NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~Thread 14~CHAPTER 19 - Page 60

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

My Remix Rhyme.

(The Original is in Blue; my version is in red.)

This is the house that Jack built!

This is the thread that Lashy made

This is the malt that lay in the house that Jack built.

This is the story we read in the thread that Lashy made

This is the rat that ate the malt that lay in the house that Jack built

These are the Banjaras that enjoy the story they read in the thread that Lashy made

This is the cat that killed the rat that ate the malt

That lay in the house that Jack built

This is Harshu , who posts the musings for the story

They read in the thread that Lashy made

This is the dog that worried the cat
That killed the rat that ate the malt
That lay in the house that Jack built.

This is Kausi who with Harshu, posts the musings ,

For the story the Banjaras read

In the thread that Lashy made.

I was already dancing by this point!

This is the cow with the crumpled horn

That tossed the dog that worried the cat

That killed the rat that ate the malt
That lay in the house that Jack built.

This is Sandya Begum with the sharp pen,

Who teases Kausi, who with Harshu

Posts the musings for the story

That Banjaras read in the thread that Lashy made

🤣

This is the maiden all forlorn

That milked the cow with the crumpled horn

That tossed the dog that worried the cat

That killed the rat that ate the malt
That lay in the house that Jack built.

This is Manasi, who posts emojis, fighting with Sandya,

Who with the sharp pen teases Kausi

Who with Harshu posts the musings for the story

The Banjaras read in the thread that Lashy made..

😆

This is the man all tattered and torn
That kissed the maiden all forlorn
That milked the cow with the crumpled horn
That tossed the dog that worried the cat
That killed the rat that ate the malt
That lay in the house that Jack built.

This is cute little Shagun , Baby of the team,

Friendly with Manasi who posts the emojis ,

Fighting with Sandya who with the sharp pen, teases Kausi,

Who with Harshu, posts the musings

For the story the Banjaras read

In the thread that Lashy made.

😆

This is the priest all shaven and shorn
That married the man all tattered and torn
That kissed the maiden all forlorn
That milked the cow with the crumpled horn
That tossed the dog that worried the cat
That killed the rat that ate the malt
That lay in the house that Jack built.

This is Adwi, the shrewd little one, posts review, dotted with poem

Liked by Shagun, Baby of the team,

who is friendly with Manasi, who posts emojis

Fighting with Sandya, who with the Sharp pen, teases Kausi,

Who with Harshu, posts the musings

For the story the Banjaras read

In the thread that Lashy made.

This is the cock that crowed in the morn
That waked the priest all shaven and shorn
That married the man all tattered and torn
That kissed the maiden all forlorn

That milked the cow with the crumpled horn
That tossed the dog that worried the cat
That killed the rat that ate the malt
That lay in the house that Jack built.

This is the farmer sowing his corn
That kept the cock that crowed in the morn
That waked the priest all shaven and shorn
That married the man all tattered and torn
That kissed the maiden all forlorn

That milked the cow with the crumpled horn
That tossed the dog that worried the cat
That killed the rat that ate the malt
That lay in the house that Jack built!

This is our Periyamma who with all the Banjaras

Mitali,Divya, Shruti, Namu, and Rose ,

Likes all the posts along with Adwi, the shrewd little one,

Who posts the review dotted with poems,

Liked by Shagun, Baby of the team,

Friendly with Manasi,

Who posts the emojis, fighting with Sandya,

Who with the Sharp pen, teases Kausi,

Who with Harshu, posts the musings

For the story the Banjaras read

In the thread that Lashy made.

What a beautiful sweet cute lil poem you've made out of the original one... Love you for this 🤗