~DETECTIVE Series~ **A Baseless Murder** Chaptr 3!! - Page 4

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

I devoutly hope you will give the love-story much space than it was in original. 😆 Areee murder er golpo ta to ami jani, jeta jani na kintu kolpona korte bhalobasi seta onno karor lekha te pora tai to asole ff er anondo. 😉

hmm dekhi kotota space dewa jaay...bt before part 3/4 Seta asbe na...that's only I can tell cz its a bit composed lovestory btwn the detective n the...chodo...
bt jotota dewa nei...khanikta I will make in my romantic sense...if u hv any idea u can tell me in my tv inbox...I will thought to include...

Originally posted by: Senapatichandri

hmm dekhi kotota space dewa jaay...bt before part 3/4 Seta asbe na...that's only I can tell cz its a bit composed lovestory btwn the detective n the...chodo...
bt jotota dewa nei...khanikta I will make in my romantic sense...if u hv any idea u can tell me in my tv inbox...I will thought to include...

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Story ekbar jome gele keu romantic sequence nie care korbe na. 😆 Best of luck... I know it's a tough job, much more tougher than writing an original story from own, you have to keep in mind all the time whether you are able to do justice or not... so your trial itself is commendable.

thank u stuti dear...bt don't know I can do justice with it not..cz the writer of the original story is not a small person...he is an eminent writer...and the original charector is also much famous...so I am a new writer with a sammall knowledge so not to hide to u that I am a bit afraid how the readers wil take a story which will don't have an mushy mushy lovestory no steamy scenes btwn couple...bt have a hardcore murder envioronment...this forum is famous for its Lovestory btwn JA bt test time writing a hardcode detectivestory which don't have much feeling of love is a bit scaring me...
hope everyone will enjoy this story and will appriciate the story without have a second rhouught of lack of love scenes...
let's hope they love my this JALAL being a detective with sharp mind solving one of his difficult case...

Now this really makes me curious as to what you are planning to present and how... I am also wondering which famous detective novel inspires this venture. Anyhow continue soon 😃

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

I devoutly hope you will give the love-story much space than it was in original. 😆 Areee murder er golpo ta to ami jani, jeta jani na kintu kolpona korte bhalobasi seta onno karor lekha te pora tai to asole ff er anondo. 😉

Originally posted by: Senapatichandri

thank u stuti dear...bt don't know I can do justice with it not..cz the writer of the original story is not a small person...he is an eminent writer...and the original charector is also much famous...so I am a new writer with a sammall knowledge so not to hide to u that I am a bit afraid how the readers wil take a story which will don't have an mushy mushy lovestory no steamy scenes btwn couple...bt have a hardcore murder envioronment...this forum is famous for its Lovestory btwn JA bt test time writing a hardcode detectivestory which don't have much feeling of love is a bit scaring me...
hope everyone will enjoy this story and will appriciate the story without have a second rhouught of lack of love scenes...
let's hope they love my this JALAL being a detective with sharp mind solving one of his difficult case...

Originally posted by: durgeshnandini

Now this really makes me curious as to what you are planning to present and how... I am also wondering which famous detective novel inspires this venture. Anyhow continue soon 😃

And yes, this banner is wonderful👏 - that was some editing work I tell you! So a special mention of this...

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Don't worry... There's none who does not love detective stories... I know it's going to be a hit.😉

Just a suggestion... Make it from Jalal 's narration, essence of love will automatically come.😆or just input a piece from Jalal 's pov..😳

Are you using Mirza as narrator?

yaap as far I typed mirza as a narrator will b the best..evn my mom told me to b the narrator to b mirza as it will give the every detail of the action of jalal .bt I myself decide to put some Jalal's pov...it will in murder sol e nd ofcourse about his feelings to Jodha...but in first 3 chappy will b as like the story have...bt after that I will put my inputs before that I will urine the essence of the story

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Chalo partner, we both are here who already knows the mystery.😉

Originally posted by: durgeshnandini

No I don't... tell me which story 😕