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Posted: 9 years ago

Oh Kausi dear ,
Tst.tst.. don't cry chellam.. If you don't stop crying, I will also start crying..


no worries.. I'll start my service from tomorrow..

Periyamma.





QUOTE=Kalgi22]OMG I don't know where to start! So much beautiful reviews. OMG! 😲
Okay elders first!

Periya Periamma: You are such a darling and the conversation you posted today was amazing! 🤗 But Periamma.. nowadays no delicious food for us?😭


Sinna Periamma: You're a starred critics. ⭐️⭐️ and always encourage young critics too in your own way. Loved it Periamma. But do take care! 🤗


SandhyaImage result for sherlock holmes emoticon: OMG! What an analysis you've posted. I'm still awe..


Diviya: The take 5 master! ⭐️⭐️ and the charmer! 😳


Soumiya: What a beautiful review! 😳


Adwitiya: I'm falling for your style of writing. Love you darling! 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Good Morning Banjaras and Baisas... 🤗
Chellam, I've been missing waking up to Periyamma's brekkies too... 🤔
but everyone needs a break from the kitchen... so she let me take over for just this one day...
and Lashy makes the only breakfast she knows ... Jump in girls... 😛

Image result for toast with butter
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


Oh Kausi dear ,
Tst.tst.. don't cry chellam.. If you don't stop crying, I will also start crying..


no worries.. I'll start my service from tomorrow..

Periyamma.



Awww Periamma 🤗

<-- It's me!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello Soumya di,
Thanks to Lashy di's humongous threads, pages rushing off in no time, I don't think I have ever read your comments properly... so this time around I have managed to spot it😉... to cut down the length, I have included only those portions of your review which amazed me the mostand as to why I was amazed... well... I can't remember if I've come across such a blend of simplicity, making-it-to-the-point precision, and most importantly, such matter of fact conjectures!! 👏👏

You're amazing ⭐️

Originally posted by: baubles


I had been right about the Ustaad the very first day and you made me edit that comment. I felt guilty for three whole days only because I had mistaken AKBAR's character and when I started reading this chapter and I saw that word Ustaad again, I felt terrible all over again. I'll never forget your How could you mistake Akbar' with the crying emo that you sent me. So basically, I'm on Cloud 93784587953 now!🥳

So, now that I'm mighty proud of myself for being right about MY AKBAR, let me tell you why I had assumed it the other day.

1. After all, this visitor was a man who knew more about weapons and warfare than all of his other generals put together. Serving on the battlefield until 2 years ago, this man's loyalty and expertise had been put to even better use ever since. He was now an appointed mentor, an 'Ustaad' - who recruited fresh trainees and coached them into becoming the fearsome warriors that the Shehzade's powerful army needed. A master of many arts and yet a man of few words, Ustaad reserved his compliments for the absolute best.

This kind of described a lot..the best knowledge of weapons, the kind of respect even even the Shehzade had for him, how highly he spoke of him and ofcourse- man of few words. These bits made me actually decide it was Akbar.


2. 'I'll sniff out the younger heiress... wherever she's hiding... and have that wretched lady delivered at your fee...' Suddenly, it came to a halt - both, his claims, and the hair-raising speed at which his battle-axe was descending down to toy with his next scapegoat's neck.

The immediate reaction at the mention of Heera and what he intended to do with her, he didn't even let him finish his line. Though Heera and Akbar were definitely not in a space they are now, she had struck him in a different since first sight, and his respect for her was never absent. He didn't react to Durga in the way he did once the younger heiress' was mentioned.

And ofcourse, his skill and expertise when he stopped Khalil.

So these lines made me conclude it was Akbar and trust me, I didn't even think there was another option. If I had had a doubt I wouldn't have commented so confidently.😆

I think what confused you in that comment was that I kept interchanging Ustaad' and 'Akbar' apne marzi se cos I had assumed them to be the same person.😆 Anyway, I ended up editing it completely and I'm not trusting you with HBS doubts again.😳

So, coming to this chapter, I wasn't that surprised about this Ustaad being Akbar..I had a 2 second reaction of just Oh Great!'. So the Shehzaade thought he would win a card game round with Mr. Perfecto...crazy I tell you! Where the Shehzaade tried to cheat, our guy notices intricate patters on the card..wins the game fair and square. So proud of him!😎

When I read the Shehzaade being a staunch follower of Islam, the first thought I had was What rubbish!' for the same reason Akbar asked about later. Islam doesn't support brutal killing and snatching a woman's dignity, which his most trusted man had done and gotten away with. (Akbar and I think so alike na). 😳The fact that he doesn't take pride in having mentored a monster like Khaial, however good a soldier he might be, says a lot about him.

How guarded is he of his Harka?! Over the last two weeks, he had noticed so many minute details about her and her character, with every meeting. Yet he doesn't reveal any of them to the Shehzaade. Ofcourse she caught him off- guard, that's how she is..one of a kind! The importance this assignment holds for him now as compared to when he was just starting off..such a vast difference! For the first time, someone had come between him and his duty.

He has somewhere deep down grown to care for this lady, protect her even though that's not what he's there for, keep her secrets as safe as he can and it's because of the kind of person she is..dignified, skilled,kind and strong. ❤️

He's definitely not letting this assignment out of his hands, and most definitely not to Khalil's men.😡


So the Shehzaade has done a lot for Akbar, the 13 year old tortured boy. Something makes me feel Akbar does all his work and is even ready to lay down his life for this man, more because he's indebted to him for everything he's made him into(though a lot of it is his will to learn, there's only so much that can be taught) and not because he actually looks up to him or has that kind of high regard for him. And here is another thing I'm proud of Akbar for..being in the Shehzaade's sangat for so long, he's turned out to be a much much better person who can differentiate between right and wrong and does what's right. He values people and lives. He has his heart in the right place.⭐️❤️ I pity that painter.


Now coming to the unusual but appealing spectacle, you can't imagine how much I've wanted this! After Akbar- Bahadur, Akbar- Heera..how could Heera- Bahadur be left behind- The most adorable family! I can't even come to describe the scene. Bahadur and Heera absolutely enjoying each other's company, the affectionate petting , the treats from his new-found friend, the comfort level between the two..it was endearing.❤️❤️❤️❤️


Heera's silent Welcome Back' was so So he was in the get up your pic has..Her thoughts on having him back there made me go crazy..he breathed in life into the place!

And the greetings...well, he can't ignore her however much he tries na😆


And for the last paragraph, Bahadur has become my jigar ka tukda...his gratitude and love for his friend and his master respectively..he's the best pet ever!!!❤️

Seriously, the word count died because my comment wasn't ending😆 Wonderful wonderful chapter di!!!! You've made me the happiesttt person ever after this! I was right about AKBAR and ab mera jeevan dhanya ho gaya❤️

Cyaaa soon..love ya loads and loads!!!🤗


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

Good Morning Banjaras and Baisas... 🤗

Chellam, I've been missing waking up to Periyamma's brekkies too... 🤔
but everyone needs a break from the kitchen... so she let me take over for just this one day...
and Lashy makes the only breakfast she knows ... Jump in girls... 😛

Image result for toast with butter

😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

Good Morning Banjaras and Baisas... 🤗

Chellam, I've been missing waking up to Periyamma's brekkies too... 🤔
but everyone needs a break from the kitchen... so she let me take over for just this one day...
and Lashy makes the only breakfast she knows ... Jump in girls... 😛

Image result for toast with butter

Good noon lashy sahiba 🤗dis toasted bread with butter too looks yummy and tempting😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Awww Periamma 🤗

<-- It's me!!

Wah!! Shining teeth, which toothpaste do you use?!😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
lashy Di
what a chapter
thank you for giving me mimi heart attack
can you imagine after reading chapter I am not able to sleep whole night and wake up with little headache
I am hurt to know that
one thing now I keep in my mind that never trust any characters of this novel and of course you also
everybody has some grey shades
oh I forget only one person left who is positive from heera side which is maharaja chitaranjan
heera guardian I am not surprise if you made him also negative
OK I am not saying that our Khan sahib is negative
he is what he is from the beginning
when I read that heera remark I am blind, partially blind
god I am so shock , after reading that part,
I am not able to read further, I read that part twice if I read something wrong but no that is true
Khan sahib is shehzaade ustaad
I never thought that
so everything is plan not coincidence
he is spy of shehzaade
he is keep an eye in every single movement of heera and her people
he is the one who don't let heera letter to reach their destination
he search heera and her people belonging also
how come nobody know that
but he don't tell everything to shehzaade which prove he attracted towards her
he don't want to hurt her
so shehzaade did lot for him which he don't forget
he help khan sahib when he needed most
so he own lot from him
now I think khan sahib never betray him
and top of that shehzaade keep remanding him , what he did for him
is very difficult for khan sahib to chose between heera and shehzaade
dangerous situation for him ,shehzaade don't think twice to destroy him
he observe Khan sahib little distraction is very dangerous for him but he cover up
shehzaade is so cunning and of course smart also no doubt in that
I really like their cards game
both smart enough
shehzaade playing some mind game there to distract khan sahib
and mahendra what kind of person he
such a disgusting person
he was the one who give every single detail about durga
now he is blaming her to not to trust me
I like tej raj
at least he know what is wrong and what is right
he appreciate durga deed
you know what Di after reading first part I am not able to enjoy delightful last part
Khan sahib is relief after seeing heera there
Ibrahim observe khan sahib
Ibrahim is little taken a back when he know khan sahib don't tell shehzaade about sending letters
just like master his pet also attracted toward heera in just few days
why not after all heera gesture melt everybody heart
heera she so much attracted toward khan sahib
how beautifully she compare him with man of the house
so sweetly she welcome him in her own way
aww Khan sahib is little jealous to see bonding between bahadur and heera
bahadur antics made heera giggle also
I like the most heera whispering in bahadur ear
how sweetly she pacify bahadur
and bahadur he is so sweet
now I am afraid for heera how she react when she know everything about khan sahib and of course mahendra deed also
poor soul she is going through lot already
why can't everybody leave her peacefully
now I am so curious to know how their love blossom in this dangerous situation
it was very difficult for both to chose each other
lashy Di I really really appreciate your talent, you did lot of research for this novel
how much hard work you did for to know about ganjifa cards and all other things
we are honor to read your precious work
and l read everybody review
I must say everybody here is so talented in their own way
how beautifully everybody describe
and some people are so smart also who guess about khan sahib
thank you so much for sharing this master piece

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Posted: 9 years ago
@ Durgeshnandini.. What spot on lines about Soumya's review. ❤️ ❤️ Just cannot ever get enough of her words. (Sojji you can officially faint now 😉 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

Good Morning Banjaras and Baisas... 🤗

Chellam, I've been missing waking up to Periyamma's brekkies too... 🤔
but everyone needs a break from the kitchen... so she let me take over for just this one day...
and Lashy makes the only breakfast she knows ... Jump in girls... 😛

Image result for toast with butter

😆

Good morning 🤗

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