Untold Secrets!!! ~Thread 3~ EPILOGUE UPDT 15+ PG1 10TH Feb(Completed) - Page 7

Originally posted by: duhasaad

Awesome ending chapter dear
Loved it
Write the epilogue soon
Will be waiting

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Congrats for new thread Harshu🥳

Amazing chapter😃

The reunion of father and son was nice

The scenes between jalal and jodha were beautiful❤️

Mahajan and pasha were deserved the punishment they got😡

Eagerly waiting for the epilogue

Originally posted by: sorathsheikh

Awesome update sis 😃

The spreading of the news , and fear was setting in As per the order Pasha and Mahajan would be taken in execution ground ... This scene seems scary 😲😆... both were screaming ... sissy this part is too scary ... Loved the Conversation between gopal singh uncle and shehzada 😃😃 wow caravan started moving ahead , Loved Jalal and jodha's conversation Big smile continue again epilogue ? say yes 😃 thanks for pm 😃

Originally posted by: kartikaJA

awesome update

Originally posted by: Kuki715

Last chapter 😭... really 😭...

>>aww dont worry if sumthing strikes me worth writing unlike dis stry 😆will strt pakka😳🤗

Fantastic Harshu di 😃. The execution sense and ways were quite scary 😲... no wonder all had come from near and far to witness this😉... We never got to see Pasha's grand entry but we're fortunate enough to see his exit 😆. But seriously elephants, their pointed tusks... brilliantly written 👏.

>>thnx dear...😉i knw i wanted to put a note abt d 1st prt being fr strong hearted ppl but forgt 😆

This penance was considered one of the terrible ones for the criminal was placed under the foot of the elephant and if proven guilty that would simply mean, it would be slice off the person into pieces and then if needed further he would be flogged off his skin and would be stuffed with hay.

^^^

Is this true😲

>>yesh der were 2 kinds of execution one was dis whch i mentioned slicing wid d knives and d other was simply crushing d criminal under d foot of d elephant😃

The forest scene with dacoits was also a delightful read⭐️. Sensible Jo following Jalal's orders.. rare sight 😆. Her remembering of earlier Agra and Delhi trips as a little girl was cute 😳. And then his sword fight and his looks... hope Lashy di is fine🤣.

>>glad u found dis forest scene delightful...😳ya jo did shw sensibility in agreeing wid jalal's orders...😆m eagerly waiting fr lashy's reaction aftr reading jalal's part🤣🤣

Finally emperor and Jalal met forgetting and forgiving each other . It was quite emotional...

Jo's adjusting to her near life.

>>yeah finally jalal and emperor ka milan hua😆😆epic milan😉and jo is slowly getting adjusted wid her new life😛

Just realised can't even say waiting for next part 😭. Thank you di, thank you for taking us this haunted city of Surajgarh where we got to meet such talented and beautiful people... 🤗. And thank you for putting up with me and my stupid koschens 😛. Love you ❤️ ❤️.

Would love to read something again from you 🤗

>>aww a big hug 🤗and m glad u did njoy and supported me till d end wid dis horrible story😆😆and luv u loads❤️❤️and not at all i always njoyed reading ur interrsting koshtens...😳will try to cum up wid another stry🤗

Originally posted by: divyadaya13

Excellent update. The punishments used to be so cruel in those days. I skipped that part for i cannot take violence. Waiting for epilogue. Update soon dear.

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

What a scary opening to last chapter??!! 😲 😲 😲 Much pleasure to read Jalal and Gopal Singh bonding!!😳 Finally Jalal did something all by himself!! For one moment i thought ayyo Harshu also going to give us Mirchi war. But thank god not!! 🤣 Their grand welcome and father son reunion is Wonderful finish Harshu!! 👏

Originally posted by: melovesja

Awesomely written whole execution scan according to that era😳 was really a hair raising and like the attack scan gives jalal sword a golden chance to shine👏 love the way jo admired his skill.parting scan of friend was superb.Beauty of Agra palace was ⭐️ love whole scan of father son deo but the one line about politics which effects this royals life taken my heart and emperor's indication to take blessing from mirza was 👏 how whole heartedly he accepted jo and announced jalal as feature emperor was lovely.loved jj talk.😃

Originally posted by: melovesja

Does Jalal brings back Omar ? Harshu