~DETECTIVE Series~ **A Baseless Murder** Chaptr 3!!

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Kavya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

Unres Di
So mystery is revealing slightly
Awesome chappy Di
Can't wait for the face off of jo n jalal
Update soon Di

Thanks for pm Di

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P.Jyothi

@pandrangijyothi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Very...Interesting story. I liked very much. Waiting for next chapter. Update soon dear without much delay😉...

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Naazrt

@Naazrt

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

wooow diiij your update was OUTSTANDING and with super interesting I love it the way jalal calmed himself every time .. and I really hate that bidhu very much because he taunt my jallu every time huh.. amazing update dii..and diii again delay for spiritual love aahhaa that's not fair aah I know you have exams but what to do Iam still dying here to read further

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Naazrt

@Naazrt

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: Naazrt
wooow diiij your update was OUTSTANDING and with super interesting I love it the way jalal calmed himself every time ..and I really hate that bidhu very much because he taunt my jallu every time huh..amazing update dii..and diii again delay for spiritual love aahhaa that's not fair aah I know you have exams but what to do Iam still dying here to read further

thanks for pm me dii and iam waiting patiently for your next update sooo plzzz update soon muaaah..

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Shinchan_20

@Shinchan_20

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Fabulous update dii
thanku for pm
continue soon

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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

It's tough to image Jallu as BB😆, but u'r doing a fabulous job.😉

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nikki

@natashathakur

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Interesting chapter n thnxx for pm

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shyana

@shyana3

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Interesting update

Excited to read more

Update soon

Thanks for pm

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Senapatichandri

@Senapatichandri

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti
It's tough to image Jallu as BB😆, but u'r doing a fabulous job.😉

yaa I knw jallu ke utpatangi charector ko BB dhaal na is touch m making effort k jallu ka joviality v wordings v rahe or BB k calmness n brains v...all u can say this is going to b a tough translation fr me...
hope so the lovestory of this weird jalaluddin detective should cope up with my beautiful Jodha...

jallu ne Khud Kaha tha "jodha begum...Apki tirchi nigahe hi kafi hai Humare dil ko ghayal karne ke lie..." I m trying k yaha v is baat ki taamil Ho...😉

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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: Senapatichandri

yaa I knw jallu ke utpatangi charector ko BB dhaal na is touch m making effort k jallu ka joviality v wordings v rahe or BB k calmness n brains v...all u can say this is going to b a tough translation fr me...
hope so the lovestory of this weird jalaluddin detective should cope up with my beautiful Jodha...

jallu ne Khud Kaha tha "jodha begum...Apki tirchi nigahe hi kafi hai Humare dil ko ghayal karne ke lie..." I m trying k yaha v is baat ki taamil Ho...😉

Jalaluddin is not at all a weird detective! 😡 He has all the features of BB, one of my oldest crush! 😆

Are you going to add- "Ta se jotoi kalo hok, dekhechi tar kalo horin chokh?" 😉