~DETECTIVE Series~ **A Baseless Murder** Chaptr 3!! - Page 14

Congrats for new story nd concept is interesting
Nd Jalal in this role was super I'm watching to see what's coming next thanks for pms

Sry foe late reply Di..
Congo for new story ...
The story us awesome...
U bring this time amazing concept..
I know there is less romance between ja n ja but try to create More scenes between them..
Than u so much for giving lovely story..

Part-1..
Sry for late reply sis..
Starting id really good..
Bidhuji is arrogant..
Ja is also know hoe is he..
Ja is chuckling while Bidhuji is intteogreating servant..
Ja is looking for surrounding..
Thanks for pm..

Part-2..
Again sry foe late reply sis..
The chappy is awesome..
Thid bidhuji is such an bas***d..
I want to kill this arrogant..
Ja is always ignoring n laughing internally on bidhuji..
Finally Jo name come in picture..
Thanks for pm.

Part-3..
Sry again for late reply sis..
Lovley n suspensing chappy..
Ja is really genius..
As usual stupid Bidhuji..
Last para is really funny when Ja comment on thread..
Precab is really interesting...
Thanks for pm..

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Originally posted by: Senapatichandri

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