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no worries for being late di for me your liking toward story is important 😳Originally posted by: avika444
First of all sorry for commenting late vrinda dear ...now coming to chappy ...since u posted three chaps and i read all i will comment for three chaps here
First chap ...The update started with Jodha dreaming of her prince charming ...the dream was so perfect just like the way any girl would wish for . then comes khan residents ...i liked Mirza and jalal a lot here ...where mirza holds a play boy image our Jalal is like Adarshvadi son ... how nice is that ...and wait ...Hamida wants a daughter in law who matches their status and surprisingly Jalal agrees too ... interesting ...lets see what happenes next .Chap 2...Wow Jodha and Moti secured first and second positions respectively ...and this surely calls for a party after al they toped their college . oh poor girl ...met with idiots in between but thankfully A handsome hunk saved her ...who else it could be ...its jalal na ...oh god ...accident ...i knew this will vome one day ...but so soon didnt ecpect ...Anyways chap 3So much changed in jalal and jodha'z life ...where Jalal lost his memory after the accidient our Jo has to loose her wealth and property ...poor them . Though i felt pity for Jalal herr...but i also loved his antics .Continue soon dearAnd thanks for pm
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