NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~Thread 10 - Chapter 15 - UPD 11th SEP - Page 87

Originally posted by: melovesja

Congratulations bindu for turning goldi😊

Originally posted by: melovesja

Good morning Banjaras😊

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

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Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Good Morning Periamma, Miti, BinduP, Shruti and all other late comers😉 🤗

I was thrilled to know how he is connecting to shazade and at revelation I was in aww . With this dhamaka update you gave twisted turn to story and full space for Amk 😊 to grow and justified his planning and accurate execution to save her . I am feeling proud to be connecting with HBS and about your writing. Salute to your way of thinking and planning story line.⭐️ How deliberately you bring him out crystal clear like louts in the mud. 👏 You keep my trust as man with no dirty hands in Durga bai's matter.

His gray shad - 12 year old pure soul + under patronage of shahzade = loyal intelligent officer.

I loved that instead of confusing us as suspense story it turns as thriller. Curiosity becomes excitement and attraction change into magnetic pull. 😳

Successfully create and keep suspense like you done for mahender. Cleverly gave hidden clues and smartly cover up .word with line and line with scan very well.

you wrote he felt guilt and many other unknown feelings.

One person ,two personality

At first you saw his quality as ustad then kabil businessman and his talent as intelligent officer.

In present how he was self made and respected person, fair, with principal and all social decency.

With past tit bit you justified his loyalty, gratitude towards shahzade. Still there is much in his past which will be helpful in future. He chooses to leave in Aidabad.

Amazingly blending his two sides as you told two men met at cannel.

Duty and destiny

Absolutely well planned and without any force or hurt he wants to complete his misson with simple mingling of men of both party. Chachajan played excellent roll.

He investigated about Farman and other way round saw his ability and power. That stay make them aware of many things about their life and touch their heart.

He keep eyeing and protect her as part of duty but destiny played cupid and her hazels leave its effect but before bring them face to face they connected by his duty and she effects him with her goodness.

For her he becomes light as when she needs or miss durga his presence lightens her stress.

He wants to protect her in spite of all danger lurking over them . He doesn't afraid or bothered about his life but want to keep her safe and alive.

How he will balance between duty and heart.

Setting score

Amk known everything about her then got jolt and taken back by her partially eye sight .

Now you prepare back ground to jolting her which will be too painful but I trust you.

For each other

Known as heiress-----duty-----wants to protect (precious) -----hillers of his wound

Stranger--- familiar and known------ known stranger ----- protector of her life.

I like ganjifa game which open many cards and pattern of their life .

Amk

An orphan abused child with extra ordinary talent to learn. He is a Skilled, brave warrior, intelligent, capable of influence any matter , keen observer and protector. His loyalty , decency , protectiveness and skill make him Trusted and close loyal who cannot fear his master but respect and grateful to him.

He don't explain about shahiba's beauty, he postponed to inform about scroll up to clear his mind.

Shahzade

Cunning, strict religion follower , he wants his man to be decent, shrewd, intelligent ,brave, use diplomacy to handle his needed man, can get things by hook and crook , can be cruel , save khalil for his benefits, don't keep blind faith , mark changes in ustad and get suspected. His principal, truthfulness and skill and some other thing make fearful from ustad. I am waiting to see who will asthin ka shap for Amk.

Amk and Shahzade

Both are equally intelligent ,brave, skilled warrior, can use sham, dam, dund, but shahzade is too cunning can use man in any way , can't bare defeat. Both can play mind game but Amk can use a small loophole as his victory point.

So, this tom and jerry fight will be so interesting to read.

Khalil

He is become vicious snake for Amk.

Mahender

He is a Selfish, greedy, foolish to believe at khalil.

proud of long site of leader Durga bai who didn't share info about farman with him..

Soon Amk will know about him. I am waiting for when he served batter.

return to home

khan shahib got relaxation as shahiba is there where he left for capital with the thought they will leave. He got a pleasant sight that bahadur with shahiba. He was not able to hold himself to answer shahiba 's greeting.

After called by his master he stood by shahiba it's too significant that Heera earn it by care and cure and Amk not only accept his defeat but didn't got annoyed by her giggle.

How bahadur return to heera to saw his gratitude and how much I loved those last line which you write as his thought for change in his master.

Shahiba feel welcome to him and brightness and liveliness because mere presence of this reserved man.

When she convince bahadur to go back as like she pour her heart that she miss him . She don't want to annoyed him.so, one way she start carring for him.

Here AMK got Ibrahim like HEERA had gauri . he understand amk well and got suspicious why he hide the information and feel relax as praganavasi didn't left when their purposed served.

Originally posted by: harshu27

Good morng everyone😛

Originally posted by: Kuki715

Good morning Harshu di😊

Kal di,thankyou for tea😃,but I just had milk😆