NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~Thread 14~CHAPTER 19 - Page 103

Originally posted by: melovesja

Blessed blissful childhood with Jiji

Safest Haven on earth with parents' blessings

That was MY home parnagrah.

Her home

Isolated peaceful shelter to mourn

Feels Home again with heavenly feelings

That was MY Aidabad haveli.

Awww another home😭

Leave MY both home behind

Starts for like our second home again

That is Kakasa's Bansi palace.

Yesss what a sweet thing to say 😳 loved it Mitu... poem of 'homes'

Originally posted by: Kuki715

You got!! I tried but the bank ran out of cash😆. Will try tomorrow 🤔

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

My dear Mitali,

Very beautiful poem with full of thought. and feelings,👏👏

I have reconstructed it taking your bold lines only, like this:

Blessesd blissful childhood with jiji

That was my home Parnagarh

Isolated, peaceful shelter to moan

That was my Aidabad haveli

I leave MY both home behind

To Kakasa's Bansi Palace..

How is it?

Yours

Akka.

So so so so nice Periyamma...

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

I'm busy doing Harshu's home work

Originally posted by: harshu27

amount i likd re infact dat 2000 note i wont b using atleast fr few months it looks so good dil nahi maan raha hai to use...😆😛

Originally posted by: lashy

Originally posted by: sp108

Dear Lashy,

First and foremost, congratulations on a century of likes! You actually deserve many more.

Thank you so so so much Shreya... thanks a lot! 🤗

What a beautiful, poignant chapter this turned out to be! The opening scene was spectacular. In a sense, it summed up Khan Sahib's journey after his encounter with Heera -

the target hitting accurately, the dauntless Ustaad confronting his enemies

and then Heera's thoughts making him miss his target. It was the metaphorical rendition that made such for a lovely read.

Yes.. yes I am so glad you picked on this point.. because that was what it was.. not danger, not darkness, not animals... nothing makes him miss his target... but she does!

Khan Sahib's steel resolve to hide his love from his beloved was very poignant. His heart must have broken into pieces seeing Heera breach every protocol, every maryada, her self-respect to meet him, to seek answers from him, to give a name to their special bond.

Yes it was very tough on him... because there are few people he actually 'feels' for... and as a man who's able to give his loved ones all that they want... he feels sorry to break her heart this way.. but he had to do it!

It has been some time since I finished reading this chapter, but I still feel emotional thinking about their alvida scene.

Thank you dear... thanks a lot! 🤗

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

Originally posted by: harshu27

amount i likd re infact dat 2000 note i wont b using atleast fr few months it looks so good dil nahi maan raha hai to use...😆😛

Originally posted by: lashy