NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~Thread 11 - Chapter 16 - UPD 22nd SEP - Page 33

Originally posted by: durgeshnandini

For all the above, this is for you, Akanksha👏👏👏

Thank you adwitiya . 😳 your review is stupendous. Keep it up. Simply marvelous. ⭐️ ⭐️

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

But then, when did God ever make it easy for his best men?

This one sentence Lashy , that ONE sentence touched me so so much - that I couldn't get it out of my heart since the moment I read it !! Indeed you are Master of putting words in a way that touches ppl to the core 👏 👏 Come to think of it , it's COMPLETELY TRUE in all era's ... For example take our real national heroes from God Ram to Akbar , Maharana Pratap , Rani Mangamma , Rani Lakshmi Bai , Vivekananda , Subhashchandra Bose and lot more !! They all have been great men and women , but was GREAT due to the fact how they faced the tragedies and emerged REAL HEROES from that circumstances!

Sorry I think , I m lil off topic from discussing about chap ... But really , the truth is that this is what makes a story ETCHED to heart , it's way of Description & writer-e-khaas u always excel in it 👏
Take a bow from me Lashy Di 🤗 Well about the story's progress , i was reminded of the same line u wrote in prologue , A lone flower blossoming in steepest of cliffs , a rare but unique phenomenon that describes existence of some Supreme force that manages to change the pattern drawn by man only to be overwrote by Destiny 😳 I m curious , dead curious to know how the story is gonna shape and I m even more curious to know whether we can get every update weekly !! 😉

Update soon dear Lashy Di 😉 😆

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A

I've travelled on paths,full of danger and threats

Never cared for what it cost

A life of hazards, with no regrets

At what was gained or lost

To serve a prince,in whom I saw

A mentor wise,whom I could respect

Who saw in me, talents raw

Oh! How could I ever forget

The man who helped me, when I was thrown

Who picked me up from my plight

When I was disowned, by those of my own

He made me a winner quite

I've made it my law, to follow him

In morals and in steel

To help his cause, good or grim

Stand by him in every ordeal

Reconciled I was, to my status quo

To my life of grey and blue

Until I was touched, and surprisingly so

By the magic that was you.

My initial tryst,with feelings tender

When I looked into your hazel eyes

Against my will, how could you render

My heart, beyond advice

You made me feel, a thousand bliss

By your simple words and smile

You made me see, what in life I've missed

Things that make life worthwhile

Perfection was what, in you I saw

Your presence was sunshine zone

Your ethereal nature, inspired awe

You stirred in me feelings inknown

The rocks that weapons, couldn't crack

Your tender roots have split

And placed me at crossroads, with no fallback

I am bewildered I admit

I tried to fight, your binding spell

With every ounce of my might

For reasons grave, I dare not tell

Causes I cannot slight

Misfortunes mine, or a trial divine,

You are whom my master needs

To fulfill his political design

You lose and he succeeds

With faith he has, entrusted in me

To bring about your fall

I cannot betray him by any degree

Nor can I hurt you at all

Could I allow, a dent in loyalty

Could I disregard his commands

Could I write, your death penalty

With my own wretched hands

Your smiles and grace, I cannot let fade

I cannot let harm touch you

I'll protect you from every, evil game played

To the prince too, I want to be true!

Ya Khuda! Give me, the strength to face

The toughest choice of my life

To help me decide, with your infinite grace

To stand by the right in this strife.

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A

Bad Bad Lashy!😡 She has shifted all focus from my sweet Heera to UAMK.😡

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

@Sandhya di