~DETECTIVE Series~ **A Baseless Murder** Chaptr 3!!

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#131

Congrats for new story nd concept is interesting
Nd Jalal in this role was super I'm watching to see what's coming next thanks for pms

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Anjali Jha

@ANJIJHA

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#132

Sry foe late reply Di..
Congo for new story ...
The story us awesome...
U bring this time amazing concept..
I know there is less romance between ja n ja but try to create More scenes between them..
Than u so much for giving lovely story..

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Anjali Jha

@ANJIJHA

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#133

Part-1..
Sry for late reply sis..
Starting id really good..
Bidhuji is arrogant..
Ja is also know hoe is he..
Ja is chuckling while Bidhuji is intteogreating servant..
Ja is looking for surrounding..
Thanks for pm..

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Anjali Jha

@ANJIJHA

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#134

Part-2..
Again sry foe late reply sis..
The chappy is awesome..
Thid bidhuji is such an bas***d..
I want to kill this arrogant..
Ja is always ignoring n laughing internally on bidhuji..
Finally Jo name come in picture..
Thanks for pm.

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Anjali Jha

@ANJIJHA

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#135

Part-3..
Sry again for late reply sis..
Lovley n suspensing chappy..
Ja is really genius..
As usual stupid Bidhuji..
Last para is really funny when Ja comment on thread..
Precab is really interesting...
Thanks for pm..

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P.Jyothi

@pandrangijyothi

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#136

Eagerly waiting for your update... Please... Update...

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Senapatichandri

@Senapatichandri

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#137

pls keep commeting on thsi thread or this thread will be closed...

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Vrinda

@--Vrinda--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: Senapatichandri
pls keep commeting on thsi thread or this thread will be closed...

all right if u say then we will keep asking for update for this story too...

even if u r busy or not...😉

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preyasekar

@preyasekar

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#139

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