AkDha OS : Not Strangers! - Page 4

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

Sorry for the late reply shagun

Originally posted by: Aaradhya01234

Lovely os shagun
Very well written...

Thanks for pm 😳

Originally posted by: durgeshnandini

Somehow I was never familiar to such meticulous ideas in you, but now that I have read this piece, I would hope this isn't the last one, I want more such surprises to knock my pm box and leave me with a WOW!!

You would certainly see to that, won't you imp?!😉

Would be commenting in detail soonish,

Till then, this is for you ❤️

ok dis is 2nd round fr me to read ur os as wen it was being posted fr d compe had already it😆and i simply loved d concept it was diff and out of box defo...👏i was really surprised to see d sanskrit words and d verses used in ur os...⭐️so brilliantly and smoothly felt as if u r sanskrit stdnt fr urself...😳i had taken up sanskrit in mu school and col days too bt now hardly i can remember sanskrit since lost touch wid d lang but dn ur Sanskrit touch in dis really touched my heart😳 so joja landed up in d same gurukul 😆 njoyed reading abt dm...😳keep writing more shagun...👏😳⭐️

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Shaguuunnn!🤗 🤗

>>> Diii 🤗

To be precise, your OS is just as sweet as you... It's simple, charming, and touches the heart without making much effort...😳 😳 😳 😳

>>> ☺️☺️☺️

Now, you have taken a lot of creative liberty in your imagination, and that is the main plus-point of this particular story... As for me, I would never let my imagination to go in such a height where I would be able to see the Mughal Emperor Jalaluddin Mohammad Akbar, in his youth, is playing treasure-hunt with Rajput princes Jodha Bai, the to-be queen-mother of the empire, in such a playful and childlike mood. 😳 😆 But you did it, rather I should tell your immense love for Akdha did it on behalf of you, and not only that you presented the whole piece in such a beautiful and believable way that not for once one will have any difficulty to believe this to happen with the same couple. The flow is just awesome!

>>> Creative liberty - Yeah, I did take a lot of that! 😆 Actually that both the characters are not ordinary people na, so we have that 'great' wali image of them formed in our minds. But, they were also human beings like us na... if not exactly like this... I'm sure they were also lik normal children... and did play like this. 😆 So happy you enjoyed reading it! 😳

Your writing is like the drop of first monsoon rain... like a morning dew... it fills the heart with immense happiness without any particular reason... 😳

>>> Bass karo dii... I'm already going ☺️

The whole part of treasure-hunt is a very witty put, though I had some difficulties while getting the puzzles... Well we can discuss later. 😆 Jalal was very charming, like a young first year college guy, enthusiastic and naughty as well... But I loved Jodha much. So sweet, so witty and lovable. 😳

>>> No you can discuss here, kya hua, which part you didn't get? 😆

I love JJ that way, so I never really try to change them. 😛😆

And the last part of the story was so sweet.⭐️😳 Two 'Not Stranger's connected by destiny... great!

>>> Thank you! 😳

I remembered your once-upon-a-time ff bonds o heart- that one which was based on the childhood of Jalal and Jodha (I am not sure if it was the name!😛 )suddenly! You left all your stories midway idiot!😡😡

>>> Oops, yaad aaya! 🤣

It was a very delightful read! 😳

>>> Thank you so so so much for this review di. Loved it and Love you loads 🤗

( I am taking your idea of posting the story individually, as I am greedier than you when it comes to read comments.😆 And I'm waiting for your's too.😡😆)

>>> I know 😆

Originally posted by: diya2291

Lovely Os Shagun
Your Historical Os Have Been Always Amazing Dear
Keep Writing More
And Thanks For Pm 😊

Originally posted by: luvuyuvi

Toh woh aap thi... I really loved the concept. It was innovative. I'm so impressed by your writing skills. I mean its difficult to write a historical, given that one has to use proper language. I would repeat what I've already said. Girl, you are really talented. Congratulations on this wonderful story.

Originally posted by: kartikaJA

awesome os
thanks for pm buddy

Superb os dear
Loved it
Thxc 4r pm

An innovative OS...totally diffrent idea frm the usual theories..learning in ashram for one day..nice concept..i love ur 6 riddles and the way of finding the answers by jo and jalal..and the last riddle was nice..both r equally intelligent in their way..i lyk the way how jo helpd ja in understanding sanskrit and she easily finds tat he s stranger to this land..jalal's helplessness in finding a partner s well written..aftr tat their meeting near the palace and jo's anger because a boy is following..oh overall u wrote a gud historical plot with mix of creative ideas,life style of tat era,their education,skills etc..thanks for pm..btwn shagun u changd ur user name...gud os.