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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy


1) I am not Akbar's Jaani Dushman... I love that guy... his fate was bad all these days, making him suffer... that's why God sent him an angel in the form of Heera to give him a better future to compensate for all the love he lost in the past!



awww how melodious it sounds...❤️
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Lashy di what to say about the update...read in morning,then after college then twice now and still want to read..need I say more😆.

The best part was Akbar's jealously😛 .Don't know why but I liked it mean enjoyed it.Here he doesn't even want to hear that man's name just wondering what if he comes to know all about Mahendra's imaginations😉.But its nice, maybe this new feeling and Mahendra's intentions will make him realize that the best way to protect Heera is to be with her🤔.And this time he has to take the next step because Heera took the first and step he turned her down.Just hope his logical part helps him to zero in on Mahendra's plans soon.

And that Pappu...I knew it was something to do with his past...but a mother abandoning his child that too she is the only family he had... can't even imagine Akbar's pain 😭 .No wonder he considers that sick bed ridden kid more lucky.Is this one of the many reasons... apart from work that he is not into marriage or women?😕

Silver-tusked elephants carrying opulent howdahs. Impressive palanquins. Velvet flags. Stately horses. Trumpets and drums. Mahouts and soldiers. Cooks and maids. Musicians and dancers. The glitter of gold was dazzling, the fanfare drowning everything else in the vicinity.

^^^ As beautiful as the previous chapter teaser pic❤️ .

These Manswar people..don't like them😡.But they way you described Heera's beauty and then her answer...it made me want to see her so badly (thanks to Harshu di's musings)...and I did see her.

Heera's instincts and her reminding that prince of the real promises and noticing his changed tone was👏⭐️ .But I know he will come up with something to keep the wedding on.

Remarkable! Moreover, at present, there was an alluring element about her innocence and sadness too. Almost erotic. Especially the manner in which those tears touched her cheeks, and then her lips, before sliding down her neck. If only it were his fingers in place of those tears. 'Not many days to go for that though...'

Mahendraaa

Akbar deciphering that poem in the hallways all alone...it gave me goosebumps😆 ...so can we expect the arrival of our hero Farmaan in next chapter😳 .

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Kuki715


These Manswar people..don't like them😡.But they way you described Heera's beauty and then her answer...it made me want to see her so badly (thanks to Harshu di's musings)...and I did see her.



ditto...😳

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Bindu.


Bullet Rani... I shall answer thy koshchuns! 😎

1) I am not Akbar's Jaani Dushman... I love that guy... his fate was bad all these days, making him suffer... that's why God sent him an angel in the form of Heera to give him a better future to compensate for all the love he lost in the past!

>>@blue: ❤️❤️

I know God has compensated the loss by sending the likes of Chacha jaan,his friends and Heera..still,it was heart-wrenching to know of his disease and all😭

The most heart-wrenching part of his childhood is his mother leaving him to run away with a lover
Whatever abuse others might have meted upon him, if his mother was by his side... it wouldn't have left him feeling so bitter about life!

Having said that... for all that he'd suffered, this man could have turned out much much worse.. instead, he's still an extremely loyal extremely decent gentleman - with a balanced sense of right and wrong!
Both Heera and Akbar are fighters in their own ways.. born leaders who can live with their head held high despite the way life has treated them!

2) So what do you want me to do to him now😛

>>Punish him brutally!

Stole it from Shruthi😆

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Excellently written chapter 21 emotions are getting high as story builds thnx for the PM
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lashy I do like a mystery and the hallways being the answer to the Farmaan Quest is quite a neat trick.
Mahendar is a lech with the subtlety of a wolf in a sheep pen. At least that's what we readers get to see and I am happy that Harka also 'saw'. Parnagarh can be saved some other way and while the 'how' isn't apparent yet, Harka has a resolve to choose her own path. I doubt the instructions of Durga or the pull of AMK have much to do with the inner steel of Harka. At least I hope not.

What I also liked a lot in this chapter was the way you described AMK as he searched. Vivid. I was there watching him.

...Drawing in a lung-full of air, Akbar stepped into her room - treading upon the very paths where the chirpy sounds of her anklets used to echo until not too long ago...

...- the Sahib's eyes were still fixed on his work, but his lips had uncurled into a straight line, almost like he was clamping down on distressing emotions ...


Loved these.

..and Lashy whose birthday was it ...on previous pages? Your lil son? Happy Birthday to him. Am wondering if I share a birthday with him. 20th. 🤓

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