NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~Thread 11 - Chapter 16 - UPD 22nd SEP - Page 36

Originally posted by: lashy

A walk in the woods Good Morning... to all Banjaras, Baisas, Baby and Babloo 🤗 chalte chalte thodaa naashthaa bhi kar lein!

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A

Originally posted by: dharmimum

Hi Lashy, hope you remember me. I'm commenting for first time in HBAs. I read all the chapters at one go and another master piece. Hmm.. What to say now.. no words to express my feelings

Originally posted by: melovesja

I was thrilled to know how he is connecting to shazade and at revelation I was in aww. With this dhamaka update you gave twisted turn to story and full space for Amk 😊 to grow and justified his planning and accurate execution to save her .

I am glad the twist justified the buildup... it was what it was the past 7 chapters were all about... and if it didn't justify well-enough, the whole story would've fallen flat on its face... so it was a very nervous moment for me...🤗glad it worked out!

I am feeling proud to be connecting with HBS and about your writing. Salute to your way of thinking and planning story line.⭐️ How deliberately you bring him out crystal clear like louts in the mud. 👏 You keep my trust as man with no dirty hands in Durga bai's matter.

yes... he is a villain by circumstances, but not by actions... unlike Khalil who's a villain, fullstop!

His gray shad - 12 year old pure soul + under patronage of shahzade = loyal intelligent officer.

I loved that instead of confusing us as suspense story it turns as thriller. Curiosity becomes excitement and attraction change into magnetic pull. 😳

I didn't want to make it a suspense story... had done that already in NJAPA...so yes, this is more mystery than a who-dunnit suspense😳

Successfully create and keep suspense like you done for mahender. Cleverly gave hidden clues and smartly cover up .word with line and line with scan very well.

you wrote he felt guilt and many other unknown feelings.

One person ,two personality

Yes.. like Sandhya had pointed out in her beautiful review😳

At first you saw his quality as ustad then kabil businessman and his talent as intelligent officer.

In present how he was self made and respected person, fair, with principal and all social decency.

With past tit bit you justified his loyalty, gratitude towards shahzade. Still there is much in his past which will be helpful in future. He chooses to leave in Aidabad.

Amazingly blending his two sides as you told two men met at cannel.

Thank you darling! I'm glad both his personalities have appealed to you..

Duty and destiny

Absolutely well planned and without any force or hurt he wants to complete his misson with simple mingling of men of both party. Chachajan played excellent roll.

Yes at least in this case, he wants to avoid force of any sort.. 😉

He investigated about Farman and other way round saw his ability and power. That stay make them aware of many things about their life and touch their heart.

Yes☺️

He keep eyeing and protect her as part of duty but destiny played cupid and her hazels leave its effect but before bring them face to face they connected by his duty and she effects him with her goodness.

For her he becomes light as when she needs or miss durga his presence lightens her stress.

Yes for her, his presence lightens her stress... for him, its the other way around... but there's no escape!

He wants to protect her in spite of all danger lurking over them . He doesn't afraid or bothered about his life but want to keep her safe and alive.

How he will balance between duty and heart.

Tough it will be

Setting score

Amk known everything about her then got jolt and taken back by her partially eye sight .

Now you prepare back ground to jolting her which will be too painful but I trust you.

Hmmm

For each other

Known as heiress-----duty-----wants to protect (precious) -----hillers of his wound

Stranger--- familiar and known------ known stranger ----- protector of her life.

Yes... ❤️

I like ganjifa game which open many cards and pattern of their life .

thank you😳

Amk

An orphan abused child with extra ordinary talent to learn. He is a Skilled, brave warrior, intelligent, capable of influence any matter , keen observer and protector. His loyalty , decency , protectiveness and skill make him Trusted and close loyal who cannot fear his master but respect and grateful to him.

He don't explain about shahiba's beauty, he postponed to inform about scroll up to clear his mind.

I loved this paragraph a lottt Mitu.. the way you've described him... especially the underlined!

Shahzade

Cunning, strict religion follower , he wants his man to be decent, shrewd, intelligent ,brave, use diplomacy to handle his needed man, can get things by hook and crook , can be cruel , save khalil for his benefits, don't keep blind faith , mark changes in ustad and get suspected. His principal, truthfulness and skill and some other thing make fearful from ustad. I am waiting to see who will asthin ka shap for Amk.

Again spot on⭐️

Amk and Shahzade

Both are equally intelligent ,brave, skilled warrior, can use sham, dam, dund, but shahzade is too cunning can use man in any way , can't bare defeat. Both can play mind game but Amk can use a small loophole as his victory point.

So, this tom and jerry fight will be so interesting to read.

Yes... its a match of equals... not in position..but in intelligence, for sure!

Khalil

He is become vicious snake for Amk.

>>>

Mahender

He is a Selfish, greedy, foolish to believe at khalil.

proud of long site of leader Durga bai who didn't share info about farman with him..

Soon Amk will know about him. I am waiting for when he served batter.

Hee hee... it will all happen with time... 😉

return to home

khan shahib got relaxation as shahiba is there where he left for capital with the thought they will leave. He got a pleasant sight that bahadur with shahiba. He was not able to hold himself to answer shahiba 's greeting.

After called by his master he stood by shahiba it's too significant that Heera earn it by care and cure and Amk not only accept his defeat but didn't got annoyed by her giggle.

He can never be annoyed by her, can he?😳

How bahadur return to heera to saw his gratitude and how much I loved those last line which you write as his thought for change in his master.

Thanks a lot!

Shahiba feel welcome to him and brightness and liveliness because mere presence of this reserved man.

When she convince bahadur to go back as like she pour her heart that she miss him . She don't want to annoyed him.so, one way she start carring for him.

Of course, she does!

Here AMK got Ibrahim like HEERA had gauri . he understand amk well and got suspicious why he hide the information and feel relax as praganavasi didn't left when their purposed served.

Yes...

Thanks so much Mitu... thanks a lot for this.. means so much 🤗

Originally posted by: lashy

Glad you liked the brekkie, Adwi and Harshu😛

@ Chellam... Good morning to you too... so how did today's interview go? 😉

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Haikus:

Good morning in the woods

Day has started with breakfast

Poha and coffee

Akbar emoted

Through verses of Sandya

Poem very touching

Kausi first as usual

Adwi's unique three degrees

Divya with her take five

Bindu regular

Shruti ,Suganya, Akanksha

And many others

Lashy writes a story

To little Baby, Babloo

And the old grandma!

Karkuzhali.

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Haikus:

Good morning in the woods

Day has started with breakfast

Poha and coffee

Akbar emoted

Through verses of Sandya

Poem very touching

Kausi first as usual

Adwi's unique three degrees

Divya with her take five

Bindu regular

Shruti ,Suganya, Akanksha

And many others

Lashy writes a story

To little Baby, Babloo

And the old grandma!

Karkuzhali.