Tera Rastaa Chodo Na Akdha story

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Posted: 9 years ago
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WOW Congrats Ana🥳
New story😃

Jalal hit Jodha and runs somewhere after she comes to senses
Very curious to know why..
Continue soon

Edited by Rahiramesh - 9 years ago
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I'll start the story from the prologue

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She gently flutters open her eyes, adjusting her eyes to the light in her surrounding; slowly all the images become clear and clearer, that is when she realizes that she is in a hospital. Her head throbbed with pain due to the injury. She for moment thought that her head would burst because of the pain. She turns around and sees him sitting on the stool. His eyes bloodshot giving a clear indication that he had not slept during the night, the guilt in his orbs just made her realize and recall yesterday's night's incident. As, soon he sees her awake he leaves her to her thoughts. She knew him well, He was not this kind. Then what was wrong with him. He usually never drank, only on occasions. been changing. Now he has changed to such an extent that at times she feels like someone else has either possessed his body or he was never that Jalal whom she fell for. He had been drinking more and more, but that's not all. She had talked to psychiatrist asking whether he was depressed but her answer was negative. His behaviour seemed to be getting weird and weirder day by day. She knows Ammi was all he had before her; she took care for him, after his father left his Ammi for some other woman. She knew this incident had affected him to the core, but he barely spoke about it. He always said to her, that he would never like to discuss about this incident, with anyone including her. So she often kept mum on this issue. They had a love marriage, a perfect life, till few days back. It was just a year they were married. Everything seemed to be slipping from her hands. He either would be happy at times or totally melancholic these days. He had over engaged himself in his work, daily taking new projects and when he came back at late night, he was either drunk or he wanted to make love. She did not refuse the love- making sessions but he was too harsh, and he did not realize it. He had become extremely hyper-active. He everyday had a millions of new idea, for his projects or he would be taking so many new projects. He was talking too fast and most of the things he talked did not make sense. When he was working these day even a little sound he gets distracted, earlier in loud noise also he concentrated well. He barely slept these days, and ironically he did not even feel tired, and this was not all there were other tales, she did not want to think about it. Her head ached with pain. Yesterday was heights, he had come home with a newly bought wine bottle, and she was already enough pissed off by his behaviour. She had said him- Jalal please, could you tell me what's wrong? I'm worried. She did not what, why how but probably, she had triggered something inside, he was furious, he shouted back at her- Jodha just shut up. Could you why do you always need to bark? The word bark made her ferocious- What wow Jalal I bark, right, and then what are you doing right? He said- Please for God sake Jodha shut up, before I hit you, and he picked up the fine bottle. She shouted back at him- I won't Jalal, first tell me what's wrong with you? She came near him and cupped his face and said controlling her tears- Jalal I also miss Ammi, as much as you do, she is the person who gave me mothers love, but what will happen Jalal when Ammi sees you like this. Please baby don't do this to yourself. He pushed her off and shouted- You won't understand, Jo. She came near him, he said- Don't come near me Jo, I'll hit you; I swear I'll hit you. Don't do this Jo. I just don't want to hurt you. Jodha replies- I know you won't hurt me Jalal and she proceeds towards. She does not know what happened. Jalal hits the bottle on her head, it all just happened in a flick of second , she could just feel an unbearable pain in her head, she touches her head with her hand, it was fully coloured red with her blood, and she passed out . And she got up this morning in the hospital. Her life had suddenly taken a weird turn. Her loving Jalal had turned into someone whom she did not recognize. Slowly she began to fear him, not that he would hurt her again, that he would hurt himself. Her chain of thoughts is broken by nurse. She says- how are you Ma'am? Jodha puts up a fake smile and says- I'm better, thank you. Jodha takes her phone and tries calling Jalal, but the phone was switched off, and she was getting worried. She calls Maan her cousin, he picks up the phone she asks him to come to the hospital, he sounded worried, and she said she will explain everything later. He comes and picks her up; the doctor was reluctant to let Jodha go as she had still not recovered, but she creates a ruckus and leaves with Maan. She explains everything to Maan, and he gets angry on Jalal for ill-treating his sister. Jodha had to do a lot pacifying, to calm Maan down, and she told him the whole story of Jalal's odd behaviour. He also found his behaviour odd. Finally after a lot of discussion, finally Maan asked- Jiji where should we find him? Jodha replied-Ammi's house. Maan asks- Are you sure? but since Ammi died half a month ago he has, he has not gone there since Ammi's death. Jodha says- cent percent sure. And they head towards Ammi's house.

Promo- Malum nahi

No proof reading done. I don't know what have I written, I promise the next shot will be better. And I'm going to keep the shots short, minimum 1000 words. So if u liked d update, plz hit the like button and cmnt if u liked it, criticism is also welcomed. Thanks, for reading, love Ana.

Edited by ....Anabella... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for the new story... will wait for the update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congrats dear for new story
of course you should continue but we want update regular if not possible then try in twice a week, if also then in months at least give 2 updates.
wonderful prologue...
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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woah
different & interesting
update asap dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congrats for new story anna
nice prologue
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for new story
Interesting prologue
Jalal hit Jo 😲 but why
Update first part soon
Thanks for pm
Edited by cute.ritu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Concept seems different.. so plz continue, Ana.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Waiting dear
Update soon
Thanks for pm

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