AKDHA Os/SS: Yeh Ishq Hawa Hai... chapter 6 updated!!!

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Duha Saad

@duhasaad

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Posted: 8 years ago

#101

Awesome dear
So Jodha was really fearing him
Jalal made it clear that he is not that bad
He made it clear that he is bilal brother but not copy
This is good
Jodha has a hope in jalal
Waiting for next update
So update soon

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Senapatichandri

@Senapatichandri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: lashy
Hi Subashree..
As promised, here I am...😳

I wanted to read this - the fact that it's only 3 chapters old makes it easier for me to catch up!
Started reading too...
Liked the concept... Which seemed very interesting!
(Loved the banner, btw!!!!👏)

But a good chunk of the story is in Hindi...
Can you please write in English...
I couldn't finish first part
Since it's only 3 parts old, can you rewrite in English too? I would like to follow this story!😳

hi lashy didi...thnx fr cmmnting...as my computer net broke down so hv to post through mobile...

btw as i say m very poor in english bt will try to write in english...bt some of the dialog i feel if in hindi it sounds grt...bt still will try to say...i will send u a translation of chapter 1

keep commenting...keep reading
and btw didi

may be my account is named Subhasree c sen...bt shraddhya didi...my real name is chandrima...u can call me chandra as my bro call me this

Edited by Senapatichandri - 8 years ago

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Vrinda

@--Vrinda--

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Posted: 8 years ago

#103

Awesome update...
specially jo Jodha ne ja ko bite ki woh wala part... 😛

update soon and tnx for pm

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Vrinda

@--Vrinda--

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Posted: 8 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: Senapatichandri

hi lashy didi...thnx fr cmmnting...as my computer net broke down so hv to post through mobile...

btw as i say m very poor in english bt will try to write in english...bt some of the dialog i feel if in hindi it sounds grt...bt still will try to say...i will send u a translation of chapter 1

keep commenting...keep reading
and btw didi

may be my account is named Subhasree c sen...bt shraddhya didi...my real name is chandrima...u can call me chandra as my bro call me this

Rima di aap bhi mere jaise tuti futi English mai likhne ki aadat dal lo, mai ko toh samajh ni aata kaise sab mera chappy samajh lete hai 🤣🤣

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Senapatichandri

@Senapatichandri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--

Rima di aap bhi mere jaise tuti futi English mai likhne ki aadat dal lo, mai ko toh samajh ni aata kaise sab mera chappy samajh lete hai 🤣🤣

haa lagta hai yehi karna padhega...bt har bar meaning zubaan pe nahi aati...n sab yaha india se v nhi h o kharab english likkhi to khilli udd jayegi...
soch kya hoga!!!!

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maheshi

@amitaprasad

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Posted: 8 years ago

#106

Very intriguing and interesting meeting.. Why are u not updating it frequently.. Concept is refreshing and thrilling and ur approach towards this story is superb..please update it regularly.

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Vrinda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: Senapatichandri

haa lagta hai yehi karna padhega...bt har bar meaning zubaan pe nahi aati...n sab yaha india se v nhi h o kharab english likkhi to khilli udd jayegi...
soch kya hoga!!!!

kuch ni hota..Meri English kunsi achi hai...kai baar meaning yad nhi aata toh google pe search ho jata hai...mera toh kisi ne majak nhi bnaya...try karo english type mai...ulta English type easy hai...spell check bhi easy hai

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Senapatichandri

@Senapatichandri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--
kuch ni hota..Meri English kunsi achi hai...kai baar meaning yad nhi aata toh google pe search ho jata hai...mera toh kisi ne majak nhi bnaya...try karo english type mai...ulta English type easy hai...spell check bhi easy hai

lagta hai u bhi google dictionary ki aupad hai like me...yeh chapter ki kuch kuch maine google dictionary se lie hai...jo pata hai bt yaad nhi ata...jaise ki word struggle...jab likh rhi thi yaad nhi aa rha tha to lg rhatha k sar fod du apna yaad nhi aa rha...fir google baab ki yaad ayi...or woh to sarvagyani h so...kar di

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Senapatichandri

@Senapatichandri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--
kuch ni hota..Meri English kunsi achi hai...kai baar meaning yad nhi aata toh google pe search ho jata hai...mera toh kisi ne majak nhi bnaya...try karo english type mai...ulta English type easy hai...spell check bhi easy hai

lagta hai u bhi google dictionary ki aulaad hai like me...yeh chapter ki kuch kuch maine google dictionary se lie hai...jo pata hai bt yaad nhi ata...jaise ki word struggle...jab likh rhi thi yaad nhi aa rha tha to lg rhatha k sar fod du apna yaad nhi aa rha...fir google baab ki yaad ayi...or woh to sarvagyani h so...kar di

Edited by Senapatichandri - 8 years ago