NOVEL*Hiding behind a Stranger*Chapt 26(27th JAN)-MONGOL WARFARE PG 1 - Page 65

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pandrangijyothi


Hi harshu dear...
I'm eagerly waiting for that dear...
From now onwards I'm also joining you people. Hope you all will enjoyed with me.

yeah sure we al will njoy and u too😳😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: harshu27

yeah sure we al will njoy and u too😳😉


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: luvuyuvi

It is through pretences that they met, she in the pretence of maid ,and him in the pretence of businessman. It is in the shadows of the death, that they are living. But when they fell in love, it was no pretence, it was fierce, passionate...that was the reason that both of them go out of the way to protect the other. Yes ,they are far far away from each other, but they are working for the same purpose. They are fighting this war together... The battle heera has lost, in the dual with mahinder, Akbar has won by beating shehzade .for the time being though..
It was also interesting to see how it was all necessary. Heera meeting Akbar, him rejecting her, heera denying to marry mahinder ,to know certain truths and also true faces,so that he could make her his bride.
It is Akbar's race against time, from the time he was searching for the farmaan till the time he would find heera.
As Akbar got to meet his huzoor ,it was time for shocks and revelations. He came to know about bansi disowning heera, Khalil on his way to harm heera and most importantly shehzade betraying his trust. Shehzade also got to know ustaad's involvement with his 'assignment'. In first half of the chapter,shehzade was testing Akbar's patience, toying with him ,having upper hand in this dual .in fact, he won few rounds too..but then it was USTAAD he was playing with. If he is in your camp,it is boon ,but once he became your enemy, it is the biggest curse.
As Akbar produces the much awaited farmaan, shehzade could not refute his claim to promotion. Akbar extracts from shehzade the much-deserved promotion. Safety and secure future for heera and parnagarh. It was perfect example of how words are true weapons. And especially how he revealed about heera later,when the farmaan was sealed. As Akbar got shehzade to do what he want ,I had only one thing to say"yeh sheh aur yeh maat."
It was truly a master class move.
It was very painful to see ,heera packing her bags to move from bansi. The one home she knew after parnagarh, but maybe for better because only after moving from bansi ,that she will encounter khan sahib. Her conversation with gauri was really heartfelt. After her family, her community and her fate had let her down,she had turned to the stranger; finding solace in his company. As he also rejected her, now she is going to try and save her people by diplomacy.
Akbar who had stopped in capital to plan and organise his limited resources is running out of time. An excellent warrior general that he is, ,he knows how to use limited resources to their maximum. His loyal people were also plus point for him. The trio could not help but tease him, and he didn't mind much either. But the reminder of impending trouble is for us as well as for them.
Akbar and his group ,who almost covered the distance with Khalil is probably resting and heera is facing the monster. As last chapter belonged to Akbar, it was heera who shone the most in this chapter.
Heera who has decided on the course of action ,they have to take is taking the huge risk, as dangers are lurking around... Both Akbar and heera, are very intelligent in their understanding of the situation and planning accordingly. As she make sure that her people would be ready to move if necessary from parnagarh. The decision must be so difficult, that too for a 16 year old. Meeting the shehzade, is also very dangerous, for he might kill her or arrest her,she would never get to see her people again.
The people of parnagarh are indeed leaving their precious feather in stromy night. But the feather is that of peacock, the one which signifies Krishna, and thus signifies divinity. It would surely get back at its rightful place.
And last but not the least ,the encounter of beauty with the beast. It was ominous all the way , be it the carnivore or the gathering clouds or gokul which didn't return. As both of them finally were face to face. It was really outstanding portrayal of the strong 16 year old who knows how to put people at their places, to prove why she is unique, for no other girl could stand in front of the monster and greet him. She of course was terrified, but she didn't show it to her face,and kept him guessing. At the end, even Khalil was intrigued to know, why she was not reacting and what she would do next.
Hats off author!!!!!!! It was really excellent chapter. Thank you for all the efforts that you put in the chapters and other information.
P.S. - I had written the comments and then it was deleted somehow, so sorry for the delay. I hope it's not boring. And yeah, I got new phone.😛


Wonderful review akanksha 👏👏
And it's not boring ok
Beautiful way you describe encounter of beauty with the beast
Of course heera was terrified but she didn't show it on her face
That was best thing
And congrats for new phone dear
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


Adwi dearest, This remix is for you!
Sachu Patti.

The Original:
(My remix in Red:)

She'll be comin' 'round the mountain
When she comes,
(When she comes).

She'll be comin' round the mountains

when she comes

(when she comes)

Singing aye aye yippy yippy Aye Aye

Singing Aye aye yippy yippy Aye aye

Singing Aye Aye yippy aye Aye yippy

Aye Aye yippy yippy Aye Aye!


She'll be coming to the forum with a Bang!

She'll be coming to the forum with a Bang!

Adwi coming to the Forum, Our Adwi coming to the Forum

Coming to the forum with a Bang Bang!

She'll be drivin' six white horses
When she comes,

(When she comes)
She'll be drivin' six white horses
When she comes,

(When she comes)

Her posts will be special in many ways

Her posts will be special in many ways

Her posts will be special in many ways

Special in many ways, special in many many ways!

Oh, we'll all go out to greet her
When she comes,

(When she comes)
Oh, we'll all go out to greet her
When she comes,

( When she comes)

We'll all wait to read her comments when she writes

We'll all wait to read her comments when she writes

We'll all wait, we'll all wait

We'll all wait to read her comments when she writes

We will kill the old red rooster,
When she comes,
We will kill the old red rooster,
When she comes,

We enjoy the style of her writing

We enjoy the style of her writing

Enjoy the style , enjoy the style

Enjoy the style of her writing

Oh, we'll all have ch'cken and dumplings,
When she comes,
Oh, we'll all have ch'cken and dumplings,
When she comes,

We see a new dimension in her take

We see a new dimension in her take

We see a new dimension , a new dimension

A new dimension in her take, take!

She will have to wear pyjamas,
When she comes,
She will have to wear pyjamas,
When she comes,

She always does it with a skill

She always does it with a skill

She always does it, always does it

Always does it with a skill

She will have to sleep with Grandma,

When she comes,
She will have to sleep with Grandma,
When she comes,

Our grandma loves her so very much

Our grandma loves her so very much

Loves her very much, loves her very much

Loves her very very much!

Singing Aye Aye Yippy Yippy Aye Aye

Singing Aye Aye Yippy

Aye Aye Yippy Aye Aye Yippy Yippy Aye Aye..

Aye Aye yippy Yippy aye Aye!






This song was originally posted at:
http://bussongs.com/songs/shell-be-comin-round-the-mountain.php

Woah remix for adwi
Beautiful sachu patti 👏
And of course we love her writing skill so much
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Posted: 8 years ago
@adwi- aap ek behatarin reviewer hai, mohatarma👏👏
@ divya di- your review was really awesome, like always⭐️
@bindup- your review have every single and essential detail👏⭐️⭐️
@ shagun - your review was really cute, just like you😳

Thank you so much bindup.😳
Edited by luvuyuvi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
@Patti...

Your lovely remix for me, has left me Singing Aye Aye Yippy Yippy Aye Aye

Singing Aye Aye Yippy

Aye Aye Yippy Aye Aye Yippy Yippy Aye Aye..

Aye Aye yippy Yippy aye Aye!

Thank you so much! You are a darling ⭐️


@luvuyuvi...

Aapke reviews kuch kam nahi hain, Akanksha Saheb! Especially the opening lines of this one... made me go


Whenever you walk in, you never fail to rock the show👏



Bindup and Akanksha... congratulations on your new mobile phones! 🥳

Edited by durgeshnandini - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

Lashy di

Fabulous update di
In one chapter you convey so many emotions

I am amaze with them and i admire them because of their never give up attitude
Both never give up in any situation
Both can to anything to protect their love ones

The way you describe each and every single things in detail was amazing
We can imagine each scene through your beautiful writing skill
Khan sahib strategy to reach Khalil is mind blowing
He knows he don't have time to breath also so he act fast
He utilise even a single things to reach his destination
And my my i must admit he had mentored some really good men

He clear everything to his men and he didn't give them false hope also and he clear that they might lose their life also but the way khan sahib men response was just commendable
Khan sahib feel proud of himself to gain such loyal men and cherished that small sense of pride forever
Azeez this men always won our heart
He act according to the situation when situation demand he act like leader and he lighten the atmosphere with his cheerfulness
He never leave single chance to tease khan sahib
In that tough situation he was only person who lighten the atmosphere
Groom , marriage , bhabhijan sounds so good
But khan sahib gentle reminder of reality vanished the cheerfulness
But like khan sahib friends we all hope at the end of it all khan sahib gain what he truly deserve happiness
God forest scene was so emotional
My god my heera
I love her strategy also
She knows she might not come back so she prepared everything for her people
She wanted to utilise even a little hope also in Parnagarh favour
She is best in diplomacy so she wanted to use that at last because she don't have any other options
She is trying to save at least something in Parnagarh to risk her own life
Gauri
I can understand how she was feeling to see heera in that condition

Ratan kaka, Gauri , mohan bana, bindiya each and everyone support heera decision
I salute heera as a women
If only we can learn something from her in real
She feel no shame to admit her mistake in front of everyone
She is true leader
The way she remind everyone to not depend on her for everything was superb
They have to learn fight without her support also
But its very hard for Parnagarhis soldiers to stand back and watch their baisa fight all alone
What a sweet movement between khan sahib and bahadur

But I am so happy he is in same route which Khalil took
He knows he catch Khalil soon but he is worried for heera safety
I love his silent prayer for heera safety
And here heera praying for her people safety at a same time
And we all pray that both khan sahib and heera pray fulfil soon
And now most sacry part of the update
Poor my heera
She can't even sleep peacefully
She is now afraid to close her eyes also
Why destiny always play dirty game with her
Already she suffered enough
I like heera presence of mind
With her poor vision also she could spot what bajrang and gokul couldn't spot
In that critical state of mind she is so alert
When Gokul didin't return i am so tense and scare
I am praying for him but
Out of all people Khalil reach heera first
Out of all routes why Khalil had to take heera route only
My god Gokul
Why you killed him lashy di
Frist durga then pappu now gokul
Uff i can't take this
God the way Khalil men drag dani is terrible
But but my heera stand strong in that situation also
My my i am impressed with her and i must say Khalil also
Heera attitude annoyed Khalil so much
He was amaze with her attitude
He never see any women carry this new found attitude
Neither she fear nor she mocking at him but she greet him like we greet someone whom we meet generally
She reply Khalil confidently without any hesitation
Khalil blow away by her attitude
But Khalil humiliated her in front of her people
He dare to touch her
He must pay for this
Let khan sahib know about this Khalil then god knows what happen to you
Heera yet again prove her mind is sharper then knife
Both heera and khan sahib good in quick thinking
Whatever the situation both never lose their mind
My heera is best in that
She challenge Khalil and let him only guessing what is going on her mind
Durga after death also she fulfil her promise
She is looking and helping her dear sister from the above
Marwari racer
Heera last hope and durga last gift also
This horse help durga in her terrible situation now this time also same horse help heera we hope
We all pray and hope khan sahib reach this horse and save heera soon
Yes Mr Khalil heera is something else altogether
And perfect for khan sahib
Wait and watch when you know you dare to lay your dirty hand on ustaad girl then you realise what grave mistake you did
Now nobody save you from khan sahib
I am eagerly waiting for that movement

I really don't have any words to describe your talent
You always make me speechless
I really really appreciate your effort you put in each chapter
🤗 🤗🤗




@bold... Agree 👍🏼
@red... I am with you... Khalil 😡
Fantastic review Bindup 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: durgeshnandini

@Patti...


Your lovely remix for me, has left me Singing Aye Aye Yippy Yippy Aye Aye

Singing Aye Aye Yippy

Aye Aye Yippy Aye Aye Yippy Yippy Aye Aye..

Aye Aye yippy Yippy aye Aye!

Thank you so much! You are a darling ⭐️


@luvuyuvi...

Aapke reviews kuch kam nahi hain, Akanksha Saheb! Especially the opening lines of this one... made me go


Whenever you walk in, you never fail to rock the show👏



Bindup and Akanksha... congratulations on your new mobile phones! 🥳

Shukriya adwi😳
Bindup congratulations for your new phone
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: binduprasad41


Thank you so much kal di 🤗
I commit crime 😲
Sorry Shruti i don't mean that way🤔

Its okay
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Posted: 8 years ago

Once when I was little
I was happy and carefree.
I used to run around laughing
Until it was time for tea.

I used to play games
And smile all the time.
I used to feel on top of the world
I used to feel fine.

It's amazing how things change
When people let you down.
And how that once happy face
Turns into a solemn frown.

You search and search
For someone who cares,
Anyone who understands,
Anyone who dares.

Loneliness, it hurts.
It kills you deep inside.
It makes you feel empty.
It stops you in your stride.

You cry yourself to sleep,
Hugging your pillow tight,
Wishing for someone
To hold you through the night.

Once when I was little
I was happy and carefree.
Now my life's full of sadness,
Pain and misery.

Once when I was little
I was never on my own.
But now I pray at night
"I wish I wasn't alone."





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