the day.

The twins' deaths continues to haunt Jalal and he does not want to share his grief with his wife, knowing very well how she herself has endured the agony of it , too.

Stuti, this was a stellar chapter, brilliantly written. Thank you so much, dear!👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

The fiery exchange between Jalal and Sharifuddin was superbly written.

Thank you di! 😳 I enjoyed very much while writing that part. 😆

The lion and rat analogy was amazing!

😃 😳

And the final showdown between Jalal and his nemesis was fantastic!

Through your precise description the reader could visualize each and every strike and counterstrike.

Thank God! I was unsure if it is a clear description or not.

On the verge of losing , the pathetic coward tried everything in the book to plead for his life, from playing the brother-in-law card and when everything failed, to hitting below the belt to bring up the matter of the deaths of the twins to cause Jalal to falter, which he did and allowed Sharifuddin to get the upper hand.

Hmm... 😔

Oh, when that devil was torturing Jalal, I was literally fuming mad and was so relieved when Jodha came to save the day.

⭐️ 😎

The twins' deaths continues to haunt Jalal and he does not want to share his grief with his wife, knowing very well how she herself has endured the agony of it , too.

Yes... 😔

Stuti, this was a stellar chapter, brilliantly written. Thank you so much, dear!👏 👏 👏

Thank you thank you so much Di for this beautiful review.😳

Originally posted by: kajal2005

Fab Fab Fab!!!!👏

Once again u proved how amazing writer u r😃

My most favourite part was Lion and Rat argument 😆😆

Jodha took maa kali avatar today to save her husband😲

Thank god the war has ended! Hoping for some peaceful moments now😊

Thanku for pm

Continue soon

Originally posted by: amitaprasad

As usual u rocked dear writer...I loved this Jodha... entire Chappy is interesting and intriguing...u have penned down so smoothly...love u for this treat...

Originally posted by: selvi1275

An excellent update Stuti...an out and out thriller...

You have brought out all the scenes very vividly in front of our eyes...

>> Thank you sooo much! I am so happy that I was able to visualize you everything🤗

Jalal getting caught in trap---->I didn't like this😕...Luck shining brightly before going off for Shariffudin...the swine calling the emperor by name...with his every reply, my anger was building up😡😡😡...and it burst itz dam when he was imagining about Jo...that too in front of her husband ...his audacity...I'm surprised Jalal didn't read his thoughts coz he was standing in front of him...

>> Jalal kindna guessed that there must be something in Sharifuddin's mind so he told Jodha to wait behind so that they can catch Sharif readily. Jalal might have read his thoughts, but that time he did not lose his temper and kept his cool to fight him. He lost control over himself when Sharifuddin talked about Hassan and Hussain.

Jo took care of aftaar and Jalal would've finished him off, but for the distraction and mostly his wound...the swine attacked his sore point both physically and emotionally...making it difficult for Jalal to recover...

😔 😔

My blood boiled when that swine was injuring Jalal's shoulder with his foot.😡😡...Jodha finishing him off was magnificient...you know by this time my emotions and heart rate was riding high...and I'm sure it will continue to be, every time I think about this...This chapter is epic Stuti...

>> Really?😳

I so liked the way you related Jo's look to Ma Kali...when Jalal saw her like that...it was a hair-raising moment for me😳...she looked like Godess of destruction...and with his one call...she was back to being his divinely wife...Lovely Stuti...👏👏

>> Wow never thought you will like it so much! Loved your lines Di, love you!🤗

Jalal still living with that grief is very painful...so she didn't hear Sharrif saying those awful words to Jalal...Poor Jalal...His wound was just curing off...And Jo talking about how she fought...was very cute...

>> Yes it is hard for Jalal. 😔

i would say for all your three stories, the latest chapter is somewhat more lively and thrilling...More different they are, this time...⭐️

>> Maybe because I was on a writing spree. 😆