Untold Secrets!!! Uptd Chap 11 Pg 134 22nd Nov!!! - Page 32

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Posted: 9 years ago
Harshu dear, wonderful chapter...frankly, now I have started enjoying it...

it feels like watching that sony tv serial, "Aahat" part 2...I remember whenever there was some suspence going on, I used to feel very excited, and later I used to laugh abt it...

but yes, now it's getting interesting...though there r few things , I m still confused...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Harshu dii scary update...

Snakes,wailing women,singing women with proper background music😲...how do the ghosts or whoever doing this,manage all this😲.But this Ahmed is a brave heart,though he was scared as hell he still was waiting for permission to leave.Had I been in his place ,I would have run far and fast without a second thought😆.Poor Ahmed was worried for his reputation in front of the king.I thought let the king spend one day here then he'll know😆.

And who is this Mahajan?And why Maharani Mahal was locked when all the other houses were open... is it significant or I am thinking too much.😕

The way you have described the haunted town,all the supernatural activities and soldiers reactions ,it was all so fear inducing...brilliant di👏👏.I'm just waiting for the day when we'll know the truth, it will be so exciting to join all the dots😉.

One question.. when the emperor is coming to to Surajgarh ,then why are the leaving isn't Surajgarh the haunted city?😕

Wonderful update...waiting for more😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
You are good at discribed scan as general cordern off that ghostly city.Mir and genreal convo was superb. Mir was nervous as jj hidden their or confuse him to buy a time but try to cover with hhis age and influence 👏 molvi too was act well. Who was that who speak but invisibly.
It's become more interesting. Thanks for pm.
Soon read ch 4
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: swetiii

loved the update diii
poor Ahmed
na bataya jaye
na chupaya jaye wale situation m phas gaya
🤣
soldiers too were shivering in fear
to their relief the king himself ordered for their departure
🤣
amazing
does this by any chance has any connection with Jalal
update asap

thnx muski...😃haan yaar ahmed poor fellow buri tarah se phas gaya...😆each chappy will lead to joja...😉😛will update soon...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha

Harshu dear, wonderful chapter...frankly, now I have started enjoying it...

it feels like watching that sony tv serial, "Aahat" part 2...I remember whenever there was some suspence going on, I used to feel very excited, and later I used to laugh abt it...

but yes, now it's getting interesting...though there r few things , I m still confused...

thnx dikshu...😃 aahat 😆i too used to love watching aahat thou i used to get scared sply aahat season 1 😆but still used to watch it wid interest...😃anywys i knw confusion will b der... but slowly it will b cleared after may b few chaps...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: durgeshnandini

So here is chapter 4... and it's Spookiness Unlimited! ⭐️


The networks of Surajgarh provide free talk time and doesn't cost any roaming charges for the spooky inhabitants( so lucky to become a ghost in Surajgarh!) Hence they prance around merrily, following the poor Ahmed, chasing him down along with his troops... singing in secluded shelters, moping around the palace chambers, creating such a royal mess out of the Royal Army Chieftain... nah! This network provider has complete coverage of the area, the tower facilities are too good! 😉


The wonders don't end there, for not only the inhabitants are spooky, the animals are as well, wonder if they too died for better network connections 😉

The general managed to unsheathe the sword and in a blink of an eye the snake had vanished into thin air. 😉

Dunno, if this Ahmed dude, is a friend or foe, but I enjoyed the fix he was in😆
So this Ahmed saab(not referring to vest clad Regal Infra MD 😉) rushes about searching for the Shehzaade, amid a heap of dilapidated housing blocks... looks for clues and clashes into ghosts... and the Shahi order just saves his neck from sure death, and the army retreats, yet as the

Damocles sword was dangling at the very Mughal Empire, but where was Shehzaada Jalal?

It also remains a doubt, whether the place really abounds in paranormal activities, or are these actions taken by human hands, just to keep out intruders and investigators?!

Omar Khan and Amar Singh are preparing to march for Delhi.

In case, I have missed out, who are they? The Emperor's Hindu Generals?


The incident and the mysterious elements are well captured and retained so far, let's see how the spool of yarn unwinds itself 😉,by your story telling, of course!


Thanks for this longish update and pm.
Update soon! 😊
Wishing you and your family, a happy Durga puja and Navratri 🤗


Adwitiya.

thnx alot adwi...😳1st while reading ur 1st para i was wondering wat netwrk r u talking abt...😆yeah d ghosts r too good in communications 😆since its der own netwk nt d man made one...🤣Ahmed frnd or foe ... hmmm let me think...😕😆seems u and lashy r asking d same kosthen whether dese r man made or truly supernatural activities hmmm fr dat u will have to remain thru out dis ff...may b in few chaps d things should get clear 😉 actually Omar khan is another general of emperor and Amar singh is a rajput prince both r in support of jalal and so dey r fighting from jalal's side...😃anywys ur welcum dear and wish u d same...🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
how could you call it boring...😡
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: harshu27


thnx muski...😃haan yaar ahmed poor fellow buri tarah se phas gaya...😆each chappy will lead to joja...😉😛will update soon...😳



joja
woah
does that mean they are together 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: swetiii



joja
woah
does that mean they are together 😳

yeah...😳😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

how could you call it boring...😡

manu🤗i found it boring while writing it 😆

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