Untold Secrets!!! Uptd Chap 11 Pg 134 22nd Nov!!!

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@old_charm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#321

Originally posted by: harshu27

manu🤗i found it boring while writing it 😆

plzzz...😭

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harshal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#322

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

plzzz...😭

btw madam did u read chaps 2 3 ...😆

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@old_charm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#323

Originally posted by: harshu27

btw madam did u read chaps 2 3 ...😆

yes will comment today !

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harshal

@harshu27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#324

Originally posted by: Kuki715
Harshu dii scary update...

Snakes,wailing women,singing women with proper background music😲...how do the ghosts or whoever doing this,manage all this😲.But this Ahmed is a brave heart,though he was scared as hell he still was waiting for permission to leave.Had I been in his place ,I would have run far and fast without a second thought😆.Poor Ahmed was worried for his reputation in front of the king.I thought let the king spend one day here then he'll know😆.

And who is this Mahajan?And why Maharani Mahal was locked when all the other houses were open... is it significant or I am thinking too much.😕

The way you have described the haunted town,all the supernatural activities and soldiers reactions ,it was all so fear inducing...brilliant di👏👏.I'm just waiting for the day when we'll know the truth, it will be so exciting to join all the dots😉.

One question.. when the emperor is coming to to Surajgarh ,then why are the leaving isn't Surajgarh the haunted city?😕

Wonderful update...waiting for more😃

i knw dear it was haunted chap...lol ya ahmed was a brave hearted fellow he did stay der fr time being 😆but dn if he had escaped his soldiers would loose all der confidence which dey had almost lost dm...😕 so he to keep dm under control waited der and controlled his emotions...mahajan is emperor's spy...😃maharani mahal is under lock der is a mystery behind it in fact dis mysterious haunting are related to dis v mahal which u will know in few chaps soon...😃thnx alot dear...😳yeah m sure once d things r revealed u will njoy more...😳ur last question abt d emperor and i will say wait fr my next chap u will know...😳and moreover d emperor doesnt believe in paranormal activities and so he is coming to surajgarh without any fear...but dn imagine if he himself faces d same music like his generals and army did?😉will update soon...😳thnx fr ur lovely comment...😛😳

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harshal

@harshu27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#325

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

yes will comment today !

k no issues...😃

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

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Posted: 9 years ago

#326

fantastic chapter dear
and quite scary and interesting also
poor admed
he is so much scare for the first time I guess
very well written all the scenes dear
OK I think this is not ghost story right
like seriously crying, singing , beating their cheats like someone is death
everything is well planned by jalal or his friends?? I guess
lot of people involved in this matter
that's why all the incident took place in perfect timely right
admed is confuse or scare so much
but I like his attitude
he is perfect general anyone get
of course how can he go and tell everything to emperor like emperor believe him
but his all soldiers are too much scare that the ready to leave without their general permission
poor guy don't have lunch also
but when five general go and visit mahel
there was nothing happen like before
quite confusing if there was something like ghost then how can mir khan and his servant living without any fear
something was big going on to hide jodha and jalal
both have quite a good connection to help them
now they leave surajgarh right
without any information regarding jodha and jalal
this chapter is quite long one and not boring at all OK
eagerly waiting for next chapter
thanks for pm

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Avika444

@avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#327

Res

Will read and comment tomorrow pakka

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harshal

@harshu27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#328

Originally posted by: avika444
Res
Will read and comment tomorrow pakka

no worries take ur time...😛

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harshal

@harshu27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#329

Originally posted by: binduprasad41
fantastic chapter dear
and quite scary and interesting also
poor admed
he is so much scare for the first time I guess
very well written all the scenes dear
OK I think this is not ghost story right
like seriously crying, singing , beating their cheats like someone is death
everything is well planned by jalal or his friends?? I guess
lot of people involved in this matter
that's why all the incident took place in perfect timely right
admed is confuse or scare so much
but I like his attitude
he is perfect general anyone get
of course how can he go and tell everything to emperor like emperor believe him
but his all soldiers are too much scare that the ready to leave without their general permission
poor guy don't have lunch also
but when five general go and visit mahel
there was nothing happen like before
quite confusing if there was something like ghost then how can mir khan and his servant living without any fear
something was big going on to hide jodha and jalal
both have quite a good connection to help them
now they leave surajgarh right
without any information regarding jodha and jalal
this chapter is quite long one and not boring at all OK
eagerly waiting for next chapter
thanks for pm

thnx bindu...😃its mystery whether its ghost or not i cant say at present since u will not njoy d wen i give it in update...😆yeah but at present i can say few ppl r involved...😉ahmed is confused as he dint knw wat to do since if he reveals it to d soldiers dey may get more scared...😕 xactly if ghostly things were der mir khan would have been aware of it?😉😉 both have a good connection since both r helping joja...😛 soon u will know abt dm too 😳thnx once again dear will update soon...😉