Akdha SS || Souls Entwined || Thread 3 uptd chap 20 (pg 88) 2nd april

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NONIE

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Posted: 8 years ago

#381

Nice chapter Avika😊

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paru

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#382

hi avi
this review for last update yaar
the update was very interesting dear
every scene was very well written
thoda hot shot wala scene create karo jodha and jalal ke saath
and i love you wala bhi hona chahiye
awesome update dear
next part will be read soon yaar
i love youuu soo much

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paru

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Posted: 8 years ago

#383

yaar itna chhota hua
mujhe explain karna nahi aa raha
i hope youu dont mind

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Shinchan_20

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Posted: 8 years ago

#384

Amazingly written dii👏👏

Emotions were beautifully portrayed. .

Jo was feeling betrayed but she herself didn't know the reason or may be she did!

But she couldn't confine jalal too coz they were never committed..

Other side jalal was hell shocked woth all the happenings in his life..

The girl whom he hated the most is his fiance now!

He tried to talk to jodhato clear everything but to no avail..

Thanku for pm

Continue soon

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srivarshini

@srivarshini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#385

that was superb...and joja confrontation was well written...pls update nxt chappy fast ...dnt frgt 2 pm me ...pls...

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roseraja1915

@roseraja1915

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Posted: 8 years ago

#386

Avika dear, believe me this chapter was NOT boring at all. You have written a lovely chapter - describing the pain of one who is helpless in a situation where her beloved is promised to another woman.

I also liked the quote at the beginning of the update which was a foreshadow of the chapter to come. Both have acknowledged their feelings for each other but can't see a way out of the predicament they are trapped in. Curious to find out who will come to Jalal's aid.

A well-written update , dear. Thank you. 👏

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P.Jyothi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#387

Avikaaa... What a emotional Update bangaram. Your way of describing the jalal's situation, jodha's condition was so... sooo... nice. Hope... jalal will find the way to reach his lady love soon... Update soon dear...