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Durgeshnandini

@Durgeshnandini

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#451

Originally posted by: Kuki715

Good morning aunty😃

Hey Shruti, wassup! Have you changed your dp?

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melovesja

@melovesja

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#452

Originally posted by: durgeshnandini

And when your poem I read,
Like the blossoms sprayed
Brought fragrance of spring...
Sweet tidings of art,
Your talents bring...
And all day along
with my heart in your song...
I hummed along,
"Oh the Bard from South seas!"
"Oh the Bard from South seas!"

Her beautiful song, wreathed with aplomb...
Like a gust of breeze, my heart it did seize,
"Oh the Bard from South seas!"
"Oh the Bard from South seas!"

Dear Adwi and Akka

you both well depicted the person about whom you want to write 😊 superb

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Durgeshnandini

@Durgeshnandini

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#453

Thanks a lot, Mitali di!

BTW, I had posted something for your review, I guess in page 49 or 50, do have a look! 😳

Edited by durgeshnandini - 8 years ago

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melovesja

@melovesja

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#454

@Mitali di... you're to the point and yet expressive... a rare combination indeed 👏

Thank you so much Adwi😃 for lovely words.

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#455

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Good morning Folks!

Good Morning Banjaras and Baisas ... 🤗

Edited by lashy - 8 years ago

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#456

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

My dear do you know
How a long time ago
Two very young girls
Whose names all of us know
Were left orphaned sadly
Responsible for Parnagarh's safety,
And a Farmaan to protect all the way
As I've heard the story teller say?

Among the enemies many
And the help not coming from any
Misfortune took Durga away
Heera managed to meet destiny
Took a journey to unknown land
Without knowing where she would land
Without any help whatsoever
Felt like an orphan left forever

And when it was night
So sad was her plight
The sun, it went down
And the moon gave no light
She faced the unexpected danger
But was saved by a stranger
She thought about him so much
She hadn't felt before this much..

And when she reached her haven
The Cupids , ready in the heaven
Brought them together to meet
Sending Bahadur so sweet,
And the scorpion , another messenger along
That made us sing this song
"Oh, our loveable couple in the story
Oh , please do make a hurry!.."😉

Karkuzhali.

Beautiful poignant... and creative, as usual... 🤗

So, you too want them to hurry along, Periyamma 😆

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harshal

@harshu27

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#457

Originally posted by: lashy

Good Morning Banjaras and Baisas ... 🤗

good noon 🤗d coffee looks tempting...😳

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#458

Originally posted by: melovesja
Lashy dear,
Good morning 😊 feeling great !
As I missed so much I was reading pages of this novel thread and saw many delightful post. Upto end it will be a another book of beautiful and memorable memory of this days. HBAS thread filds my heart with happiness. ❤️🤗

That is such a sweet thing to say... 🤗but, it's y'all who make it what it is!

Ok catching up on our Banjaras and Baisas here...

Shaguniya... I know by the time I've wished you now, the test would be finished... but all the best for the results, nevertheless!😃 Mwah!

Sokku Podi thank you so much for the kind words... and as I've said to Mitu... it's y'all who make it what it is! So so so so so nice to have you here... yes, it does remind me of NJAPA days (bad gurl Harshu was silent reader she says😭)

@ Mitu... lovely lovely lovely review dear... thanks so much for it 🤗 as for the koschun if they would be able to follow their 'vows' let's see, shall we? 😉

@ Harshu, Adwi, Shruthi, Rose, Bindup, Bond, Manali, Manu, Sandy hope you girls are all doing good... 🤗

@ Chellam... thanks for the thumbs up for the Musing... love you da 🤗

Edited by lashy - 8 years ago

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#459

Originally posted by: durgeshnandini

And when your poem I read,
Like the blossoms sprayed
Brought fragrance of spring...
Sweet tidings of art,
Your talents bring...
And all day along
with my heart in your song...
I hummed along,
"Oh the Bard from South seas!"
"Oh the Bard from South seas!"

Her beautiful song, wreathed with aplomb...
Like a gust of breeze, my heart it did seize,
"Oh the Bard from South seas!"
"Oh the Bard from South seas!"