JA FF : Warriors in Love (Chap 6 Part 2 on Pg 33) - Page 12

Thoroughly enjoyed the update. Roshni's role in the story is intriguing. Why is she imprisoned in Amer? What is her connection to Sujamal?

What treachery is tormenting Jalal? Salima and the haughty Ruqiayah are in the update. Will Ruqaiyah create problems for Hira later on?

Hira is one gutsy lady- going in search of Jalal in the forest all alone. Jalal has renamed her Jodha to reflect her indomitable courage and uniqueness. Will he or won't he return her maang tikka ? Will be waiting eagerly for the next update to find out.

You have spun a very interesting story that has the readers excited for each update. Thank you.👏

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

THANKS FOR PM

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

Thoroughly enjoyed the update. Roshni's role in the story is intriguing. Why is she imprisoned in Amer? What is her connection to Sujamal?

What treachery is tormenting Jalal? Salima and the haughty Ruqiayah are in the update. Will Ruqaiyah create problems for Hira later on?

Hira is one gutsy lady- going in search of Jalal in the forest all alone. Jalal has renamed her Jodha to reflect her indomitable courage and uniqueness. Will he or won't he return her maang tikka ? Will be waiting eagerly for the next update to find out.

You have spun a very interesting story that has the readers excited for each update. Thank you.👏

An interesting update..the story s progressing in a diffrent way..sorry for nt commenting on previous chappy..mainavati arranged marraige for hira and sukanya..jalal s helping shivani in archery. sukanya s carefree and excitd about maraige..nice..she s teasing hira regarding muhammed..the way hira made and gave to jalal was nice..atlast u finishd tat with a huge revelation but not so big..a new character roshini s interesting..hira s shockd because of his support for mughals..

3rd chapter has lot of twists and turns..ho hira got faintd for knwing him as mughal supporter..what will happen if she got to knw about him as jalal..oh god poor hira..maang tika part was nice..he ought to go but his heart feels her pain..so this roshini is ameri girl..?tat too imprisond..jalal had gone through lot of pain in the form of betrayal..sujamal has a love story..tats interesting..eager to knw abt his and roshini's love..i lyk tat part..hira understands lovebirds..she dnt want to seprate them and addition to tat she wants to meet muhammed so she goes to forest..their encounter to each otr s cute..jalal's words are wow..what he gave her the name JODHA..?Oh its nice to be named by jalal itself..very interesting..u r writing the updates in unexpectd way..really gud..love it..hope to continue ur updates..waiting for another interesting update..thanks for pm..

Originally posted by: dellaakdha

3rd chapter has lot of twists and turns..ho hira got faintd for knwing him as mughal supporter..what will happen if she got to knw about him as jalal..oh god poor hira..maang tika part was nice..he ought to go but his heart feels her pain..so this roshini is ameri girl..?tat too imprisond..jalal had gone through lot of pain in the form of betrayal..sujamal has a love story..tats interesting..eager to knw abt his and roshini's love..i lyk tat part..hira understands lovebirds..she dnt want to seprate them and addition to tat she wants to meet muhammed so she goes to forest..their encounter to each otr s cute..jalal's words are wow..what he gave her the name JODHA..?Oh its nice to be named by jalal itself..very interesting..u r writing the updates in unexpectd way..really gud..love it..hope to continue ur updates..waiting for another interesting update..thanks for pm..

Thanks for your comments on both chapters!
I decided Jalal would give her that name, because that was a custom in a number of Empires so I thought why not?
And yes poor Rajkumari, it's going to be tough loving her man.
😆
Happy that you find my fanfiction interesting!

Awesome update dear 😃

Originally posted by: sorathsheikh

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Awesome update dear😃</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">What's your name</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">do send me pm of your next update</font>

I'll PM you for sure.
Glad you liked the update! 😳

Awesome ff dear
Loved it
Plzz do pm also

Originally posted by: eshalli

Awesome ff dear
Loved it
Plzz do pm also

Glad you liked it
I'll PM you of course!